Reborn great writer
Chapter 376 Tang Lingyu
[A train slowly pulls out of the station, the carriages are full of women and children, hardly a strong man in sight. In one carriage sat a grey-haired veteran of the war reservists, and beside him was a frail and sickly old woman.Apparently she was alone in thought, and the passengers heard her counting: "One, two, three," over the "chuck-chuck-chuck" of the wheels.After a pause, she repeated the count from time to time.Seeing this strange behavior, the two little girls gesticulated and laughed without thinking.An old man gave them a hard look, and then the carriage became quiet. ]
And just like the title, the numbers 1, 2, and 3 should be very important, and there are many important repetitions, but it is difficult for Robin to figure out what these numbers mean in the article.
He said in public before that if Su Shichen can't write a novel of that high level, he can't ask others to write it, but now Su Shichen has published a novel, which is self-evident.
Robin wants to see what kind of short stories Su Shichen can write—?
["One, two, three," the delirious old woman repeated.
The two little girls giggled again.
At this time, the gray-haired reserve veteran stood up and spoke. "Miss," he said, "you will probably stop laughing when I tell you that poor lady is my wife. We have just lost three sons who died in the war. Now it is my turn." Going to the front line myself. Before I go, I have to send their mother to the madhouse."
There was an eerie silence in the carriage. ]
It was a very short novel, which could even be read in a few seconds, but Robin was silent for a long time after reading it.
After a while, I said: "So this 1, 2, 3 means this." The old woman in the article kept repeating these three numbers on the train, as if she was a baby of how old, and finally The truth revealed is beyond human phenomena.
The 1, 2, and 3 that the old woman counted were originally counting her three sons.The three sons died on the front line, and now the elderly husband is going to the battlefield. The whole novel only has more than 300 words.And it did not directly say that we should be peaceful and should not fight wars, nor did it directly reveal any anti-war intentions. Of course, if you describe it directly, more than 300 words will not do much.
But sometimes the side effects are even more shocking, and those who have read this mini-fiction seriously should feel it.
If it wasn't for the war, the old woman wouldn't be crazy, if it wasn't for the war, her three sons wouldn't have died, and if it wasn't for the war, the family wouldn't have been destroyed. It's this profile that makes people ponder.
"It can be described to this extent in a miniature novel of only [-] words. Su's ability to control words is too terrifying." Anyway, Robin thought he couldn't do it.
Such a miniature novel is more than one level higher than his "World Love". "Love of the World" is more than [-] characters he crafted meticulously, and it directly reaches the meaning of anti-war at the end of the novel through three connected short stories.The structure and concept are very good, but in comparison, Robin found that the anti-war shock brought by his own "Love of the World" was not as great as this "hree".
"Looking at it this way, I am completely unqualified to say that." How could such a person be an outsider, and what he said in public before was completely a joke.
After logging in to Morester, Robin published such an article with his account as a contestant author...?
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"Very good, indeed very good, but it did not meet my requirements, so zero points."
"Zero points. As for the reason, it still didn't meet my requirements."
"Although a gentleman can't make a lady sad, I'm sorry, zero points."
"Zero points..."
……
"God, the cruel judges have started again." A female audience present suddenly shouted.
Indeed, it started again. Ever since Su Shichen scored ten points for the first time, everyone thought that Su Shichen had bowed his head due to pressure, but the second and third followed by zero points.
I don't understand what Su Shichen is doing with this rhythm at all.You said he didn't bow his head, but why should he score ten for being the first one?If you say he bowed his head, what does it mean that he has been getting zero points now?not understand.
"It's really crazy, dare to be unscrupulous under such circumstances." Frey sighed.
Today's No.15 author, Tom, is a black man. From yesterday to today, more than 40 authors have come here, including all kinds of people, although most of them feel polite, But there are also a lot of rude ones, but like Tom, there are really few.
According to the information, it should be a student, but the clothes are quite non-mainstream, with rivets one by one on the clothes, a finger-thick chain hanging from the dark jeans, and the hairstyle that looks like a sunflower blooming. She doesn't look like a student at all.The most important thing is that as soon as this guy came on stage, his eyes stayed on Su Shichen, and he couldn't move his eyes away.
