Glory of Rebirth

Chapter 431

Qiao Bailu nodded: "The first part, I think it's a problem with the plot. I tried my best to write it in a more atmospheric way, but when compared with Director Li's, mine became artificial and a bit fake. The first part The second part, I think it's about the characters, I want to make it more profound, but it seems a little too unreal..."

"For a movie, you can't just look at the plot and characters, but also look at the picture, music, scene, and props. If you can find a reason, you can count it as a careful watch. Now, I will watch two movies with you. "

Saying that, he got up and took Qiao Bailu upstairs.Qiao Bailu has been to Zhou's house several times, so she naturally knows what's on the second floor. Except for Zhou Minyu's room and study, the largest room left is decorated as a home theater.

Two big sofas with a big screen in front.Zhou He is Qiao Bailu's teacher, so there are still discs for the two movies, and the master discs that were directly burned, Zhou Minyu and the others also came to join in the fun.

Zhou He turned on the projector and handed Qiao Bailu a 3D glasses by the way.

As soon as the opening song was over, Zhou He pressed the stop button: "This song is very good, but it's just very good. According to what you said before, you intend to write something passionate about defending the family and defending the country." More importantly, the scene is more about fighting, right? Since it is passionate, this song can only be said to have a strong sense of rhythm. You chose a female voice. Originally, Hua Lan is a woman, which is positive and harmonious. Well, but you chose Qiao Zhenting as a man disguised as a woman, which doesn't fit well..."

Qiao Bailu listened carefully, took a small notebook, and jotted down key points from time to time.Don't underestimate Zhou He, he is not only a famous playwright, but also an honorary professor at Q University, but he rarely gives lectures.

Continue to look down, every few minutes, Zhou He will press the stop button to explain: "In this scene, you want to show Hualan's strength, right? The eye circles are slightly red, but there are no tears, and you don't make a sound when you are injured, but you I overlooked a little bit, Hualan is a woman, but she is even more of a soldier. There are actually many ways to express the unbearable pain after being injured, one is like the one you described, with reddish eye circles..."

Qiao Bailu nodded quickly: "Yes, but, I was thinking that Hua Lan is a woman, so I just..."

"Since you have decided to take the road of passion, then the best way is to turn the lady Hualan and the general Hualan into two people. When she joined the army, how many people were around her? These people didn't see her It’s a daughter, why do the audience have to see it? And if they can see it, it shows that the story is false, and they understand from the bottom of their hearts that it is untrue.”

"Do you understand what I mean?" Zhou He asked, seeing that Qiao Bailu was a little confused, he said again: "What kind of story touches people's hearts the most? Of course it is the most true story, just like you young people who always say Isn’t there such a saying about chicken soup for the soul? What kind of tears can touch people the most? The most real tears are not the tears that are shed when they should be shed. What comes from the heart is the most touching.”

"You told everyone at the beginning that this is a false story, so who will be moved by this story?" Zhou He shook his head: "I have watched all the TV series you wrote, because the plot is long enough, you want You can write as much as you want, and most of them are emotional dramas, which are easy to get into, so they are better to watch. In terms of movies, you can't grasp the rhythm, you don't stop when you should, and you don't go into details when you should."

(End of this chapter)