College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 2
Of course, Master, I do not approve of unnecessary rest.It's like taking a break from a hard day at poker after a day's work. It's just a stupid waste of life.In our era, there is a very famous scientist, Mr. Wang Yi, who once said: "As a worker like us, we are destined not to enjoy the fun that some people can enjoy." Yes, he works diligently and does not have access to ordinary people. The right to rest in the dance hall, playing cards and drinking, and traveling in the mountains and rivers, but he will also take a rest after work, looking at flowers and plants, and talking with students.This made him become a "back wave" who cultivated young talents and supported young people in his old age.

Master, people are not sages. If we are forced to face an endless fate, I believe many people will lose their courage. How about encouraging his son like Mr. Liu Yong: "When a big exam is in front of you, if you think that there is a Do you feel better that a long vacation awaits you?"

Master, let your disciple rest for a while.Whether he puts his love on the mountains and rivers, or indulges himself in the world, he may have a deeper understanding of life.As your disciple said: "The spring clothes are ready, five or six people with the boy, and six or seven people with the crown" to bathe in the spring, wouldn't it be beautiful?
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The article uses the way of dialogue with Confucius, and the euphemism is permeated with deep thinking about life and destiny. The ingenious blend of emotion and reason is quite touching.The sentences are fluent and beautiful, the arguments are in-depth, and the structure is clear and reasonable, especially the rhetorical questions at the end enhance the persuasiveness of the article, which has a wonderful lingering sound.

Celebrity Quotes
Our life is like trying to push a boulder up a hill, and when we get to the top, the boulder rolls down again and I have to push it up the hill again. ——Goethe's red "no interest", blue "interest"

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

Life is colorful. "Life without interest" is the red that inspires people to forge ahead, making people strut their heads high; "Life with interest" is the refreshing blue that makes people feel comfortable and peaceful.

"There is a bird in the port in the south that does not fly or sing. What kind of bird is it?" That unintentional dialogue revealed the true meaning of "living with interest". The allusion of "Blockbuster" tells people with indisputable facts that only with "interest" can we better create the future and realize the value of life.

"The road is long and long, and I will search up and down." Qu Yuan's words were mixed with the wind of history and blew by his ears. "Life without interest" is a persistent spirit of exploration and an indomitable belief.

In fact, "life has interest" and "life has no interest" are just people's different views on life.

"Life without interest" is a positive outlook on life.With great perseverance and courage, there are well-known historical lines such as "Qu Yuan was exiled, Naifu Lisao, Zuoqiu was blind, but he had Mandarin, Han Fei imprisoned Qin, and it was hard to say."Relying on "living with nothing to rest", there is "Sandu Fu" written by Zuo Si, which was completed after ten years of thanking guests behind closed doors; Due to the historical story of Chen Cai still "holding dry firewood and dancing", there are countless literati of the Chinese nation who are proud and immortal.

"Live with interest" is a kind of chicness that is enough to stop.Zhuge Kongming, who worked and chatted in Nanyang and sang "Liang Fu Yin", hid the brilliance of jade and pearls all over his body, and spent time waiting for his "blockbuster".So, he succeeded, with the astonishing "Three Strategies of Longzhong", and the foundation of Shu Han, which is one-third of the world.Relying on it, there are Tao Qian who lives and breathes, Wang Wei who loves mountains and rivers, Li Bai who is open-minded and uninhibited, Lin Hejing who has a plum wife and a crane... The literati in history have expressed their love for "living and living" in their own ways. understanding.

For a country, the relationship between "living with interest" and "living without interest" is better reflected.

When the country is in troubled times, it will have a "rest with the people" rule by doing nothing; when the country is in a prosperous age, there will be a prosperous scene of "endless life".

China is standing in front of the world as an oriental dragon, and the Chinese nation is facing a great rejuvenation.Today, the people of the country should have the attitude of "living with nothing to lose" and strive for their own positions. The country should have the policy of "live with nothing to lose" to build a harmonious society internally and create a harmonious world externally, so that the Chinese nation can take off quickly.

In the choice of "living without interest" and "living with interest", history reveals such a truth: only those who handle the relationship between the two can be called true great wisdom, and only those who handle the relationship between the two well The country can realize the rise of the nation.

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At the beginning of the article, there is a language confrontation, closely related to the "color" of the title, and an accurate interpretation of the "interest" in the material in connection with life, which is a good start.Immediately after using the allusions to further explain, the point of view of this article is "only with 'interest' can we better create the future and realize the value of life", and the allusions used are very cultural.Afterwards, around the two sub-themes, a large number of examples were used to discuss, citing scriptures and allusions, swaying vertically and horizontally, coming at your fingertips, and hitting the main points, which fully demonstrated the examinee's rich knowledge and ability to control the material.

let the mood take a nap
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

On the edge of the balcony, the city is ebbing and taking a comfortable nap.

Days are like cloth on a loom, one piece slips off and another piece is picked up again.

Days are also like butterflies, falling from the wall every day, turning into powder, permeating every fresh and vivid corner.

