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Chapter 352: 347. Comments on "I Log in to the Heaven-shading in the Holy Ruins"

Today I would like to recommend to you a fan fiction of "The Holy Ruins" and "The Great Ruler".

"I am in the Holy Ruins and I am in the Heaven-shading World", level 4, level 1 author.

Category: Light novel-derivative fan fiction.

【Introduction】

When Ye Xuan was reading the latest chapter of "Sacred Ruins", he accidentally learned from the chapter description that his favorite fantasy masterpiece "The Great Ruler" had been turned into a game, so he paid attention to it with a nostalgic attitude.

But surprisingly, he just randomly split the screen of the GKD game platform and actually won the internal test code that countless people had been seeking.

He was still wondering if it was a pie in the sky, but he didn't expect that his lovely "Huawei Ji" would suddenly emit a ball of nine-colored mysterious light.

Ye Xuan closed his eyes and opened them again, and he traveled to the world of "Holy Ruins" with the "Zhantian" game platform!

Punch the demons and monsters in the world, walk on the bumpy road to immortality, work hard and spend money to continue the invincible legend!

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: Journey to the Sacred Ruins. The protagonist, Ye Xuan, is reading "The Great Ruler" when, after downloading a mobile game via split-screen, he travels to the Sacred Ruins world. At the archery range, he sees Chu Feng and Lin Nuoyi leaving after shooting. A system sound plays, and the mobile game page opens, revealing a fairly comprehensive set of features.

Chapter 2: Ancient Martial Arts Tai Chi. He used a ten-fold draw to test his character, particularly with the Xuan Ji Sutra he coveted. Instead, he drew a pile of fragments, none of which were of any use. As for exchanging skills, he chose Tai Chi and began practicing at the Archery Dojo. The results were remarkable, equivalent to the skill of an ordinary person practicing for over ten years.

Chapter 3: Punching Zuo Jun. The protagonist is checking out the system mall when someone suddenly barges in. It's Zuo Jun, a member of the Celestial Creatures. He asks the protagonist for a lock of Chu Feng's hair, but the protagonist flatly refuses. Unwilling to accept this, Zuo Jun tries to teach the protagonist a lesson, but instead gets taught a lesson.

Chapter 4: Bustling with activity. After sending Zuo Jun away, the protagonist continues practicing Tai Chi. When he begins to feel unwell, he takes a drop of the system-provided herbal liquid, which surprisingly cleanses and strengthens the bones. After finishing his part-time job at the archery dojo, he rushes to the cafeteria for lunch, but can't stand the smell of the food. He then runs into Su Lingxi, who's handing out flyers for a marathon. Upon learning the race offers a 5,000 yuan prize, he's thrilled.

Chapter 5: Noontime Boxing Practice. The protagonist returns to the archery arena at noon to continue his boxing practice. With the magical effects of the Herbal Liquid, not only does his Tai Chi skills improve rapidly, but his physical fitness also improves significantly. During the afternoon marathon, he encounters Chu Feng and Zhang Zhihe, and learns that someone is inquiring about him.

Chapter 6: Goddess Lin, come on! The marathon begins, and the protagonist and the others follow closely behind their leading teammates, running at a very fast pace. Lin Nuoyi kindly reminds them to pay attention to their pace when running a marathon, and never run too fast, otherwise their bodies will collapse. To save for their tuition, the protagonist offers to race Lin Nuoyi, and their pace suddenly increases significantly, cheering her on. Chu Feng, seeing this, also accelerates.

Chapter 7, Green Velvet Hat. The protagonist was incredibly fast, leading the pack. He was also feeling fatigued, but after drinking a Nutri-Express bar laced with Baicao Liquid, he immediately regained his energy and successfully won the championship. He then subtly revealed that Tianshen Biological Company had obtained information about Chu Feng's hair and assigned Lin Nuoyi to handle it.