There is eagerness in the gaze, this kind of gaze is like a fan seeing the male god he admires, it's okay if a girl stares at him with this kind of gaze, but this is a man, Su Shichen feels uncomfortable all over comfortable.
Therefore, it was supposed to be asked by Frey, the deputy editor-in-chief of "Global", but Su Shichen couldn't stand this look and spoke first: "Mr. Tom, tell me the reason why you wrote this article."
"Sue, I posted "A Black Man's Dream" on my wall, and I can read it every day when I wake up, and "A Dream of a Rebel" is very well written. I believe Sue you can Write short stories with profound meaning." Tom spoke with a hoarse accent, unable to conceal his excitement.
The short story he wrote highlights his longing for a better life, and it seems to be an imitation of Su Shichen's "A Black Man's Dream".
In contrast, the college entrance examination composition "A Dream of a Rebel" is far less famous than "A Black Man's Dream".The former only caused a small range of discussions, but the latter can be regarded as the article with the most translated languages.
Seeing Tom's expression, if it wasn't because of the venue, I believe Tom would have rushed towards Su Shichen directly.
"We understand your agitation, but please answer the questions now," Frey added.
"My friends and I, a total of more than a dozen people participated in this competition because Su was the judge of the Morest short story competition. I didn't expect my short story to come to this point. My classmates and they were all rejected. After being eliminated, it's so cool to be able to meet Sue face to face." Tom said.
"Well, I just want to say that Tom's outfit is really cool." Su Shichen tapped his head, "Tom, are you a rock singer?" If it's a rock singer's outfit, it would be reasonable.
"Rock singer sounds good, but I'm not," Tom replied, "I just feel that I should wear my name."
Starting to score, Mike, Frey, and Liszt scored 22 points. "Tom, I'm sorry." Su Shichen apologized first. ?
Tom waved his hand, "I know. Sue, I didn't meet the requirement of zero points. It's already a pleasant surprise for me to be shortlisted. It's okay." Although it was another zero point, Tom's words made people think about it.
We all know that the number of participants in this Morest short story competition is the largest ever, and the quality of the works is also very good. Now it seems that this effect can be achieved because they have always said that they are not suitable for being a judge Su Shi morning.
Although they are not familiar with "A Dream of a Rebel", "Dream of a Black Man" is widely circulated. Su Shichen, who can write articles with such connotations, really doesn't understand short stories, is he really an outsider?
The reason for saying this is because Su Shichen has no real short stories. Of course, "A Study of Green Letters" and "The Heartbroken" have not been translated, and even if they were translated, they would not have anything to do with this competition.
The No. 16 authors are Chinese. The name Bergman Tang impressed Su Shichen quite deeply, and he thought it was very good during the review.But when the author himself came up, Su Shichen was really taken aback. He knew the person who came, and it was Tang Lingyu whom he hadn't seen for a long time.
I haven't seen her for several years. Now Tang Lingyu is slim and graceful, with a delicate appearance. She doesn't have a childlike face like Zhao Dandan. She is close to Wang Ni, like an iceberg, but she is a little different.Tang Lingyu felt as if she was making fire on top of an iceberg, even a little bit of temperature couldn't resist the cold.The indifferent smile on the corner of his mouth couldn't conceal the cold breath. ?
"9 points, the writing is exquisite, and the scene is very small, just a coffin and a person, but a very large world is elicited through the phone." Liszt was the first to give an excellent evaluation, "Of course I am very interested in Huaxia's If you don’t understand the national conditions, you should ask Editor-in-Chief Frey about this.”
Frey stayed in China for half a year, so regarding China's national conditions, "I've always heard that the department with the strongest comprehensive strength in China is the relevant department... Well, I don't know if I made a mistake in the translation. According to my understanding, the relevant department should It is an excuse to shirk responsibility, but this article by Ms. Bergman is about a person who was put into a coffin and buried alive, with only one mobile phone to ask for help outside, and called for help from the government, etc., but was made things difficult and shirked, the article The end result is that the phone runs out of battery."
