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Chapter 196 Modifying the Script
"Do you have a script? I want to read your script." Wei Ya suddenly said.She is a gold medal heroine from the drama club, maybe there is something she can do to help.After all, since it was Yu Xi's stage play, of course she hoped to see the most exciting performance.

"Yes, yes, here." The girl called Sister Lu gave Wei Ya a stage script as long as several pages.After all, it's just a 10-minute stage play, so it won't be too long.However, it is also full of dense words.

Wei Ya is used to looking at three things.To be honest, as the man said before, this script is too ordinary, with no bright spots, and absolutely nothing to attract attention.In this respect, Wei Ya is proficient.

Every play of her play is successful because she knows how to catch the audience's attention, so she committed an occupational disease and wanted to revise the script.

"Well, I have a few suggestions, I wonder if you would like to listen to them." Wei Ya said to Sister Nalu after reading the script.

"Please tell me." Sister Lu nodded. She probably knew in her heart that her script was very ordinary. If she had good suggestions, she would listen to them.

"Here, the knight's dialogue with the sleeping Ye Jinhua, this sentence, this sentence, and this sentence can all be deleted. All the knight has to do is hold Ye Jinhua's hand tightly, and the audience can understand what he wants. Ye Jinhua's love. Most of the audience are adults, so talking too much will be very cumbersome, as long as there is true emotion in the eyes." Wei Ya said pointing to the first paragraph.

"Well, when you put it that way, I think so too. This line does give people a feeling of procrastination." Bai Lu nodded, and then deleted all those lines from the script.

"And the second one is here, the dialogue between the robber and the knight. We can add a little more lines here, and the dialogue of the robber can be more ruthless, so as to draw enough hatred." Wei Ya continued.

"Well, what you said makes sense." Bai Lu continued to listen to Wei Ya's suggestion.

In the end, the script changed a lot and became smoother.But the show is still 10 minutes away, and her cast may not be there in time.

"Can you apply to the organizer that this stage play be moved back for an hour." Wei Ya suggested.

"That's the only way. I also hope that the stage play can get the best performance. But..." Bai Lu turned her gaze to Xiao Xi'er again, and this would delay her a little longer.

"I don't have any lines, so I'll come back to put on makeup in an hour?" Xiao Xi'er certainly couldn't wait here for an hour.Anyway, there are no lines, she is very free.

"Well, good! This is my mobile phone number 135XXX..."

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After the performance of the stage play, Xiao Xi'er could enjoy herself for an hour, and Mu Qianshu over there didn't leave either. He was playing basketball and many girls gathered beside her.And Mu Qianshu's technique is also very fast, breaking records frequently.

Xiao Xier stepped forward to challenge without even thinking about it.

"Are you interested in a game?" Xiao Xier took a ball from the hoop. She used to play street e-sports in Japan.It was rare to see an evenly matched opponent, and Xiao Xi'er was a little bit looking forward to it.

"Yes." It's a pity that I can't pk Taohuayuan with Xiao Xi'er today, but it's not bad to be able to pk other games in advance today.

(End of this chapter)