Chapter 8: A Date with Lin Nuoyi. The protagonist dines with Chu Feng, revealing that Chu Feng's physique is unusual. He then receives a payment message from Lin Nuoyi, along with a request for a meeting. Upon meeting, the protagonist reveals his long-standing practice of family Tai Chi, his experience with magical pollen, and his willingness to collaborate with Tianshen Biology.

Chapter 9: Nighttime Exploration of the Forest. Lin Nuoyi receives a call about strange happenings deep within Yunlin Mountain, and the Pre-Qin Research Institute has been dispatched. The protagonist is about to leave, but Lin Nuoyi drags him along to the forest to carry out his mission. When they arrive at Yueshan Temple, judging by the bodies found on the ground, it's likely the work of a purple zombie.

Chapter 10: Night Battle with the Purple Zombie. They continued deeper into Yueshan Temple and, as expected, encountered a mutated zombie. Lin Nuoyi's two men attacked together, followed by the protagonist, who tore the zombie like a toy. His Tai Chi skills also reached the eighth level. Lin Nuoyi, accustomed to life and death, remained expressionless, and the protagonist acted as a dog-licker.

【Brief Comment】

Qianjin Four, a level 1 author, has two works to his name. The previous one has been aborted, so it’s better not to mention it.

Just talking about "I Log in to the Holy Ruins to Cover the Sky", the content and the title are a perfect match.

From Chapters 1 to 17, the protagonist, Ye Xuan, a time traveler, arrives in the Holy Ruins world, equipped with the system bonuses from the mobile game "The Great Ruler." He redeems Tai Chi from ancient texts and uses Hundred Herb Liquid as a medicinal ingredient, improving both his Tai Chi rank and his physique.

He made an appointment with Lin Nuoyi and agreed to join Tianshen Biological Company and become an ally of Goddess Lin.

That night, he accompanied Miss Lin to Yueshan Temple to fight zombies, and was incredibly brave. He also saved Lu Shiyun and gave her a little Baicao Liquid. The latter was so excited that she thought she had traveled through time and wanted to become the protagonist's apprentice.

After getting rid of Lu Shiyun, the protagonist started playing the mobile game "Zhan Tian" in the hotel room.

The story style also completely shifts to the world of "The Great Ruler" from Chapter 18, "Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin", to the latest Chapter 143.

While playing a mobile game, he unexpectedly gave it the feeling of a real-life immersive online game, where he could fight monsters, grab treasures, and play an important role in various classic scenes in "The Great Ruler".

The protagonist of the book, Ye Xuan, not only snatched away Chu Feng's role and his beloved goddess Lin Nuoyi, but also snatched away Ye Fan's luck in the mobile game, becoming the biggest winner in the game.

If the skills and mental methods in the game can be fed back into reality (which should be achieved in the form of a game store), then the protagonist will be quite powerful.

His appearance will result in Chu Feng in the Holy Ruins world not only being unable to become the "Emperor of the Jar", but he may not even be able to be a war correspondent, and Chu Feng's shadow may never be seen on the Pollen Road again.

If true, it seems pretty good.

Because many readers have been following "The Holy Ruins", they don't want to see Chu Feng as a background figure, but want to see the trio of Shi Hao, Ye Fan and Ye Fan.

So, this book is quite powerful. It directly destroyed the two main characters of the "Jade the Sky" trilogy and put all the luck on itself.

Also, to be honest, I have read a lot of fan fiction about The Great Ruler, but this is the first time I have seen fan fiction about The Holy Ruins.

Apart from the relatively unfamiliar characters and very cheerful plot, this book is quite worth reading. At least it can satisfy those readers who have been trying hard to read "The Sacred Ruins" but failed. It can be regarded as a craving for it.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
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【Cang's Ramblings】

The creativity of today's book is pretty good, but the writing experience is obviously insufficient and the rhythm control is a bit chaotic.

But as a fan fiction, what else can you ask for? Let him go to heaven?

So, if you are a fan of "The Great Ruler" or "Saint Ruins", you might want to check out this rather interesting fan fiction.

It's rare to find a reader with such perseverance to write a book like this!

Definitely a true fan of Chen Dong, amazing~
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