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Chapter 154 Dragon Snake!Lu Xiaofeng!

There is a problem with the layout of the chapters in "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng", but in fact it is not a problem.This was the case for martial arts novels in the 80s and 2s, but this kind of segmentation method was not suitable for the text. Take the first part as an example, including the introduction, there are only twelve chapters in total, and one chapter counts 3 characters, which is [-]k on the Internet. With the [-]k chapter division method, there must be at least three to five chapters.

In fact, "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" is really similar to detective novels, they are all puzzles one after another. Of course, the connection between cases is stronger than that of detective novels.

The whole book is actually composed of seven series—Legend of Lu Xiaofeng (also known as Jinpeng Dynasty), Embroidered Thief, Before and After the Decisive Battle, Silver Hook Gambling House, Ghost Villa, Nine Heavens of Phoenix Dance, and Smile of the Sword God.

Besides, if you really want to write, you can also write Lu Xiaofeng's prequel, the legend of iron shoes, and the mystery of blood clothes.

The first seven are mature, but the latter three are just adaptations of film and television works, and Su Shichen needs to write them himself.

Someone once said that Jin Yong's writing style is difficult to imitate but Gu Long's writing style is easy to imitate. Su Shichen could only laugh at this.

In fact, on the contrary, Gu Long's writing style is more difficult to imitate than Jin Yong's. According to the book "Jin Yong's Biography" written by Leng Xia, Jin Yong's writing style is characterized by conciseness, and almost every word and sentence is written to promote the development of the plot. , it is completely appropriate to describe it in words.

Leng Xia made a conclusion: Jin Yong's writing is so good mainly because of four reasons: first, Jin Yong read a lot of martial arts novels when he was a teenager, and the accumulation is very good; A newspaper editor, wrote a lot of comments and reports on current affairs, and a lot of actual combat; thirdly, Jin Yong has experienced more than ordinary people. Under the care of the islanders, his family was ruined, and his emotional character has been honed; The last point is that Jin Yong himself is a surprisingly intelligent person, and he has a very high attainment in ancient Chinese prose and traditional literature.Su Shichen personally thinks that the last point is more important.

Jin Yong's writing style is to read more, practice more, experience more and accumulate four more. As long as these four points are completed, Jin Yong's writing style can definitely imitate more than 80.00%.

And Gu Long, do you think you really wrote a few words?

dead

he is a dead man

dead people don't move

He's dead so he can't move...

In this case, it can be regarded as an imitation of Gu Long's pen style?

Gu Long can definitely be said to be a prodigal son, with many girlfriends but few people denounced him as inappropriate, but Jin Yong only divorced once but has the reputation of a heartless man.

Jin Yong believes in love, and thinks that love is greater than friendship. Maybe this has something to do with not being able to catch up with Xia Meng when he was young, and don’t you see that the cousins ​​in Jin Yong’s novels are all bad guys, Murong Fu in Tianlong, and Liancheng Jue. Wang Xiaofeng.

Of course, this is not the most coincidental, the most coincidental is that Jin Yong's cousin is Xu Zhimo who said goodbye to Cambridge, and what is even more coincidental is that Xu Zhimo has a pen name called Yunzhonghe...

So Su Shichen thinks that in order to become the next Jin Yong, in addition to imitating writing, you must also have a cousin, a cousin like Xu Zhimo, and it is best that the pen name of this cousin is also the name of a silver thief .

Gu Long's views on love and values ​​are completely different. Gu Long is a man who believes that friendship is more important than love. In his novels, the opposition between love and friendship can often be seen, especially the bird man Li Xunhuan who abandoned love for friendship.

Gu Long is a prodigal, so most of the protagonists in the novel are prodigal sons; Gu Long is addicted to alcohol, so he drank himself to death;

Therefore, reading Gu Long's words carefully reveals a kind of chicness and loneliness. This kind of chicness and loneliness is closely related to Gu Long's experience and character, how can it be easy to imitate! !

Therefore, it is very difficult for Su Shichen to write "The Prequel of Lu Xiaofeng", "The Legend of Iron Shoes", and "The Mystery of Blood Clothes" with the style of an antique dragon. The series is less than a million words, which is really too small, and I am in a dilemma. In the end, after thinking twice, I am going to give it a try.

Divide the most beautiful proprietress in Chapter 1 into chapters [-], [-], and [-], the most beautiful proprietress, and send out the surnames one at a time.

In fact, many readers have been stuck on the catalog page of "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng", and then clicked to refresh, and there are quite a few people who have done this. In their words, f5 has been broken, and there are several minutes in the backstage The delay, that is, after Su Shichen posted the appearance for 3 minutes, finally appeared.

Groups of readers are hungry, and [-] words in three chapters is a matter of a few minutes for some readers who only read the dialogue and not other readers, so the updated three chapters are read by these readers after a few minutes, Lin Yan is Such a reader, but she suddenly felt a pain in the egg after a few minutes of reading, well, she just had a stomachache because she didn't have eggs.

Lin Yan became Su Shichen's book fan because of her love of "Fights Break Sphere". Although she is a girl, she just likes "Fights Break Sphere", which is slapped in the face, even with hands. As for ordinary people, she doesn't like some painful novels. Later, she also read a lot of books that pretended to slap her face, but Lin Yan felt that none of them were as thorough as Doupo's pretense.

That's why Lin Yan has always felt that she is still unsatisfied. Although Su Shichen's new book is only for martial arts, she still supports it without hesitation. But now she reads the updated chapter of "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" and she can't understand it. Now Lin Yan is Yunli The feeling of being in the fog.

Then Lin Yan felt that Su Shichen's writing was getting worse and worse. Even for ordinary people, she only had a dull feeling and didn't feel that she couldn't understand it.

