Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 194 193. Comments on "The Eternal Kingdom"

Today I would like to recommend to you a fantasy work of 630 million words.

"The Eternal Kingdom", author: Lonely Drifting, level 5 author.

Category: Xianxia-Mythical Cultivation.

【Introduction】

In the early morning, a natural disaster struck.

The laws of nature have changed, the desires and obsessions of all spirits are filling the world, the laws of nature cannot bear it, evil thoughts are rampant, the thoughts of all living beings have evolved into a fantasy world, evil thoughts, good thoughts, obsessions, and desires are entangled endlessly, the laws of nature cannot bear it, it has reached its limit, when it reaches the extreme, it changes, fantasy descends, all realms merge, all things in the frosty sky compete for freedom.

This marks the beginning of a new era, a period of destruction and also a rebirth.

This era is the Eternal Era.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: Reversing the Future. The protagonist, Yi Tianxing, is reborn three days into the past. Born with a physique abnormality and possessing the ability to see ghosts, he was abandoned by his parents in an orphanage and later adopted. His adoptive family treated him with great kindness, and he also had a younger sister. He was reborn three days into the past because the world would end in three days.

Chapter 2: The Heavenly Dragon Taming Scripture. He possesses the power of yin and yang vision, secretly spreading the word of the author's demon-slaying abilities, earning him the title of Master. To prevent the apocalypse three days from now, he informs many people. When he peers into his mind, the mysterious stone bead begins to take effect, granting the protagonist a secret manual of inner cultivation.

Chapter 3: Ancestral Dragon Qi. The mental method is a bit complex, and the various settings are not easy to understand. The stone bead contains a trace of Ancestral Dragon Qi, which is absorbed by the protagonist, cultivating the first trace of true Qi.

Chapter 4, Innate Yin and Yang. The protagonist uses dragon energy to activate his Yin-Yang Eyes, increasing their cultivation several fold. Just as the protagonist is about to continue his research, his sister returns with her best friend, bringing a warmer atmosphere to the scene.

Chapter 5: Prepare for a rainy day. The protagonist had read about this online. Some of these supplies were sent to the underground base, some to their homes. The variety and identity of the supplies were all geared towards preparing for life in a post-apocalyptic world.

Chapter 6: Doomsday Cataclysm. The three of them found the key that suited them from a pile of items, and combining them to create a perfect effect was a great combination. Despite their thorough preparations, the catastrophe arrived as expected.

Chapter 7: Monsters Arrive. Cracks appear in the sky, and countless small monsters emerge from them. The protagonist decides to go out and hunt them down, testing the monsters' strength. His sister and best friend are persuaded to stay home, as defending the base camp is a difficult task.

Chapter 8, Wish Power Orbs. Wish Power Orbs. Killing monsters will drop small white beads, these are Wish Power Orbs, which possess the power of faith. The protagonist has a strong desire to devour them, but he suppresses it. Later, he encounters a zombie and uses the Yin-Yang Lock to restrain its soul, but surprisingly, it is devoured by the Yin-Yang Eyes, forming a new Qi.

Chapter 9, "The Wordless Book." After the protagonist finishes killing the visible monsters, he descends the stairs and sees an old man being chased by slimes. He encounters a lovely girl again, a man blessed with extraordinary fortune, yet unexpectedly escapes the malicious curses of Odron and Yin En.

Just wait a moment, that's all.

Chapter 10: Strange Treasures. They continued walking forward, spotting a giant wolf in the center of the square. They fought together, searched for corpses together, and prepared to fight again. Finally, they actually obtained the Strange Fire, wondering if it would be of use to the saplings.

【Brief Comment】

This book was recommended to me by a reader friend last year. The article mainly introduces the current status of the Xianxia category.

At that time, "My Senior Brother is Too Steady" and "The Story of Lan Ke Chess" had not been published yet, or had not become popular yet.

I'm sorry that I only recently found the time to write this article.

This book is quite generous in terms of word count. Each chapter has 3000 words, which is quite impressive compared to most books with 2000 words.

In the early part of the book, the protagonist is killed by a colorful meteor during a doomsday disaster and travels back three days. To resist the disaster, he calls his sister back and prepares to hide in an underground base he prepared long ago.

After procuring sufficient supplies, the younger sister returned, bringing with her a school beauty and a martial arts expert from a long lineage. The three of them waited for the natural disaster to strike, slaying monsters as they made their way to the base. Along the way, they encountered a treasure hunter.

Before the book's release, the story progressed to the story of the Yang Family Generals, demonstrating that this book also features an infinite flow that allows one to travel the heavens. In Chapter 1975, in Kunlun, Hu Xueyan integrates the Eternal Coin to seize control of the currency market. Major trading companies such as Shen Wansan begin entering and exiting other realms, traversing the world. The protagonist, Yi Tianxing, returns to Kunlun with his sister.

The protagonist of this book travels through many worlds, including "Dragon and Snake Romance", the Hundred Schools of Thought, the Romance of Sui and Tang Dynasties, the Zerg, the Twelve Zodiac Signs, etc., with rich elements and obvious clues.

Because of this, it is difficult for readers who don’t like infinite flow to accept it.

In addition, the level setting in the early stage is not very friendly, and long paragraphs are often interspersed in the main text, which easily leads to poor reading.

How the procurement of supplies for the underground base avoided the relevant departments was not explained clearly; when the natural disaster came, the protagonist survived alone and did not report to the relevant departments, appearing indifferent and heartless; before the disaster struck, the protagonist did not hide in the underground base in time, but instead took the two girls to witness the disaster falling on their heads, and then took them to fight monsters. It is difficult to understand this intention.

However, I really appreciate the author's mentality in writing books: be a down-to-earth person and write books quietly.

He has written this book to 600 million words and shows no sign of stopping. Although it has become a bit watery in the later period and there are relatively few comments, it still has not shaken the author's determination to continue writing. This alone is very admirable.

I always feel that when a book reaches 300 million words, all the stories and the world will be complete, and it can even be reborn several times.

I generally don't recommend reading books with tens of millions of words. They're just too full of water!

This book is pretty good. It's an infinite flow. When there's no story, just open a new dungeon. This limitation is slightly better. But only slightly better.

So I still suggest that the author consider finishing the book.

Because the protagonist is currently almost invincible in the world, it is difficult to encounter opponents of the same level.

【At last】

There are many things worth learning from the author of this book, and I hope it can provide some inspiration to novice authors.

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
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【Cang's Ramblings】

Today I stayed up late to cultivate as usual, and I am not in a good condition.

If it weren't for the built-in typo reminder, I would have written so many typos that it would be hard to count them all.

The early part of this book is quite exciting, but the various settings make it a bit sleepy.

But the number of words is really large, and most people don’t have the perseverance to keep writing.

The latter part of the book becomes quite watery.

After one chapter, the plot remains unchanged.

This is also a trick that works in a work of tens of millions of words.

Although it is not a beautiful thing, at least I have the protection of family warmth, how fortunate!
Finally, that’s all I have to say today.

Ask for some support~
(End of this chapter)