Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 246 245. Comments on "True Immortality"

Today I would like to recommend a new book by a great author to you.

"True Longevity", author: Dungrou Daguocai, a great writer.

Category: Fantasy-Eastern Fantasy.

【Introduction】

In modern society, a young man named Lot obtains the ability of immortality. In order to avoid accidental death, he stays at home (stays stable) until the end of time.

In the era of spiritual energy revival, someone suddenly appeared.
In the era of alien invasion, some people become legends
In the age of interstellar exploration, someone's voice resonates across the starry sky.
Countless geniuses rose like the scorching sun, and then set. Thousand-year-old wealthy families and ten-thousand-year-old aristocratic families were wiped out in the long river of time. Only Roth stood on the edge of the long river of time and watched quietly.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1: The Old Principal. The protagonist, Roth, is eighty years old but looks only in his twenties, thanks to his immortality. He wears makeup every day, looking like an old man. He's also the university president, and while giving his final lecture to students, he's confronted by them. This explains his understanding of "stability," which makes sense, but isn't the truth.

Chapter 2, Martial Arts and Arts. This chapter introduces the background of the story in detail, including social changes, the revival of spiritual energy, the invasion of alien creatures, etc. It is too detailed. Such a straightforward introduction of the background of the story is easy to discourage readers.

Chapter Three: The Standard of Abnormal Humanity. The protagonist is immortal and possesses a system. However, he is extremely cautious and avoids the system. He believes the system wouldn't choose him without reason and must have some limitations. Meanwhile, a colleague tells him that there's a meeting at the Education Bureau that he needs to attend.

Chapter 4: The End of an Era. This chapter begins by setting the story's background: the old era has ended. Then, at the Education Bureau, a notice is sent to all schools regarding the inauguration of a martial arts program. This program involves selecting martial artists from within universities to fight against the Space Locusts. The protagonist, in tears, strongly protests.

Chapter 5: The Beginning of a New Era. After a lengthy battle with the Education Bureau, the protagonist finally secures generous resources for the school. Neither side reaches a breaking point; both are masters of performance. The introduction of martial arts classes also marks the beginning of a new era.

Chapter 6: The General Trend. The protagonist's mood quickly calmed down due to the flattery of his assistant. Martial arts were the general trend, and all he could do was gather his students and arrange a retreat for them. Once the students arrived, most of them followed the protagonist's lead.

Chapter 7: Storm is brewing. The protagonist offers his students two paths: developing their own martial arts and confronting the prevailing trend with the prevailing trend is the most scientific approach. The youngest student reveals the evil deeds of the Insect God Cult, finally allowing the protagonist to reveal a hint of his aura.

Chapter 8: Human Magnetic Field. Despite being warned of imminent danger, the principal went out on night patrol. In the girls' dormitory, he sensed a dramatic shift in the human magnetic field. Sure enough, someone had kidnapped the girls, and he dispatched them with his bow and arrow.

Chapter 9, Ghost. A veteran police officer, driven by a suspect named "Ghost," has his family torn apart in a desperate bid to apprehend him. He carries his equipment, tracks his target, and rapidly approaches.

Chapter 10: The Importance of Stability. The old police officer chases the suspect to the outskirts of town, but his tracking equipment breaks down, ultimately wiping out decades of hard work. The shocking blow brings the old man to tears. The protagonist, hiding nearby, witnesses this scene with mixed emotions, but ultimately leaves behind some clues and an elixir of immortality, hoping to fulfill the old man's dream.

【Brief Comment】

About the Author

Stewed Meat Hot Pot, a great writer, official label: a well-known writer of online literature, his works have a brisk pace, passionate plots, and he is a strong author.

He has written "The Miraculous Doctor" (first order 4694), "The Invincible Medicine Master" (first order 5255), "The Invincible Awakening" (first order 2600), and "The Miraculous Heavenly Master" (first order 8290).

It can be seen that he had a glorious past, otherwise he would not have been able to get a contract with a big shot.

His new book "True Immortality" currently has only 1.34 collections and no good recommendation positions. It seems that it will be a failure after it is put on the shelves.

summary of the story
This book mainly tells the story of the era of spiritual energy revival, the era of alien creature invasion, and the era of interstellar exploration. It tells how different people in different eras take the lead and strive for excellence in the torrent of the times, fighting for their own future and the destiny of mankind.

Only the immortal protagonist, standing in the long river of time and watching the rise and fall of everyone, feels like a peerless master.

Character characteristics
The protagonist Roth, a college principal, has a body in his twenties, but he tries to make himself look like an eighty-year-old man.

I am overly cautious and don't trust the system. I only believe in my own judgment and stick to the word "stability".

In order to allocate generous resources to the school, he can shamelessly cry in front of the Education Bureau, or he can face students head-on and stick to his own principles.

Style characteristics
It's hard to describe his style, but to be frank, it's too amateurish, unworthy of the title of a great author. His previous works may have been more popular, but this new book, to be honest, is on par with a new author.

Since it is such an unsatisfactory work, why should I list it out and promote it separately?

Actually, it’s very simple. I also want to see whether this veteran writer can survive successfully in the new era of online literature and whether he can keep up with the new era of online literature trends.

Or, will it be lost in thousands of online articles and never recover?
【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

Someone left me a message yesterday saying that when I review a story, I only say good things and don’t point out its shortcomings.

Long ago, I said that with well-known authors, I tend to mention shortcomings;

I will give loving encouragement to new authors.

Later, because of complaints about Eagle's new book being too watery, fans left the group.

It's really not a big deal.

Readers' positive reviews will naturally encourage me to continue writing, and negative reviews will not stop me from continuing to promote books.

As long as it's not too harsh, I usually won't say anything.

Everyone can speak freely about anything, and it would be great to be able to turn my book club into a large-scale reader exchange site.

Today's book is actually not an excellent work.

After trying it myself, I have lost the desire to continue recommending it.

Later, I thought about it and put it back in.

This is a great writer, but the quality of his book is very poor, and it can discourage countless people from reading it from the first chapter.

He is no longer telling a story, it is purely a background introduction and inner monologue, a bit like a story outline and psychological description.

There are no jokes, no highlights, no flaws, and no readability at all.

This is truly written by a great writer!
I never thought that a great writer could fall to this level. This is no longer a question of declining level, but a question of writing attitude.

He wasn't creating a story at all; he was just writing whatever came to his mind.

He doesn't care about current hot topics and popular elements, and he doesn't even know who his readers are.

In short, this book is likely to be finished as soon as it is put on the shelves.

I would like to write this article just to commemorate this book.

(End of this chapter)