On the back, the whip of the years is getting tighter and tighter, and one after another is busy, suppressing your life.

After experiencing countless "busy", your body and mind will be tired, so take a break from your busy schedule.Look for a peaceful place, take a nap, recover your energy, and wait for the next busy day.

Li Lewei built herself a "spotted, misty castle in the sky" to give her heart a place to rest; Tao Qian built a hut next to Nanshan Mountain, with chrysanthemums planted under the fence, so there was "Picking Chrysanthemums Under the Eastern Fence, Leisurely" See the leisure of Nanshan".We also want to build a house for our own hearts, open a small window, face the sea, and bloom in spring.

When you are tired, please stop your walking steps!Let yourself lie flat on the grass, close your eyes, feel the sound of the wind passing by, and imagine that the wind from south to north blows away all your troubles and fatigue.And you just need to bathe in the sun, enjoy the happiness and comfort that life gives, take a nap, and then continue to walk on the journey of life with ease.

Put a few tea leaves in the cup and wash it down with boiling water. Under the moisture of the water, the originally curled tea leaves stretch out their limbs and ooze a light green color. Gradually, the tea fragrance overflows and refreshes the heart.Sip a cup of tea, listen to a brisk song, and in a sunny afternoon, move a recliner and lie on the balcony, suck the essence of the sun, let your body and mind take a nap, and have fun secretly .

You can carve some small details and accumulate them little by little, and slowly start to feel the fragrance of leisurely life in the details, seep into the blood from the open pores, and flow with the blood throughout the body, let every cell All can enjoy a comfortable.And these details will not disrupt the pace of your life, but occasionally slow down your progress.

Brew a jar of heavenly wine with the bright sunshine, flying shadows and melodious singing, toast to life, and enjoy this slightly drunk feeling, as if the soul is free.The mellow aroma, sweetness and strongness of wine are naturally the taste hidden in life.

Tired?Tired?Give yourself a time to sit and watch the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court, and watch the clouds and clouds in the sky.

Spring has not completely receded, and summer has already picked up wind in the bamboo forest three kilometers away.Taking advantage of this time gap, take a pleasant nap!

score review
The flexible use of personification, metaphor, quotation and other rhetorical devices is a major feature of this article.In addition, candidates are also good at writing abstract connotations with vivid brush and ink, and visualize the abstract "day" into a very beautiful "butterfly", which is meaningful.The title of the article is also very poetic, adding a lot of literary grace to the article.

wonderful words
Days are like cloth on a loom, one piece slips off and another piece is picked up again.

Sip a cup of tea, listen to a brisk song, and in a sunny afternoon, move a recliner and lie on the balcony, suck the essence of the sun, let your body and mind take a nap, and have fun secretly .

Spring has not completely receded, and summer has already picked up wind in the bamboo forest three kilometers away.Taking advantage of this time gap, take a pleasant nap!

Ragnarok life is shining
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

Zeng Zi said: "Scholars can't be resolute. The responsibilities are heavy and the road is long. Ren takes his own responsibility, isn't it too important? After death, isn't it too far away?" I have heard of Yiduo's generous speech that put life and death beyond measure, Wang Jinggong's rhetoric that "heavenly changes are not to be feared, ancestors are not to be law-abiding, and human words are not to be sympathetic", and Lu Aigong's "I will never live, I dare not use Confucianism as a joke" "The heartfelt exclamation.Confucius said to achieve benevolence, Meng said to obtain righteousness, "If you hear the Tao in the morning, you can die in the evening."For thousands of years, countless Chinese scholars have embarked on the tragic and glorious road of seeking Taoism and martyrdom under such summons and spurs.

However, when history turned to the 21st century AD, the wave of the industrial revolution had just swept across the world, and the pace of globalization was surging without stopping.In the face of the sea, heroes are still emerging, even emerging at a faster speed, but they will no longer be worshiped by the whole people, and we can only breathe a little heroism in the book.When scholars are no longer synonymous with elites, and the original accumulation of wealth is full of original sins, apart from the lack of faith, we are even more confused in the embodiment of the value of life and the establishment of the direction of progress.

Is the age of heroes long gone, or can everyone be a hero?Perhaps all the peaceful and prosperous times were "using Huang Lao internally and showing Confucianism externally", so the era learned the principle of "not honoring the virtuous, so that the people will not fight; not expensive hard-to-find goods, so that the people will not be stolen".Not everyone is willing and necessary to go through the hardships and dangers to climb the most dangerous mountain - the scenery at the foot of the mountain is equally wonderful and different. "Abandon the sage and abandon the wisdom, and the interests of the people will be a hundredfold", the high moral standard collapsed in the face of the cries and practical actions of modern people who pursue individual liberation, seek personal beliefs, and enjoy their own lives.People are no longer asked what they should be, but only what they cannot do. "In order to learn more, to do damage to the Tao", while "renewing, renewing, and renewing" at the same time, each of us must stop from time to time, "live with interest", face ourselves, Get to know yourself, and look for the brilliance of life and the salvation of life.

