Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 324 319. Comments on "Soul Patch"

What attracted me most about the book I recommend today is the introduction: Crazy enough!

"Soul Patch", cash, level 1 author.

Category: Suspense-Mystery Suspense.

【Introduction】

Brain holes, brain holes, brain holes... This article is full of brain holes!
Relying on its fascinating logic and dreamlike conception, it attracts batches of readers... huh?
If you don’t believe it, feel free to challenge yourself and see which chapter you can persist to.
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【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: Becoming a Carrier. The protagonist, Wenjie, is struck by lightning on his way home from get off work, gaining access to a Soul Patch System that requires completing a mission to activate. Having not slept well the previous night, he's not entirely sincere in his flattery of his boss at work, leaving a bad impression. A colleague suddenly mentions a tragic incident at the police station, and the protagonist, recalling the image the system displayed yesterday, feels a chill run down his spine.

Chapter 2: Words on the Face. The deceased in the scene is Yang Shanshan. The protagonist met her once while delivering materials to the police station and fell deeply in love with her. He answered the system's questions incorrectly and was unable to gain the power-up. The way Yang Shanshan died brought back negative childhood memories for the protagonist.

Chapter 3, Butterfly Cord. When the protagonist was five years old, his father died unexpectedly, leaving a butterfly cord tied to his hand, leaving an indelible mark on his mind. The system activates, presenting the protagonist with the scene of Yang Shanshan's murder on the night she was killed. In reality, the protagonist is in a conference room. Ultimately, before he even reaches the scene, the crime has already been committed. All he sees is the murderer's cold, icy gaze.

Chapter 4: The System That Sucks. It takes six hours for the system to reactivate. The protagonist, aware of his low emotional intelligence, constantly manages to avoid relationships with his superiors. He rushes home and finally reaches the crime scene before the killer strikes. However, the system's patch only allows for dissuasion. How can he dissuade the killer from committing the crime?

Chapter 5: Home Robbery. He tried to dissuade the killer, but it was ineffective. The system had already determined that the correction had failed, so he had to temporarily log out. In reality, he discovered someone had broken into his house and stolen his computer. He immediately called the police and waited for them to arrive.

Chapter 6: Violent Patch. The police arrive and investigate, but find no useful clues. The system initiates another correction task, and this time the protagonist chooses the Violent Patch. He arrives at the scene early, dumbbells ready. The moment the murderer appears, he successfully injures him.

Chapter 7: It's you. He removed the murderer's mask and mistakenly identified him as Yang Shanshan's colleague, Zhao Xiaolong. But the mission failed again. Six hours later, the protagonist reentered the crime scene. After injuring the murderer, he took the initiative to reveal that he was the murderer.

Chapter 8: A Promise. The protagonist gets the murderer drunk and learns from him why he has always hated beautiful women. The protagonist enters the murderer's childhood and changes the incident that should not have happened. However, when the protagonist returns to work the next day, he learns from his colleagues that Yang Shanshan was still killed by the murderer, just a day late.

Chapter 9: A Weird Person. The protagonist is forced to speculate that the person who molested young Zhao Xiaolong wasn't the obese woman, but someone else. The police have a new lead: the person who stole the protagonist's computer is a mysterious middle-aged man operating a night-vision drone. And the protagonist messes up again in front of his boss.

Chapter 10: Life Rewritten. The protagonist revisits Zhao Xiaolong's childhood. The obese woman is a good person, a misunderstanding on the part of the protagonist. Zhao Xiaolong was attacked by a man dressed as a woman, and the protagonist was also knocked unconscious. In reality, the protagonist discovers that Zhao Xiaolong has indeed come to his workplace to look for him.

【Brief Comment】

About the Author

Xianqian, a level 1 author, said he has written several books and has been on several channels.

I couldn't find any female-oriented, urban, or suspense-themed titles.

There is only this one available at the moment.

6月1日上架，首订810，7月13日达成精品。

There are 3.65 collections on Qidian, 172 collections in Bookstore, 19 fans, and 2 alliance leaders, one of whom is a silver alliance leader.

This author is very talented. He wrote three books in one year, one of which was rated as a masterpiece.

Don’t blow, don’t black!

This silver alliance is most likely a reward from oneself, or a Taobao package.

Generally speaking, for a book that is a good work, the first few chapters will be very lively.

This chapter of the book was very unpopular, but it received a lot of positive reviews from book lovers.

This month's fans are all in good order.

summary of the story
This book mainly tells the story of the protagonist Wenjie who obtained the Soul Patch System after being struck by lightning.

This is a very complex system that can reproduce crime scenes, solve the troubles of the parties involved and correct their life trajectories based on different patch plans.

To rescue Yang Shanshan, who was murdered at the police station, the protagonist enters the system no fewer than five times. He also enters the childhood of the murderer Zhao Xiaolong and kills the man disguised as a woman. The system's intertwining mechanisms transform the originally smooth and easy-to-understand plot into a complex, suspenseful detective story.

Character characteristics
The protagonist Wenjie, this is the name of the idol, right?
He is an intern with low emotional intelligence. He always wants to flatter the big boss, but always ends up hitting the horse's leg.

The crime scenes kept turning around and there was no good response, which always wasted the system's six-hour cooling time.

In the end, he resolved violence with violence.

Style characteristics
The overall style is a mess.

In fact, the author could have written this book in a simple and straightforward way, with a little bit of formulaic elements.

But he just had to fight against this not-so-smart system, and he messed around with it over and over again, which not only made it tiring for the readers, but also for himself as a writer.

Maybe he hadn't thought about the tone of the book yet, so he just wrote whatever came to his mind.

The plot is too messy. I can't find a suitable idea to organize it.

Moreover, what affects the reading experience is that each chapter is divided into three sections and switches back and forth in the form of three scenes.

Reading this kind of book is particularly tiring.

At first, I thought the introduction was meant to be funny and attention-grabbing.

As a result, I really wanted to laugh.

Big brother, can we cut the crap and just tell the story properly?

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
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【Cang's Ramblings】

This book is quite difficult to read.

The Silver Alliance is very suspicious.

Quality labels are hard-earned.

The story is a mess.

The language is hard to compliment.

I am considered an immune reader, but I didn't expect to fall into this little ditch.

He may be trying his best to create a sense of suspense, but it is more of a sense of mystery and doubt.

He might have wanted to show off his reasoning ability, but in the end he solved it with a single knife.

At this point, I have every reason to believe that this author friend is a newcomer.

Alas, it is really enviable to be able to create a masterpiece in just one year of writing.

If you think my words are too harsh, you can try it yourself.

Let's verify our resistance to toxicity together~
(End of this chapter)