"In this case, the consequences of a dead phone can be imagined. Ms. Bergman's article is very good in terms of details and conception, with a score of 9.6."
"Thank you two judges." It's normal for an author to get such a high evaluation and get a little excited with a high score, but Tang Lingyu's eyes reveal that it is flat, as if her "Buried Alive" can get such a high score. The high score is a matter of course.
"I haven't seen this kind of article for a long time. Bergman, your level can completely open a column on newspapers." Basically, the short stories that can enter the [-] places in the Moreste Short Story Contest are eligible to be published in newspapers. , but Mike's evaluation of Tang Lingyu can directly open a column, which is quite different.
In the end, Mike gave 9.5 points, Liszt 9 points, and Frey 9.6 points. This high score aroused applause. This is already the second highest score this time.
"'Buried Alive' has fully met the requirements in my heart, so 10 points." Su Shichen got the second 38.1 points today, and applauded even more enthusiastically as soon as he finished speaking.The total score is [-] points, which is the highest score so far. If there is no accident, it may be the best of this year. ?
Su Shichen's tone was full of nostalgia, "Long time no see, Mr. Bergman, I didn't expect your writing to be so terrifying now."?In his memory, Tang Lingyu had competed with him when she was still in junior high school, it seemed that it had only been four years.
He is not the only one who has made progress. The "Buried Alive" written by Tang Lingyu has the taste of a master. You must know that Tang Lingyu is only 19 years old now.
Su Shichen's tone was clearly telling everyone that he and Tang Lingyu knew each other.Su Shichen just gave it a full score. Although the novel is of high quality, it should be avoided as much as possible in this situation. Even if you don’t avoid letting it happen, you don’t have to call it out like Su Shichen, as if others don’t know. like.
"Long time no see, as an old classmate." Tang Lingyu said, "Su, is it because we used to be classmates that we are favoritism?"?
"Of course not." Su Shichen shook his head.
"what is that?"
Tang Lingyu asked a question that everyone wanted to know, Su Shichen's weird scoring method, the nickname of the cruel judge was not for nothing, you said he was hyping up and seemed to have gone too far, because laymen couldn't find a head?Then just give an intermediate score at will, there is no need to do this at all.
Confused, everyone waited with bated breath for Su Shichen's answer...?
The story of "Buried Alive" quotes a movie directed by Spanish Cortez, if you are interested, you can go and see it. (To be continued.)
And just like the title, the numbers 1, 2, and 3 should be very important, and there are many important repetitions, but it is difficult for Robin to figure out what these numbers mean in the article.
He said in public before that if Su Shichen can't write a novel of that high level, he can't ask others to write it, but now Su Shichen has published a novel, which is self-evident.
Robin wants to see what kind of short stories Su Shichen can write—?
["One, two, three," the delirious old woman repeated.
The two little girls giggled again.
At this time, the gray-haired reserve veteran stood up and spoke. "Miss," he said, "you will probably stop laughing when I tell you that poor lady is my wife. We have just lost three sons who died in the war. Now it is my turn." Going to the front line myself. Before I go, I have to send their mother to the madhouse."
There was an eerie silence in the carriage. ]
It was a very short novel, which could even be read in a few seconds, but Robin was silent for a long time after reading it.
After a while, I said: "So this 1, 2, 3 means this." The old woman in the article kept repeating these three numbers on the train, as if she was a baby of how old, and finally The truth revealed is beyond human phenomena.
The 1, 2, and 3 that the old woman counted were originally counting her three sons.The three sons died on the front line, and now the elderly husband is going to the battlefield. The whole novel only has more than 300 words.And it did not directly say that we should be peaceful and should not fight wars, nor did it directly reveal any anti-war intentions. Of course, if you describe it directly, more than 300 words will not do much.
But sometimes the side effects are even more shocking, and those who have read this mini-fiction seriously should feel it.
If it wasn't for the war, the old woman wouldn't be crazy, if it wasn't for the war, her three sons wouldn't have died, and if it wasn't for the war, the family wouldn't have been destroyed. It's this profile that makes people ponder.
"It can be described to this extent in a miniature novel of only [-] words. Su's ability to control words is too terrifying." Anyway, Robin thought he couldn't do it.
