Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 912 908. Comments on "Journey West Alone"

Hello everyone, I am Cang Yiwei.

Today I would like to recommend a short story to you.

"Journey to the West Alone", Feigua, level 5 author.

Category: Xianxia-Mythical Cultivation.

【Introduction】

I didn't know what the point of going west was, but this thought was like a thorn, piercing the most sensitive part of my brain. I couldn't feel at peace until I stepped onto the top of the sea of ​​clouds again.

【Brief Comment】

He has 6 novels to his name, including "Madhouse of All Worlds" and "Famous Detective Training Manual".

He is very talented and his writing style is a bit imaginative, so it is easy for him to leave his books unfinished or end them casually.

I have introduced the two books above before, and they are both very wonderful.

He started another book, "Journey to the West Alone", and the famous detective was also updated simultaneously.

The result of the double opening is that "Journey to the West Alone" is probably finished.

There are two reasons for this: one is the inability to open both offices and the other is poor academic performance.

This book took me almost two months to write, and it only has 15 chapters and 29,000 words.

It can be regarded as a record of a certain mood or an attempt.

Maybe he decided not to continue writing, or maybe his performance was too bad, after all, the number of collections did not even exceed a thousand.

How can there be too many collections with such an uncomfortable updating method?

The reason why I want to bring this up for everyone to see is not to criticize his eunuchs, but to point out that this book has a feeling of "The Legend of Sun Wukong".

When I was in the first year of high school, I watched "The Monkey King", which was sold at a roadside stall, but I didn't have money to buy it.

Later, "The Legend of Wukong" became a masterpiece. The story is quite sad, and Wukong and everyone else are tinged with sadness. Zixia, Xiyang, the fairy Chang'e, and so on, are all characters that easily evoke sad memories.

The subsequent follow-up works such as "The Legend of Sha Seng" and "The Legend of Bajie" also have a considerable market.

Today's book "Journey to the West Alone" also has the same sad mood and prose-poetry style.

Sun Wukong, the only demon in the world, is defeated by Jin Chanzi, bloodshed fills the mortal world, and a clan of demons emerges. Losing his memory and magical powers, Wukong wanders into the mortal world, encountering Patriarch Bodhi, the ginseng fruit, and Zhu Bajie, while being pursued by the Third Prince and the Giant Spirit.

This book has no specific chapter titles, but is a series of relatively random stories. The coherence is not very good, and there are not many prominent contradictions. The writing seems to be creating a hazy and sad atmosphere. The author seems to be just explaining something he is observing and is not very enthusiastic about writing the story.

Currently, this book has stopped updating, which ended on June 29th. I don’t know if it will be updated again, but it’s very slow anyway.

Therefore, I think he should submit this book to the short story category, so that even if the story is short and the update is slow, readers can still accept it to some extent.

You can go and take a look at it, just treat it as a short story.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment.

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”.

Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

I like this book, even though it has few words and a bad ending, because it is very interesting and the artistic conception is really fairy-like.

But it is destined not to be suitable for online serialization, and can only be treated as a short story. The main plot is indeed vague.

If you are interested in it, you can learn from it and find the feeling of your youth.

His other books are more in line with market demand and have performed quite well.

He has tried many styles, is passionate about writing, and has outstanding imagination. Please support him.
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