Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 469 465. Comments on "The Immortal Man of Thousand Years"

Today I would like to introduce to you a fantasy novel of 111 million words.

"The Immortal for Thousands of Years", the Ninth Destiny, level 5 author.

Category: Xianxia-Mythical Cultivation.

【Introduction】

Literary Edition:
The stars are shining, and my writings are radiant. I follow the idle clouds and leave the imperial city. I refine a pill in the outer world, and write a hundred poems in a drunken stupor.

Hutian has its own eternal spring realm, and the islands are peaceful and peaceful. Breaking through the road beyond the blue sky and clouds, the nine heavens are proud of the Xihuang.

The dream of yellow grain is over, and all things are over. The mirage tower is no longer visible in the mist. Cooked into lead and mercury for three thousand days, it leaped out of yin and yang for eight hundred autumns.

The sword hangs on the Dou Nan Kui Bei, its aura stretches across the sky and over the moon. When it comes, it picks up a flawless mirror and sticks it high in the sky, refusing to retract it.

Popular version:
A modern man travels back to the Shang Dynasty. At this time, the Emperor of Heaven has collapsed, a sage has appeared in the world, the phoenix is ​​singing in Xiqi, and the eight hundred princes are in unrest.

The three religions jointly promote the List of Gods, but the protagonist unknowingly gets on the Shang Dynasty chariot, and the story begins here.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1: Hanging Himself. The protagonist, Yu Qi, travels to the Shang Dynasty, where he is so poor he's starving to death. Without a system, his family is nearly dead. He finally reaches his parents' grave and attempts suicide, only to be saved by a wealthy young woman.

Chapter 2: Hanging from the southeast branch again. This place is the Zhou family's property, so the protagonist needs to go elsewhere if he wants to commit suicide. Miss Zhou throws him some food and leaves with her maid. The protagonist maintains his integrity in front of others and doesn't rush to eat, but behind the scenes, he disregards all this, determined to die of gluttony. Finally, the hanging is successful, and the system activates. He can no longer see what he won in the consecutive draws, as his vision has gone black.

Chapter 3, Tian Gang Bian. The protagonist is rescued from the tree again and given food. After the others leave, the protagonist begins to collect system rewards. Unexpectedly, the technique he draws is from someone else's novel, "Tian Gang Bian."

Chapter 4: The world is in chaos. With the help of the system, the protagonist has achieved a basic level of cultivation, as the standard pore spray for xianxia techniques has already appeared. On his way home, he bathed in the river. He encountered an old man secretly cooking dog meat, but he didn't rush to eat it. Later, his sister finally found him, and his only relative burst into tears.

Chapter 5, The Art of Fighting. The protagonist follows his sister to her husband's family, the Sun family. Her sister brings out the food, but before the protagonist can even take a few bites, her sister's mother-in-law knocks it over. A long-simmering conflict erupts, and the protagonist strikes the Sun family father and son, deciding to leave the place completely.

【Brief Comment】

The Ninth Destiny, a Level 5 author, is the author of six works, including "The Legacy of Shen Gongbao," "The First-Rank Dao Sect," and "The Supreme Talisman." "The Immortal Thousand Years" currently has 85,200 followers on Qidian.com, 5836 on Bookstore, 160,000 followers, seven alliance leaders, and one silver alliance member. Released on July 10th, it received 1700 initial orders and achieved premium status on September 10th. This is his fourth premium Xianxia novel.

This is an old author. His works are basically completed successfully and have a good reputation.

The feeling this book gives me is that the writing skills are quite mature, the details are set more rigorously, and the style tends to be light-hearted and funny.

After all, a system that requires two suicides to activate is quite unique. The author even gave the system's newbie reward a chance to win someone else's book through a lottery.

The key point is that the book titled "Tian Gang Bian" doesn't seem to be very well-known in the martial arts world. Could it be that the person is the author's fake name?

The question now is whether the protagonist's novice rewards are so incredible and whether he can control them in the later stages. These are probably what the author should think about.

All in all, this book is okay, and the title is quite attractive to me.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

This book is quite controversial. Some people like it, while others ridicule it.

From the writer's perspective, every word in a novel is the author's hard work and no one is allowed to point fingers at it.

If you want advice, please give yourself some advice.

From the perspective of readers' reading experience and authors' pursuit of improvement, whether it is a positive or negative review, it is feedback from readers and a rare opportunity for authors to improve themselves.

So, please don’t scold me, just show more care.

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