Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 238 237. Comments on "Kryptonian Sword Immortal Li Taibai"

Today I would like to recommend a novel about the poet Li Bai.

"The Golden Swordsman Li Bai", author: Xu Gong of Shushan, level 3 author.

Category: Xianxia-Cultivation Civilization.

【Introduction】

"Ding... Congratulations to the host for winning the item "Nine-turn Golden Pill"

"Ding... Congratulations to the host for winning the skill book 'Yi Jin Jing'."

"Ding... Congratulations to the host for winning the skill book 'Nine Swords of Dugu.'"

Sorry, the above is all the protagonist's dream. Even if the soul is reborn as the poet Li Bai, the non-African is still the non-African. Can escape from Africa and become European? It doesn't exist!

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One, First Spend. Three years had passed since Li Bai, who had traveled to a parallel Tang Dynasty, finally saved enough money for a payout. A single draw yielded a miracle, the first card being the second-ranked Heavenly Card: Overlord's Arm, perfect for arm wrestling. Then, from the first-charge treasure chest, he discovered an incredible skill: reading ten lines at a glance and retaining everything he saw.

Chapter 2: Early morning in Suiye City. The protagonist wakes up early to practice swordsmanship with his father. To trick his mother, he demands money from his father. During breakfast, his father tells him that there will be a parent-teacher conference today.

Chapter 3: I'm the Pirate King. On the way to school, the protagonist and his father made a deal: if he could answer the teacher's questions correctly, he would get one tael of silver for each question. This was because his father had a strong rival, whose son was a top student.

Chapter 4: Li Ke and Su Wu. The protagonist's father, Li Ke, though a successful businessman, was consistently outclassed by Su Wu during his school years. Now, it's Li Bai's turn to be outclassed by Su Wu's son, Su Can. Truly a cycle of fortune, both father and son share a common fate.

Chapter 5: Suiye Academy. Suiye Academy is the only academy in the city. It has weathered decades of trials and tribulations, remaining unshakable. All the city's merchants have studied here. The academy's teachers are even more resilient, having witnessed the growth of countless people.

Chapter 6: Reciting the Six Jias. The teacher glanced at the audience and began giving them the task of reciting the Six Jias. Su Can started first, and it went smoothly, and the other students followed suit. When it was Li Bai's turn, he also completed it with remarkable ease.

Chapter 7, Sun and Moon. Everyone was shocked by Li Bai's transformation, which completely exceeded their expectations. The teacher posed another difficult question and asked Su Can to answer it, but Li Bai intercepted it and recited the entire passage.

Chapter 8: Two taels of silver. The teacher was even more pleased with Li Bai's performance, while the others were speechless except for shock. His father returned home, dazed and in a daze, and woke up the next day still in a daze. Li Bai also didn't sleep well because his father didn't give him the money.

Chapter 9, Lao Gan Ma +6. Li Bai's father found many books for him, placing high hopes on him, hoping he would achieve success in the imperial examinations. Li Bai was frustrated, as his reading skills were so effective that his "Photographic Memory" was actually a passive skill. He then drew another lottery and won six bottles of Lao Gan Ma.

Chapter 10: Goal: Eleven consecutive draws! With a single draw showing disappointing results, Li Bai decided to save up for an eleven-draw streak. But where would he get the money? He came up with a brilliant idea: Lao Gan Ma with flatbreads—it was bound to be a hit. But I didn't believe it.

【Brief Comment】

The author has only one book under his name, a fan value of 170,000, and one alliance leader. The data is relatively real, and there is no such thing as friendly alliances or subscription collection.

The author reached level 3 by accumulating little by little, which is much more realistic than those who easily get silver or make it to the list.

Let’s just assume that the author is a newbie!

There are three reasons why this book attracted me.

One is Li Bai in the title of the book.

Whether it is the Qinglian Sword Immortal in Honor of Kings, the Poet Immortal in various historical novels, or the peerless master Li Bai in cultivation novels.

Novels with Li Bai as the protagonist are relatively rare.

Maybe there are some, but it is rare to find someone who can write an exciting story.

The second is krypton gold.

There are a lot of novels about spending money to draw cards.

Regardless of the category, you can often see this type of subject matter.

Whether it is a big shot or a flop, everyone has tried this type of subject matter.

There is an obvious benefit to spending money to draw cards.

Being unlucky makes people happy, being lucky makes people envious, single draw depends on luck, continuous draw depends on money.

The types and properties of the cards can reflect the author's imagination.

This is very consistent with many current games, even the card drawing game Qidian itself.

The choice of this theme setting itself is very topical. The third is the Sword Immortal.

This is also the most fascinating and mysterious thing about Li Bai. Historical records prove that Li Bai was indeed a swordsman.

Many of his poems also prove this point.

At the beginning of this book, the protagonist Li Bai traveled through time and space. Although he had his own system, he was still a child and had no money to spend on lottery.

He finally saved enough money, and on his first lottery draw, he got an incredible skill: he had a photographic memory and could read ten lines at a glance.

This skill helped him change his original personality as a naughty kid and start a new life as a genius boy.

Especially after touching the world of immortal cultivation, he realized that he also had the possibility of becoming a sword immortal.

The story later shows that with the krypton gold system, his practice became smooth sailing.

Moreover, the latest plot of this book seems to have officially turned into a cultivation story, and it doesn't seem abrupt.

Although this chapter cannot be seen due to system problems, the popularity and topic of this book are still quite strong.

Although Li Bai's current level of cultivation is not high, it is very obvious that he is going smoothly.

Therefore, this book can also be seen as an invincible book.

Overall, this book combines many popular elements, with a rather tortuous plot, constant nonsense, and a lot of imagination. In addition, the risk of drawing cards makes the book quite readable.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

This book is actually quite successful. Although it does not have any unique ideas or major innovations, these advantages have allowed it to enter the hearts of many readers.

This type of amateur writing may seem simple to use, but there is actually a lot of useful information hidden in the book.

At least when it comes to scones with Lao Gan Ma, I don’t know what they taste like.

There are also the functions of those cards, the customs and practices of the Tang Dynasty, the courses taught in private schools, the levels of dungeons, techniques, elixirs, formations, etc. in the world of immortal cultivation.

These require the author to think carefully and make a smooth transition without complete distortion.

I can't do it anyway.

It can be seen that the author has a very strong ability to control the story.

The details are actually very well done, the paragraphs are well-arranged, and the character dialogues are natural and not stiff.

It’s just that some of the settings are a bit confusing, there are a few typos, and it looks a bit like a novice.

Of course, it may be that you have a bad memory, just like me.

However, the monthly ticket ranking of this book is not very high, ranking 1431st in the overall list. This may be related to the fact that the plot became clichéd after Li Bai became an immortal.

After all, when people click on this book, they want to see how Li Bai spends money to win the lottery, rather than an extremely traditional novel about cultivating immortals.

If you lose your original highlights and features, you will easily lose your original readers.

According to the current development trend, this book may not go far. It depends on when the author makes up his mind.

The situation in this book is quite similar to that in "Cang's Ramblings".

Someone left a message today saying that the popularity of my book club has dropped a lot.

Yes, I noticed this problem too.

But I don’t have any good solution!
You can't just save up money like Li Bai and spend money on lotteries, right?
(End of this chapter)