Such a miniature novel is more than one level higher than his "World Love". "Love of the World" is more than [-] characters he crafted meticulously, and it directly reaches the meaning of anti-war at the end of the novel through three connected short stories.The structure and concept are very good, but in comparison, Robin found that the anti-war shock brought by his own "Love of the World" was not as great as this "hree".
"Looking at it this way, I am completely unqualified to say that." How could such a person be an outsider, and what he said in public before was completely a joke.
After logging in to Morester, Robin published such an article with his account as a contestant author...?
-
"Very good, indeed very good, but it did not meet my requirements, so zero points."
"Zero points. As for the reason, it still didn't meet my requirements."
"Although a gentleman can't make a lady sad, I'm sorry, zero points."
"Zero points..."
……
"God, the cruel judges have started again." A female audience present suddenly shouted.
Indeed, it started again. Ever since Su Shichen scored ten points for the first time, everyone thought that Su Shichen had bowed his head due to pressure, but the second and third followed by zero points.
I don't understand what Su Shichen is doing with this rhythm at all.You said he didn't bow his head, but why should he score ten for being the first one?If you say he bowed his head, what does it mean that he has been getting zero points now?not understand.
"It's really crazy, dare to be unscrupulous under such circumstances." Frey sighed.
Today's No.15 author, Tom, is a black man. From yesterday to today, more than 40 authors have come here, including all kinds of people, although most of them feel polite, But there are also a lot of rude ones, but like Tom, there are really few.
According to the information, it should be a student, but the clothes are quite non-mainstream, with rivets one by one on the clothes, a finger-thick chain hanging from the dark jeans, and the hairstyle that looks like a sunflower blooming. She doesn't look like a student at all.The most important thing is that as soon as this guy came on stage, his eyes stayed on Su Shichen, and he couldn't move his eyes away.
There is eagerness in the gaze, this kind of gaze is like a fan seeing the male god he admires, it's okay if a girl stares at him with this kind of gaze, but this is a man, Su Shichen feels uncomfortable all over comfortable.
Therefore, it was supposed to be asked by Frey, the deputy editor-in-chief of "Global", but Su Shichen couldn't stand this look and spoke first: "Mr. Tom, tell me the reason why you wrote this article."
"Sue, I posted "A Black Man's Dream" on my wall, and I can read it every day when I wake up, and "A Dream of a Rebel" is very well written. I believe Sue you can Write short stories with profound meaning." Tom spoke with a hoarse accent, unable to conceal his excitement.
The short story he wrote highlights his longing for a better life, and it seems to be an imitation of Su Shichen's "A Black Man's Dream".
In contrast, the college entrance examination composition "A Dream of a Rebel" is far less famous than "A Black Man's Dream".The former only caused a small range of discussions, but the latter can be regarded as the article with the most translated languages.
Seeing Tom's expression, if it wasn't because of the venue, I believe Tom would have rushed towards Su Shichen directly.
"We understand your agitation, but please answer the questions now," Frey added.
"My friends and I, a total of more than a dozen people participated in this competition because Su was the judge of the Morest short story competition. I didn't expect my short story to come to this point. My classmates and they were all rejected. After being eliminated, it's so cool to be able to meet Sue face to face." Tom said.
"Well, I just want to say that Tom's outfit is really cool." Su Shichen tapped his head, "Tom, are you a rock singer?" If it's a rock singer's outfit, it would be reasonable.
"Rock singer sounds good, but I'm not," Tom replied, "I just feel that I should wear my name."
Starting to score, Mike, Frey, and Liszt scored 22 points. "Tom, I'm sorry." Su Shichen apologized first. ?
Tom waved his hand, "I know. Sue, I didn't meet the requirement of zero points. It's already a pleasant surprise for me to be shortlisted. It's okay." Although it was another zero point, Tom's words made people think about it.
We all know that the number of participants in this Morest short story competition is the largest ever, and the quality of the works is also very good. Now it seems that this effect can be achieved because they have always said that they are not suitable for being a judge Su Shi morning.
