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Chapter 205 204. Comments on "The Poor Man's Two Thousand Years"

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"The Poor Man's Two Thousand Years of Ups and Downs", author: non-player character, level 5 author.

Category: History-Alternative History.

【Introduction】

She experienced the Battle of Changping and witnessed the massacre of hundreds of thousands of people.

She once led the Qin cavalry to compete with the six kingdoms for supremacy.

She had seen the world divided into three parts, the mountains and rivers shattered, and had also heard the lingering sound of the Longzhong zither.

She was once intoxicated during the prosperous Zhenguan era, so how charming was the empress throughout history?
She had been a farmer and a teacher.

But no one knew that such a person lived for two thousand years.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: Not all elderly people are clumsy. The protagonist, Gu Nan, is a man who was a designer in his previous life. He died from overwork, and his soul traveled back to ancient times, transforming into a woman. After a long journey, she finally arrived at a city. After not eating for three days, she took a fancy to an elderly man and prepared to attack him.

Chapter 2: Eating a meal on your own isn't easy. The protagonist stole some money and was caught with it. The old man held her hand tightly, unable to break free. She begged for mercy, but he still took her to a teahouse. Oh, not tea, but cold water.

Chapter 3: Don't talk while eating. The old man treated the protagonist to a bowl of bean rice and discussed military affairs and the art of war. The protagonist, who had played strategy games, spoke eloquently, even surprising the old man. He was Bai Qi of Qin!

Chapter 4: Generally, men who appear tough outside are often henpecked. The other person is the real Bai Qi, and he wants to take him in as a disciple. The protagonist is briefly bewildered, but then, upon hearing about the meal, he agrees. Following Bai Qi back home, he encounters the fierce wife of Bai Qi. He's henpecked.

Chapter Five discusses the training of a reckless man. As Bai Qi's apprentice, the protagonist follows his training methods, practicing martial arts and military tactics, making rapid progress. Physical fatigue is relieved by a massage from a maid. Bai Qi's wife, deeply distressed, only manages to dissuade him from her attempts at persuasion. He continues to train as he's supposed to.

Chapter 6, Lian Po, isn't that the one who carried the thorny branches on his back? After Bai Qi gave his apprentice Sun Tzu's Art of War, he went to the palace to meet the King of Qin. After a long siege of Shangdang, the King of Zhao, under Qin's divisive tactics, prepared to replace Lian Po with Zhao Kuo.

Chapter 7: The abominable feudal society. Bai Qi secures the opportunity from the King of Qin to take his apprentice to the battlefield, but the protagonist remains at home, reading military books while flirting with her maid. Later, her spearmanship has become somewhat sophisticated, developing a unique style.

Chapter 8: Premature graying of hair is not a good sign. The protagonist hadn't been out for months, so she ate pancakes and walked around, feeling quite relaxed. Until someone stole from her, just like she had done before. It was a true retribution. The five or six-year-old boy was named Wei Zhuang, and he was released. Unfortunately, the protagonist didn't catch his name. Wang Jian, however, saw the theft and called out to the protagonist.

Chapter 9: Different things always have their own reasons. The protagonist already had a karmic connection with Bai Qi and didn't want to have any more with Wang Jian. She went to buy a horse, went around several places, and finally chose an extremely cheap black horse.

Chapter 10: The Six Arts of a Gentleman; Lessons are Needed. The protagonist buys a horse and a sword. Bai Qi is pleased, saying the horse understands human nature. He then finds two masters to teach the protagonist swordsmanship and horsemanship. Coincidentally, they are Guiguzi and Wang Jian.

【Brief Comment】

About the Author

A non-player character, a level 5 author, author of "Two Thousand Years of Ups and Downs of a Poor Ghost", "The Messenger from the Wasteland", "Don't Run, Thief", and "To My Frozen Hometown", categorized as history, fantasy, martial arts, and light novels.

Uniformly short and weak.

summary of the story
I have read a little bit of this book before. The cover of the book is the same as that of an author friend of mine. After someone pointed it out to me, I found "Poor Ghost".

Many people recommended it to me, but after watching it, I felt that it did not live up to its reputation.