Once, the petty bourgeoisie read Haruki Murakami, trying to enjoy loneliness, taste loneliness, and experience the happiness of having fun in the mechanical and boring work and life.Nowadays, under the call of "leisure-changing human life style", more people try to sneak in and pursue the quality and sentiment of life.Wealth and achievement are not the only goals of happiness in life. If you "struggle with each other and fight with your heart every day", even if you hold an important position and have a lot of money, your life will be a life-threatening autumn and winter, and there will be no happiness at all.Everything is just a state of mind, and the life experienced in this state of mind. "The crowd searched for him thousands of times, but when I looked back, the man was in a dimly lit place." There is a saying in "Zhuangzi Rang Wang": "Those who achieved the Tao in ancient times enjoyed being poor, and being able to do so was also happy, and what they enjoyed was not being poor. When the way is obtained from this, poverty is the sequence of cold, heat, wind and rain."

In the twilight of the gods, perhaps many people no longer worship the strong, strive hard, and dedicate themselves to their beliefs, but under the sunset, we can see countless sparks, blooming their own prairie brilliance in a hardworking and leisure life .The great sound has no sound, the elephant has no shape, and "life has a breath", which embodies the diversity of life and the splendor of human nature.Our world is therefore more beautiful and colorful.

Long sighs and short sighs are needed occasionally, but Wang Yang's wantonness is also very important.

In life, sometimes you need to stop and think.But after thinking about it, you can't stop, and moving forward is the last way out.

Maybe your personality is fading away, you should be lost, but don't be overly sad, because there are our stages everywhere in this world.

Believe that one day, we will gather enough strength to let ourselves burn!

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This article demonstrates that "life has interest", but the article starts from "life has no interest", turns to "however", and goes deep into the topic.The following specifically discusses the historical background of "living with interest", specifically mentioning "lack of belief", and secondly mentioning that its essence is "reflecting the diversity of life", which shows the depth of thinking.

Habitat in the south of the Yangtze River
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

Walking in the huge concrete forest every day, the flying dust obscures the sight, the loud noise blocks the hearing, and cumbersome things occupy every corner of life.Are you feeling suffocated and tired from this never-ending busy schedule?

Then please leave yourself a blank day, let go of all burdens, no longer stick to the secular world, and walk into Jiangnan with a peaceful mood.

There is no roar of machines here, only clear water flowing quietly.There are no cars to surround here, only the sound of She Nai's boats rising and falling.Walking on the bluestone road, touching the mottled ancient walls, you seem to be able to hear the touching stories of the past years.Sit down at any teahouse and enjoy a cup of lightly fragrant tea.Listening to an excerpt, you will lose track of time with the rise and fall of the past.

Jiangnan is the place where your soul lives.

Throughout the ages, how many people have found the destination of life here.Sanmao, a legendary woman, has wandered around the world for decades, and she has all kinds of wind on her hair. She cried as soon as she came to Jiangnan, as if she saw a kind old grandmother. She finally found a place in her life where she could rest her soul.Shen Wansan, a wealthy businessman in the south of the Yangtze River, has gone through the ups and downs of the shopping mall, and finally settled down by the water in Zhouzhuang, no longer fighting for fame and fortune.There are also unnamed literati and hermits. Perhaps they also wanted to be named on the gold list and be proud of their official careers.However, the day-to-day intrigues and intrigues finally made them tired, so they packed their bags.When I arrived in the south of the Yangtze River, I would die here.

Who said that the meaning of life is only to be constantly busy, constantly scrambling, and endlessly competing?The endless pursuit of interests, money and vanity will only lead to loss of self and defile the original pure soul.You might as well take a break, stop for a while, and come to the water town in the south of the Yangtze River, where there is a different kind of scenery.

The bright eyes of the boating girl were like lacquer, and Wu Nong whispered softly when she opened her mouth.There are white-haired old men practicing calligraphy on the side of the road, and they can write powerful characters with a single stroke.Anyone you meet on the street may have a legendary story behind them. Do you dare to say that there is no Lu Zifeng jade or Gu Erniang inkstone hidden in their homes?It's just you and them who chose to stay.Inhabit the soul in the tenderness of the water in the south of the Yangtze River, and stretch the soul in the homes of people with small bridges and flowing water - living and breathing.This is the philosophy of a wise man, and this is the true meaning of life.

Don't be surprised by favor or disgrace, and watch the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court.

No intention of going or staying, looking at the blue sky with clouds and clouds.

This is your own Jiangnan, please live here.

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The prose structure, poetic language, fresh imagery, and clear artistic conception all make this article unify the form and content well.Candidates' descriptions of Jiangnan's quiet, simple, leisurely, leisurely and other artistic conceptions seem to be far-fetched, but in fact they typically reflect the poetic and picturesque flavor of Jiangnan.

wonderful words
Inhabit the soul in the tenderness of the water in the south of the Yangtze River, and stretch the soul in the homes of people with small bridges and flowing water - living and breathing.

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