Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 109 108. Comments on "Meteor Chasing the Moon"

The book I want to recommend today is written by the same author as the previous one.

It can be considered as fulfilling the promise made last year!
"Meteor Chasing the Moon", author: Uneducated Dog.

Category: Martial Arts - Traditional Martial Arts.

【Introduction】

In the distant Uighur country, a young boy named Batur met an unreasonable Han girl. Although they only met briefly, her shadow left a mark in his heart.

Will they be able to meet again in the future? Where will fate take them?
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Chapter One: Amir, the youngest warrior in white, is a master of bows and arrows. While out hunting, he encounters a young woman in white surrounded by villagers. The young woman doesn't speak Hui language, so the protagonist tries to communicate with her on behalf of the villagers, only to find she's unruly and unreasonable.

Chapter Two: A sharp edge in the verdant forest. The girl lets go of the person and prepares to leave, but the protagonist demands to take her to the authorities. The protagonist chases the girl into the forest, shooting several arrows at her, forcing her to draw her sword. Protagonist, if you didn't have your aura, you'd be dead long ago.

Chapter 3: Meteor Gold Fire is nearly killed. The protagonist and the girl engage in a fierce battle, but their longbow is broken by the girl's flaming meteor hammer, and their dagger is ineffective against them. The girl then beats them around. At this moment, the protagonist lies down and listens, sensing sixteen horses approaching.

Chapter 4: Sharing a common hatred and supporting each other. When bandits attacked, the two stopped fighting and returned to the town to report the news. However, the martial Hui people were unwilling to leave and instead prepared to fight the bandits together.

Chapter 5: A newborn calf is hard to guard against. The girl decides to stay with the town and fight the bandits, taking the initiative to take the lead. The defense is well-organized. The protagonist and the girl work together to set a tripwire that successfully overturns the bandits' horses.

Chapter 6: United in purpose, they battle the powerful. A young girl single-handedly confronts the bandit leader, employing a variety of tactics. The protagonist aids the townspeople in slaughtering several of them. The townspeople, aided by the girl's defense and their extraordinary bravery, defeat the aggressive bandits. Just as the bandit leader is about to escape, the girl suddenly blows her whistle.

Chapter 7: A white eagle and a golden hammer fly against each other. A white eagle responds, charging straight at the bandit leader and unexpectedly pulling him off his horse. The girl rides in pursuit, her meteor hammer proving effective once again, dragging the bandit leader to death. The townspeople celebrate their victory, and the girl feasts heartily. Haha, nice arms!
Chapter 8: Parting with a Reluctant Heart. After a satisfying meal and a few drinks, the young woman prepares to depart. The protagonist, ordered by the elders, escorts her twenty miles. The two chat heartily, feeling a sense of reluctance to part. After exchanging gifts, they finally part ways. I wonder if this farewell is permanent, haha~
Chapter 9: Gossips and self-deception. The protagonist returns home, where his family notices something is going on. A military officer arrives, saying the General of the Eastern Expedition has invited the protagonist to the barracks to reward him for his service in defending the town. Upon returning home, his mother and sister, upon hearing what happened, offer another quip: "You're in love, aren't you?"

Chapter 10: Suddenly, overnight, he changes into military uniform. The protagonist is summoned to the barracks, earns a promotion to the general's personal guard within six months, and acquires property. His family is naturally overjoyed. However, a subtle sadness lingers within him, and the girl in white plants a seed in his heart.

【Brief Comment】

The dog is my good friend (I think so).

He particularly loves martial arts novels, and he himself is a martial artist like Jiumozhi, proficient in swords, guns, sticks, axes, knives and forks.

The most valuable thing is that traditional martial arts novels are also written in an extraordinary way.

After a trial reading, I found that this book is more colloquial than his previous one, and therefore easier to understand, perhaps to cater to the market.

However, it seems that the expected effect has not been achieved yet.

The author is particularly good at describing fights in detail.

The martial arts moves, weapon settings, character personalities, and story lines all have wisdom far beyond that of ordinary authors.

Don't be fooled by the author's name, he is actually very good at playing the piano, chess, calligraphy, painting, dancing and music, and his skills in picking up girls are also very good.

I still remember when we were fighting in the exhibition circle, his high-quality posts made me dizzy and I could only sigh in despair.

On this beautiful day, I'm writing a small book review for Gouzi, hoping to help him get over 100 orders for his next book. Haha~
As a result, he was killed by my milk.

No new works have been seen.

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I am Cang Yiwei, and I am here to speak for myself!

[Cang's Ramblings] Comparing his two books, we can see that he chose a more vernacular writing style, the language is more down-to-earth, the plot twists and turns are accompanied by delicate daily life, and the update speed is also very stable.

All in all, logically speaking, the results should be better than the previous one.

In fact, there are not many, and even the recommended positions are relatively few.

At that time, I didn't ask him what exactly caused this result.

Now that I think about it carefully, combined with some articles I have read before, I have arbitrarily summarized some small experiences.

When new writers start writing, they often get excited and start writing without a complete outline.

This will result in a disorganized story structure, chaotic rhythm, disordered updates, chaotic mood, and a really bad ending.

Some people would say that I just want to let my wild inspiration run wild and don’t want to be constrained by a small framework.

At present, the only well-known author who can write a book without an outline is the great writer Santianliangjue.

They are developing in multiple fields and have many side jobs, so they don't have to work hard on online literature.

He has a wide range of interests, a unique writing style, and his storylines are more exciting and agile than his imagination.

His style can't be imitated by others!

In addition, many books written by new writers have rather bland stories, or the writers write them in a very exciting way, but the readers cannot feel it, commonly known as self-entertainment.

The result of writing in this way is that you move yourself and fulfill yourself.

From a business perspective, it was a failure.

From the perspective of personal dreams, the moment I dared to publish a book, my dream had already come true.

There are also some people who have serious humanistic problems. They like to nitpick and use gorgeous words to create a beautiful environment and psychology.

Why is being a hipster considered a problem? Is it bad to be a bit literary? Isn't it okay to flaunt your culture?

of course can!

There is a big difference between traditional literature and online literature.

Online literature pays more attention to the delivery of exciting points and the fast pace.

When readers are attracted by your beautiful words, they will suddenly realize, why not buy a collection of essays?

When reading online novels, many people care about the exciting plot and perfect story, but what about the text?
It’s not that important!
Therefore, many people will advise newcomers not to pay too much attention to the writing style, and that a good plot and setting are more important.

Magical ideas often bring unexpected surprises.

For example, the novels I recently read, "I Guarantee with My Demonic Nature" and "The Weeds with Cheats", which tell the stories of snake cultivators and grass cultivators, are more attractive than ordinary traditional fantasy novels.

Having said all this, my dear author friends, how many arrows have hit your knees?
Look at me!
Borrowing arrows from a straw boat, I am the straw boat!

(End of this chapter)