It’s not that the book is bad, it’s a good book.

But for me, I will put it aside after watching Qin Dynasty, and I probably won’t watch it a second or third time.

The story mainly tells about the protagonist who, after traveling through time and space, learns military tactics from Bai Qi, swordsmanship from Guiguzi, and horse riding from Wang Jian, and personally experiences the Battle of Changping and fights against the six kingdoms.

Later, she wrote about historical and cultural celebrities of various eras, such as Huo Qubing, Cao Wei, and Li Bai, leaving countless footprints.

However, this book seems to have been banned and unbanned, and the specific reason is unknown.

Character characteristics
Gu Nan, known as Sister Nan in the readers' minds, was a man in her previous life and is now a woman, the kind with imposing heroic spirit.

A transformation story with a unique perspective, and the character setting is a bit like that of a carefree and reckless man.

Bai Qi, a kind and benevolent old man, becomes a completely different person on the battlefield, extremely well versed in the art of war. He treats the protagonist like his own daughter, loving her with all his heart.

Wang Jian was directly attracted by the protagonist; the young Wei Zhuang also had the protagonist in his heart; Li Bai seemed to be a little jealous of the protagonist.

Style characteristics
Transformation story, male to female, quick travel. Although it is just a trial reading, it always gives me a confusing illusion.

The flavor of female-oriented literature is very strong!

Is the author a woman?
All I know is that the author was still a student when he wrote this book, and I don’t know whether he has graduated or is preparing to work full-time.

The following books seemed to start in a hurry and end even more hastily.

This kind of operation is actually not conducive to the author's accumulation of popularity.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
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【Cang's Ramblings】

First of all, I would like to thank the 2014 little book friend for the reward of 1500 Qidian coins, Orange-flavored Orange for the reward of 500 Qidian coins, and Beautiful Guaiguai for the reward of 100 Qidian coins.

Let’s go back to this book and talk about it for a few words.

The advantages of this book are actually very obvious.

It has a rich historical foundation, the writing style is relatively tranquil, the character portrayal is relatively realistic, and the highlights are relatively focused.

It's a pity that he died as a eunuch after experiencing some twists and turns.

Also, let’s assume she’s a female author.

Her subsequent books were generally not very satisfactory.

But I have to admit that the author is very talented, and a mortal like me can never reach her writing level.

If she can strengthen her writing style and ensure updates, she will have a great chance of achieving godhood.

Her book is indeed worth reading.

In fact, there are several great female writers in the male channel.

Dark lychee, cat that can cook, turns white when sleeping, first love is as bright as summer flowers, etc.

"My Wife is a Big Star", which flashed on the screen yesterday, was actually written by an excellent female author with natural writing style and rich emotions.

The female author is good at delicate emotional lines, the characters are carved more finely, the story line is very clear, and the reading experience is as gentle as water.

However, it is easy to be a little lacking in career path, fame, and overall pattern.

Take "My Wife is a Big Star" for example. The immature and arrogant love story is the biggest highlight of the book. The feeling of hunger that cannot be obtained even though it is right in front of you is what attracts readers the most.

Once the hero and heroine get married, the book will immediately become boring.

Many people say that "Poor Ghost" is comparable to "Wu Xin: The Monster Killer" because it also tells the story of immortality.

"Wuxin: The Monster Killer" is also the work of a female author. The book seems to have three or four parts, telling stories from the Republic of China, a certain revolution, and the reform and opening up period.

If "The Poor Ghost" continues to be written, it is indeed possible to be comparable, but based on the Qin Dynasty section alone, it is probably still a little lacking.

From the perspective of immortality alone, "I Am Really Immortal" is actually a very good work with a very novel perspective, and it was also written by a female author.

From this we can see that it is really hard to say whether the author behind those wonderful works we usually see is a man who picks his toes or a man who dresses like a womanizer.

Finally, I hope that the author, as a non-player character, can find his or her correct position, make the story a little longer, and without violating any rules, spread the wings of creation and fly bravely.

After all, today's readers won't even read a book with less than 200 million words.

(End of this chapter)