Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 280 275. Comments on "Eye of Evolution"

When I saw the title of this book, I immediately thought of Sauron, the evil eye in The Lord of the Rings.

"The Eye of Evolution", Asher Luo, level 5 author.

Category: Fantasy-High Martial Arts World.

【Introduction】

Go out with a knife, and all equipment depends on luck!

Online writer Bai Xiaowen was brought to the psychic era a hundred years later by a magical eyeball.

Spirit particles are infiltrating, mutant beasts are wreaking havoc, monsters from the spirit world are invading, and the digitized Earth is like a super-large game!

I came, I saw, I conquered!
Bai Xiaowen opened his divine eyes and roared out the words of a strong man, but there were only 130 days left until the college entrance examination.

Conquer the Psychic Age and start by becoming the top scorer in the college entrance examination.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: He's become both handsome and powerful. Flop online writer Bai Xiaowen travels through time and space to become high school student Bai Xiaowen a century from now. Blood-red eyes enhance his spiritual power, allowing him to discern all spiritually-powered objects. Most importantly, he transforms from a sluggish otaku into a strikingly handsome man with a beautiful sister.

Chapter 2, Zhou Yi. The protagonist is enrolled in the combat class, hoping to become an Awakened. The person who beat him to death is a classmate, Zhou Yi. In training, there's a death target, so Zhou Yi will at most receive a disciplinary punishment. But in the hospital, Zhou Yi absolutely wouldn't dare to act. Furthermore, there are three other girls in the ward who are acquaintances of the protagonist.

Chapter 3, Li Shuyi. The darling Li Shuyi appears and chases away the troublemaker, Zhou Yi, who is now pursuing another girlfriend with his girlfriend, acting arrogantly. Li Shuyi and the protagonist share a mutual affection, and her arrival is both a farewell and a gesture of assistance. She is about to awaken, and before leaving, she offers the protagonist a comfortable job.

Chapter 4: Super God Pharmacy. This was a very grand pharmacy, frequented by the wealthy and the noble. He explained his purpose and was taken to the supervisor's office. He was asked to complete the label copying task, but with the insight of the Eye of Evolution, he discovered a clue and recorded it as evidence. The supervisor refused to change his mind, so he took the two potions to the manager to report it.

Chapter 5: Taking Down the Supervisor. After revealing that he was recommended by Li Shuyi, he gained the store manager's trust. He then produced evidence proving the supervisor's long-term embezzlement. The store manager acted decisively, apprehending the supervisor and his accomplices. The protagonist was then offered two job opportunities, but chose to work as a handyman in the pharmaceutical department.

Chapter 6: College Entrance Exam season arrives again. The homeroom teacher emphasizes the importance of the exam and informs students of a forthcoming field exercise. The protagonist concludes his meditation, experiencing a slight increase in strength. After school, he is confronted by Zhou Yi, whose hostility is evident, intent on expelling him from the combat class.

Chapter 7, Assistant Exam. Someone in the pharmaceutical department has been promoted, leaving a vacant assistant position. A group of odd jobs are eagerly vying for the position. Among them is a small group, arrogant and confident that they will secure the position.

Chapter 8: Results Announced. The test was quite difficult, with the gap widening from question 11. Fan Renjie, who considered himself a promising actor, grew even more confident after seeing his own results. To dethrone the protagonist, he actively sought out faults and even made a bet.

Chapter 9 features a classic line from a top student. Fan Renjie's score of 76 was the highest among the apprentices who received the test papers, but only one person made it to the interview, and he assumed it was him. In the end, the protagonist scored a perfect 100. "You scored 76 because your ability is limited to 76 points. I scored 100 because the test paper only has 100 points." Ultimately, he was hired.

Chapter 10: Powerful Reproduction. The protagonist follows his master in making potions, their collaboration improving. After finishing, he doesn't leave. Instead, he extracts spiritual energy-rich materials from scraps, perfectly replicating his master's process and crafting a powerful potion. After taking it, he not only begins his career as a pharmacist, but also significantly improves his stats.

【Brief Comment】

About the Author

Yashe Luo, a level 5 author, has written five works including "Xuan Ba ​​Jiu Tian", two of which are excellent works.

This book is his best-performing one, with 2700 first orders, 23 collections on Qidian, 15 collections on Bookstore, 56 fans, and 6 alliance leaders.

Book lovers praised the book highly for its legendary quality in the early and middle parts, but the ending was abrupt in the later part.

The author also admitted that the world structure later on was too big and was written distortedly.

Let me explain this point first to give everyone a heads-up.

summary of the story
This book mainly tells the story of a person who travels through time a hundred years later with the Eye of Evolution and transforms from a nerdy and failed author into the chosen one who saves the world.

The protagonist is extremely handsome, has a super brain, and the Eye of Evolution can see through everything. Although he has a weak physique, he grows up smoothly step by step with the blessing of the perfect krypton gold potion.

Especially in the early stages, completing the heroic job transfer quest instantly puts her at a much higher level than the girl known as the "Genius' Daughter." After the Super Bowl, the ending was rather abrupt, but aberrations are aberrations, and the author knows she can't make up for it, nor does she want to add dozens more chapters.

Character characteristics
The protagonist was beaten to death at the beginning because his own strength was too poor.

Fortunately, with the help of the darling of heaven and the blessing of the heaven-defying system, he was able to grow rapidly.

Although the system is quite powerful, the protagonist's super brain is indeed useful and helps him fight the enemy perfectly in many cases.

He is also very persistent. Once he sets a goal, he will work hard to achieve it no matter how difficult it is.

So, it's still quite passionate.

Style characteristics
This was a work published three years ago, and many of the settings are not very suitable now. In fact, the difference is not too big, and the routine of this book is still quite obvious.

There is not much difference between this and the pretentious and face-slapping articles in the city.

What is quite unique is that the early copy settings are very rigorous, and you can tell at a glance that the information has been checked.

Data flow is easy to write at first, just pile up data. But as the level increases, the data will collapse at any time.

So, if you also want to write a similar work, you must make a good setting.

Because, if you are not careful, you will collapse faster!

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

As I mentioned above, what attracted me to the book at first was its title.

The function of the Eye of Evolution was actually similar to that of the Golden Eye at the beginning.

But the spiritualization of the real world does have something in common with books like The World of High Martial Arts.

The various copy settings and the plots of pretending to be cool but then getting slapped in the face coincide with game texts and urban texts.

It can be seen that in order to write a masterpiece, in addition to being a genius with extraordinary talent, one must prepare sufficient information, make rigorous settings, plan a writing outline, and control the character's realm well.

In addition, you really need to learn the characteristics of major popular books, absorb their advantages, combine your own abilities, and maximize the characteristics.

Even if there are only one or two points that can be magnified, they must be written to a unique level.

At the very least, grinding is a good shortcut. If you don't have enough strength, you can make up for it with numbers.

In short, this completed book "Eye of Evolution" is still worth reading, and it is also good to learn various routines.

When you learn thousands of tricks and devote yourself to online writing, you may make surprising discoveries.

It seems that I can’t go far!

Because everyone seems to prefer the heart flow.

(End of this chapter)