Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 248 247. Review of "My Invisible Battle Girl"

Today I would like to recommend an urban novel to you.

"My Invisible Battle Girl", author: Jie Po, level 5 author.

Category: Urban-Urban Superpowers.

【Introduction】

Once you enter a girls' school, it's like entering a deep sea. From then on, moral integrity is a thing of the past.
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In an era of extraordinary abilities that belong only to young girls, a young boy awakens and steps into a new and unknown world.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: Open the door, a package is coming! The protagonist, Jiang Chanji, returns to his rented cabin exhausted. He's hungry, but nothing to eat has been found. He wants to sleep, perhaps even then, so he won't be hungry anymore. Just then, someone arrives at the door with a package, knocking persistently. But to the protagonist, it sounds like a trap, just like when he was abandoned by his parents.

Chapter Two: A Frightened Bird. The protagonist has known the art of avoiding debt for years, a painful experience so intense that he hasn't even applied for a replacement for his lost ID card, fearing his creditors might find him. When he receives a package and sees the sender's name, he realizes it's from his parents. A bottle of incredibly precious invisibility potion.

Chapter 3: A Suspicious Potion. The protagonist's parents wrote him a letter, saying the potion was a birthday gift. The potion was extracted from Southeast Asian jade. They also translated the potion's effects, which seemed to make him invisible, and he fled with them.

Chapter 4: All or Nothing. The protagonist has nothing left to lose, so he drinks the suspicious potion. Then he has a dream: a dead mountain, a dead valley, a dead lake, and nothing else.

Chapter 5, Invisibility. The protagonist smells an enchanting aroma in his sleep. Upon opening his eyes, he realizes it's the landlady making lard and egg fried rice, similar to the golden fried rice in "The Cooking Master Boy." He wakes up to discover the fighter jet has gone invisible.

Chapter 6: Red Leaf Academy. He found the Red Leaf Academy's enrollment advertisement. This was the most famous private girls' academy in the country. Most of the students were aristocrats, but they also accepted some ordinary girls and girls with superpowers.

Chapter 7: Triple Trial. Since he planned to attend a women's college, he had to make sure he could pass the entrance exam. He created a triple trial for himself. Laba vinegar, chili sauce, and cooling oil. The final result was positive.

Chapter 8: How to Use Scissors. The cooling oil hadn't been used yet, and he had no idea what would happen after applying it. He used the scissors to cut his hair short, and when he left the room, he was immediately caught by the landlord.

Chapter 9: Overly Self-Aware. The protagonist, using his eloquence, manages to escape the landlord's demands. He heads to the women's college, only to encounter an even stranger girl, seemingly on her way to report to Red Leaf College, just like him.

Chapter 10: Walking Together. This girl always walks with her head down, avoiding oncoming pedestrians in advance, but she always keeps her eyes on the protagonist. She wonders why the protagonist can see her. The two of them walk one in front and one behind, so they can be considered as walking together.

【Brief Comment】

About the Author

Jie Po, a level 5 author, is the author of two works, "Pet King" and "My Invisible Battle Girl".

Among them, "Pet King" is very popular, with 25 collections on Qidian, 23 collections on Shucheng, and 79 fans. The author also successfully advanced to Level 5 author with this book.

summary of the story
"My Invisible Battle Girl" tells the story of the protagonist Jiang Chanji who accidentally received a mysterious invisibility potion sent by his parents, causing him to become partially invisible.

In order to survive, he applied to a girls' school because it provided food and accommodation.

The examination went smoothly and the school doctor was unable to identify his gender.

After that, he did not move into the school immediately, but continued to stay in the rented place. The landlord was shocked to learn that he had been admitted to Hongye College.

Soon, his parents sent another letter, advising the protagonist not to drink the potion.

But the protagonist's fate has already escaped from the ordinary. He is destined to become an extraordinary person and do extraordinary things.

Character characteristics
The protagonist Jiang Chanji is one of the few protagonists I have seen who is harmed by his parents. He ran away with a lot of debts, leaving the protagonist to be bullied by the creditors.

He lived a life with no food to eat every day, and his spiritual world was extremely desolate. At the beginning of the story, he even thought about committing suicide.

After finally getting news about his parents, he had his virtuous man made invisible. The following letter was an even more brutal blow.

No wonder many readers later said that there are basically no such parents in reality.

The protagonist was born into poverty and is destined to have an unfair life!
Style characteristics
The author himself concluded that this book is not a transformation text, but an invisibility text.

Transformation stories are no longer allowed. The author actually came up with such a magical setting, invisibility?
The first few chapters were a bit boring, but when Chen Yiyi appeared, the story gradually became exciting.

Especially the part where the school doctor verified the real identity, many good guys who wanted to take advantage of the loopholes were taught a lesson by the instructor.

The protagonist is gifted and is not afraid of tests!
Later in the story, there are similar dungeon clearing and quest completion, and the stealth setting is no longer obvious.

The first order of this book was only 570. Currently, it has 3.2 collections on Qidian, 2841 collections in the bookstore, 6.78 fans, and 4 alliance leaders.

It has been on the shelves for more than five months, but it still hasn't achieved quality.

Judging from the performance alone, this book is far superior to the previous one.

I wonder if the author’s mentality exploded?
The poor performance indicates that most readers do not like this style. The invisibility setting is actually just a characteristic of the protagonist.

I hope the author will continue to work hard!

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
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【Cang's Ramblings】

This book was recommended by my die-hard fan.

how to say?

The book is okay, but the risk is quite high.

If she were an ordinary battle girl, she would be able to attract many readers who love chuuni anime.

But it is not wise to treat combat girls with special significance.

I admit, this is a nice setup.

It can also show extraordinary highlights in the vast world of online literature.

This setting is actually a dance on the edge of a knife, and the degree of danger cannot be described in detail.

There was one chapter that the author revised and condensed from 3000 words to more than 2000 words. Many details were lost and the flavor suddenly became much weaker.

Another point is that I really admire this author.

"Pet King" was a huge hit, but after it was finished, he did not continue to write a similar sister book to create his own "Pet" series of works.

This new book has obviously flopped, and it's probably hard to salvage it.

The books recommended these days are not big hits, but new books by some great or well-known authors.

They all have one thing in common: they have failed or are about to fail.

I would like to remind many new authors that failure is not exclusive to newbies. Even if you are at level 5, master, or platinum, you will face this problem every time you release a new book.

There is no pattern in readers' preferences.

This year's hot spots will be different from last year's.

When writing, you must first please yourself before you can please your readers.

Let's work hard together!

(End of this chapter)