Although they are not familiar with "A Dream of a Rebel", "Dream of a Black Man" is widely circulated. Su Shichen, who can write articles with such connotations, really doesn't understand short stories, is he really an outsider?
The reason for saying this is because Su Shichen has no real short stories. Of course, "A Study of Green Letters" and "The Heartbroken" have not been translated, and even if they were translated, they would not have anything to do with this competition.
The No. 16 authors are Chinese. The name Bergman Tang impressed Su Shichen quite deeply, and he thought it was very good during the review.But when the author himself came up, Su Shichen was really taken aback. He knew the person who came, and it was Tang Lingyu whom he hadn't seen for a long time.
I haven't seen her for several years. Now Tang Lingyu is slim and graceful, with a delicate appearance. She doesn't have a childlike face like Zhao Dandan. She is close to Wang Ni, like an iceberg, but she is a little different.Tang Lingyu felt as if she was making fire on top of an iceberg, even a little bit of temperature couldn't resist the cold.The indifferent smile on the corner of his mouth couldn't conceal the cold breath. ?
"9 points, the writing is exquisite, and the scene is very small, just a coffin and a person, but a very large world is elicited through the phone." Liszt was the first to give an excellent evaluation, "Of course I am very interested in Huaxia's If you don’t understand the national conditions, you should ask Editor-in-Chief Frey about this.”
Frey stayed in China for half a year, so regarding China's national conditions, "I've always heard that the department with the strongest comprehensive strength in China is the relevant department... Well, I don't know if I made a mistake in the translation. According to my understanding, the relevant department should It is an excuse to shirk responsibility, but this article by Ms. Bergman is about a person who was put into a coffin and buried alive, with only one mobile phone to ask for help outside, and called for help from the government, etc., but was made things difficult and shirked, the article The end result is that the phone runs out of battery."
"In this case, the consequences of a dead phone can be imagined. Ms. Bergman's article is very good in terms of details and conception, with a score of 9.6."
"Thank you two judges." It's normal for an author to get such a high evaluation and get a little excited with a high score, but Tang Lingyu's eyes reveal that it is flat, as if her "Buried Alive" can get such a high score. The high score is a matter of course.
"I haven't seen this kind of article for a long time. Bergman, your level can completely open a column on newspapers." Basically, the short stories that can enter the [-] places in the Moreste Short Story Contest are eligible to be published in newspapers. , but Mike's evaluation of Tang Lingyu can directly open a column, which is quite different.
In the end, Mike gave 9.5 points, Liszt 9 points, and Frey 9.6 points. This high score aroused applause. This is already the second highest score this time.
"'Buried Alive' has fully met the requirements in my heart, so 10 points." Su Shichen got the second 38.1 points today, and applauded even more enthusiastically as soon as he finished speaking.The total score is [-] points, which is the highest score so far. If there is no accident, it may be the best of this year. ?
Su Shichen's tone was full of nostalgia, "Long time no see, Mr. Bergman, I didn't expect your writing to be so terrifying now."?In his memory, Tang Lingyu had competed with him when she was still in junior high school, it seemed that it had only been four years.
He is not the only one who has made progress. The "Buried Alive" written by Tang Lingyu has the taste of a master. You must know that Tang Lingyu is only 19 years old now.
Su Shichen's tone was clearly telling everyone that he and Tang Lingyu knew each other.Su Shichen just gave it a full score. Although the novel is of high quality, it should be avoided as much as possible in this situation. Even if you don’t avoid letting it happen, you don’t have to call it out like Su Shichen, as if others don’t know. like.
"Long time no see, as an old classmate." Tang Lingyu said, "Su, is it because we used to be classmates that we are favoritism?"?
"Of course not." Su Shichen shook his head.
"what is that?"
Tang Lingyu asked a question that everyone wanted to know, Su Shichen's weird scoring method, the nickname of the cruel judge was not for nothing, you said he was hyping up and seemed to have gone too far, because laymen couldn't find a head?Then just give an intermediate score at will, there is no need to do this at all.
Confused, everyone waited with bated breath for Su Shichen's answer...?
The story of "Buried Alive" quotes a movie directed by Spanish Cortez, if you are interested, you can go and see it. (To be continued.)
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