Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 385 381. Comments on "Heaven's Coming"

Today I would like to recommend to you a book that I have always wanted to recommend but didn’t know how to do.

"Heaven is Coming", Misty Jiangnan, Level 4 author.

Category: Fantasy-Another World.

【Introduction】

Chu Jungui was a top-secret experimental subject bred using forbidden techniques during the heyday of the Tang Dynasty, in an attempt to create a deep-space warrior capable of conquering any corner of the galaxy. However, an unexpected incident allowed him to escape the experimental base, breaking free from his limitations and gaining an independent personality. From then on, in this era of interstellar exploration, he conquered all corners of the world, traversing the galaxy, ultimately ushering in a new era for humanity.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: Who Am I? He woke up and followed his programmed life: breakfast, ocean view, flight, and arrival at base. He began training, completing the first two tasks smoothly. However, a minor mishap occurred during the intelligent personality test. He seemed to realize something.

Chapter 2, Memory No. 7. He is a deep space warrior, but his mind is disturbed by the strange questions asked by the experimenters. The base is mysteriously attacked, and Memory No. 7 is obtained by Dr. Chu and eventually placed in his body.

Chapter Three: Against the Tide. The protagonist is granted memories and a name by Dr. Chu, who then arranges a spaceship escape. He then learns that his previous residence and memories were controlled by the Master. He actually resides in a space base. He pilots his spaceship to escape the base, but the enemy closes in. Dr. Chu again pilots his fighter jet, demonstrating his unrivaled combat prowess as he charges towards the enemy.

Chapter 4: Freedom. The spaceship made a space jump and arrived at a brand new planet, where the air and environment were suitable for him to survive. But he kept thinking about Dr. Chu's words, the image of him protecting him while he left, and the earnest advice he left for him.

Chapter 5: Basic Survival. The protagonist used the spaceship's onboard survival tools to dig a trench, assemble tools, and prepare to gain a foothold in this place. However, the air was low on oxygen, and he had trouble breathing.

Chapter 6: Food is the most important thing for people. The protagonist uses existing resources to make lead-acid batteries to ensure he has electricity. He ventures deeper into the forest again, bringing back a large amount of food and tree sap, but unfortunately, he still cannot find a water source. The barbecue made by the small beasts is extremely high in sulfur and tastes terrible, so he can only suppress his sense of taste and force himself to eat.

Chapter 7: Justice and Truth. In the era of interstellar exploration, the experience of his predecessors taught him that firepower is justice, and caliber is truth. He crafted bullets and a pistol, continued penetrating several kilometers, and found a source of water, but stayed away. He then built himself a wooden cabin, mentally forming a blueprint for a heavy machine gun, and successfully completed it.

Chapter 8, Close Combat Firearms. The protagonist finds himself in predator territory, being observed from the shadows. He sets traps around the cabin, and as night falls, he prepares for a counter-hunt. After a fierce confrontation, he kills a bug-man. These monsters have thick skin and flesh, but their intelligence is not high.

Chapter 9, is that really all right? A spaceship descends, dropping numerous soldiers, leading the protagonist to believe they're hunting him. In a cunning ambush, he witnesses a soldier being knocked down by a teammate, then finds an opportunity to knock out another. Judging by their weaponry, this group may be merely conducting individual training exercises.

Chapter 10: The Mysterious Player. The protagonist attempts to withdraw from the group's training arena, but is mistaken for an opponent. He fights back with all his might, quickly and easily dispatching several of the attackers. His exceptional skills and abilities arouse the suspicion of the commander aboard the spacecraft, but they refrain from dispatching drones for reconnaissance. The protagonist has finally encountered a powerful figure of status.

【Brief Comment】

Yanyu Jiangnan is a Level 4 author, and currently has three works under his name: "Six Traces of the Empty City in the Dream Realm", "Daoyuan Floating Pagoda", and "The Coming of Tian'a".

I don't know where "Profanation", "Dust Bond", "The Demon Hunter Notes", "City of Sin" and "The King of Eternal Night" have gone. They may have been sealed.

本书2019年1月1日上架，首订6300，1月2日达成精品。目前起点收藏19万，书城收藏2.34万，粉丝数41万，盟主29位。

In my impression, he shouldn't be a level 4 author. I found out from relevant channels that he was a level 5 author before.

Demoted?
And his "Blasphemy" is a masterpiece, and based on this book, he should be a god-level author. Could it be that he ran away?
There are thousands of online writers, and some of them may have really left the country.

His book "The Coming of God" is currently being updated slowly and is in a state of being interrupted. I don't know what's going on.

Because from the content point of view, it is a pretty good science fiction work, not much related to fantasy. It is a story about interstellar civilization and super soldiers.

The protagonist is an experimental subject used to conquer the starry sea. Unfortunately, the base was attacked. He was able to escape under the protection of Dr. Chu, and successfully landed on a planet suitable for survival with the identity, memories and hopes left by the other party.

However, the planet is extremely difficult to open up. Fortunately, the protagonist is an experimental subject with strong physical fitness and survival ability in the wild. He can make various equipment, energy and weapons, so he can barely survive.

It was just a coincidence that he encountered a military training of a certain unit. After being involved in it, in order to protect himself, he had to show his super individual combat ability and won the favor of a big shot.

He finally returned to the civilized world, was entrusted with an important task, and started a new life.

This book is quite good, but it is a bit boring and long-winded in the early part. There are too many descriptions of survival in the wilderness, which makes people fall asleep.

However, the detailed settings and knowledge reserves are still quite impressive, and it can be seen that the author has a strong foundation. The fighting is also very intense and the rhythm is good.

There are just fewer memes, the jokes are a bit off, it's not light and joyful enough, and it's more like traditional science fiction literature.

Coupled with the fact that the updates are not very powerful, the results may not meet expectations.

After the vicious cycle, the motivation to write has dropped a lot, and there is a high possibility that the work will end in failure.

This is online literature, no one is treated preferentially!
【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

The author we are talking about today has a name that is somewhat similar to the legendary author of "The Dragon Clan".

The level is actually not much different, only the degree of popularity is different.

Just like the platinum writer I Eat Tomatoes and the great writer Tomato, the names are similar, but the fame is very different.

There is absolutely no way to deal with this kind of thing. The name Chenji Tang Hongdou is very meaningful, but the performance of the new book is not good.

This is online literature, no one is treated preferentially.

I would advise new authors to persevere. If you can’t make it, then keep persevering.

If you can't make it, just change your career. You can't waste your time hanging on the same tree!

(End of this chapter)