It's just that the writing is getting worse, Lin Yan is angry, not only there is no book like Dou Po Cangong, but it is a novel that she can't even read, how can you tell Lin Yan not to be angry?

In order to eliminate her anger, Lin Yan was about to post a post, yes, she was about to post a post, and not posting a post was not enough to cause people to be angry, so she dragged the mouse, and saw other readers' comments in a blink of an eye——

"Ximen Chuixue Bingshan male god, Huamanlou perfect male god, I was still wondering what kind of person the protagonist would be, but he is a big slob and a pervert." ——Feng Xiaoqiantong

Lu Xiaofeng is indeed a slob. From the way he drinks, it can be seen that he doesn't want to get up when he lies on the bed, and he doesn't even move when he drinks. In the mouth, this is really laziness has its own laziness, and there are mountains as high as mountains.

"Oye! I finally know why Huamanlou said that Lu Xiaofeng has four eyebrows, and it really has four eyebrows." ——The Man in Black

"Wonderful, I have been reading novels for more than [-] years. In the past two years, I have been reading martial arts novels from the past. People born in the [-]s and [-]s who have not experienced that era will never understand the importance of martial arts in our generation. The love of fiction.

I didn’t read novels before, but my grandson said that a very classic martial arts novel was published. My idea is that people nowadays can’t write martial arts novels that feel like they used to, so I don’t have much interest in it. .

However, under the repeated recommendation of my grandson, I opened it and read "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng". Heaven kills God.

Although it is only about 30 words now, and the introduction is only four chapters, but it can be seen from it that this style of writing is very classic. I seem to have returned to reading martial arts on newspapers and periodicals [-] years ago. When I was in the novel, the passion I hadn’t seen for a long time was ignited again. People with different personalities, this is the first book I followed on the Internet, come on!A reward of one million is not a tribute, and I hope the author can maintain this level in the future! ! "

This is a message from a book friend named Tianbusheng. According to this tone, this person should be over 60 or 1 years old. Considering that his grandson is reading online novels, a reward of one million is [-] yuan. It seems that this day is not only an old book fan, but also an old book fan with a wealthy family. "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" has an extra millionaire.

Lin Yan was stunned. After reading the comments, they all said that "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" is a very good novel. How could she not understand it?Is it because you look too fast?

Lin Yan decided to watch it again seriously, more seriously this time.

The [-]-word plot has not yet unfolded, so it would be a lie to say that you are attracted by the plot. Lin Yan is attracted by the characters in the novel.

"This man named Zhu Ting is so funny that he even said, 'The child wants to pee, the wife wants to steal, this is something no one can control, what can I do if I don't sit? Go to the room and do somersaults? Roll on the ground and crawl." 'In this case."

Lin Yan giggled, the protagonist Lu Xiaofeng is a pervert, and Zhu Ting's wife is a beautiful woman, a lonely man and a widow. Which man knows that he may be cuckolded is not jumping and jumping impatiently. He is not like Zhu Ting. Unless you don't care about your wife anymore.

But it's not that Zhu Ting doesn't love his wife, he doesn't care but he trusts Lu Xiaofeng and his wife very much.

"I have a good sense of trust. I will find a boyfriend like Zhu Ting in the future. No matter what I do, I must trust me wholeheartedly." Only then did I find my true son, and mourn in silence for a girl who was cheated by Su Shichen again...

Generally speaking, the first Jinpeng Dynasty in the legend of Lu Xiaofeng is quite powerful, and in this one, both the iceberg male god and the perfect male god will appear.

Although the plot has not yet unfolded, there is a big suspense left. Lu Xiaofeng is a lazy person. Even if someone fights with life and death in front of him, and may even endanger his own life, he can lie motionless on the bed , you can imagine how lazy this is.

Lu Xiaofeng is fully qualified to say that sentence: "Don't compare me to being lazy, I'm lazy to compare with you."

It was such a lazy person lying on the bed in the room, a princess with a very powerful background came to Lu Xiaofeng's room, thinking that she was here to trouble Lu Xiaofeng, after all Lu Xiaofeng is a big pervert, but this stunning princess has nothing to do with Lu Xiaofeng. Knelt down, and then a more turning scene appeared, the lazy Lu Xiaofeng actually jumped up from the bed and fled without a trace.

This is really strange, when the stunning princess knelt down for him, Lu Xiaofeng actually fled, as if he was very frightened, he was not afraid that someone might die at any time in a life-and-death battle in his room, but now he is actually frightened.

Puzzled, and even more puzzling is yet to come, when Princess Jue Se saw Lu Xiaofeng's actions, she said: "He is indeed a smart man, extremely smart!"

Nima?What is the logic?

A stunning princess knelt down, then Lu Xiaofeng ran away, and became a smart person, what is going on.

Lin Yan was curious, so when she clicked on the next chapter, a screen of interaction among readers of "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" appeared.

Gone!

The angry Lin Yan almost smashed the mouse, Lin Yan is not only a book fan who is curious, just read the latest book reviews to know——

"This chapter is too f*cking broken, please follow up chapters."

"I beseech the Prophecy Emperor, why did the princess kneel down and scare the peerless lazy Lu Xiaofeng into a panic, and why did Lu Xiaofeng become an extremely smart person after escaping? What kind of logic is this?"

"The sky is begging for the fourth watch, if I don't figure it out, I might not be able to sleep today"...

The text of "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" is good, almost everything that should be there, and what should not be.

What should be there?There are fights, protruding characters, and sex. These are the things that should be there, and the things that shouldn't be there are the pitfalls of the ending.

"The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" was a success, and another book "The Romance of the Dragon and Snake" is also showing its power... (To be continued.)

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