College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 23 Forgetting and Remembering (1)
(2005 National Volume 3)

composition test questions
Two good friends, A and B, had a quarrel, B punched A, and A wrote "Today my good friend punched me" on the sand.When going out again, A accidentally fell into the river, B rescued him, and A carved "Today my good friend saved my life" on the stone.B asked A why he wanted to record like this, and A said: "Writing on the sand, I hope the strong wind will help me forget; engraving on the stone, I hope the inscriptions will help me remember."

[Notice]

There are many things in life that can be forgotten, and there are many things that need to be remembered.Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "forgetting and remembering".Choose your own concept, choose your own style, and draw up your own title.Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
The composition of National Volume 2005 in 3 was a relational topic, and the writers followed the old idea of ​​"using short stories to write questions".This material has appeared in many magazines, newspapers and composition books, which should not be very unfamiliar to candidates.However, this topic is very challenging to the examinee's knowledge vision and thinking. It is easier for the examinee to understand the intention of the person who proposed the question, but it is not an easy task to sublimate the theme.This topic has a strong human spirit of tolerance, and it has the connotation of teaching people to turn enemies into friends, tolerance and tolerance, and this is consistent with the theme of the social era at that time.Since "remember" and "forget" are a pair of opposite words, the examination of the examinee's thinking ability is obviously strengthened.Positive things should be "remembered", and negative things should be "forgotten".Candidates need to take both of them into consideration, and cannot write only one of them, otherwise it is not in line with the meaning of the question.

Writing Ideas Tips
Candidates can start from a personal point of view and combine specific examples to explain what to forget and what to remember. The key point is to explain and analyze clearly the meaning and reason that are worth remembering and should be forgotten.You can also talk about the difference and connection between "forgetting and remembering", and how to deal with it correctly.By extension, candidates can also transfer this topic to various areas of social life, such as remembering shame and forgetting shame, remembering history and forgetting history, remembering mistakes and forgetting mistakes, and so on.In the selection of materials, candidates should also pay extensive attention to social life, mobilize the knowledge of history and literature, and strive to make the articles have depth and strength.

Full score sample essay
hold your hand
(A Candidate from Shaanxi)

On September 1995, 9, when Los Angeles detective Guzman opened the door of an apartment in the University District, the blue-eyed Westerner couldn't help but be moved by the bleak sight in front of him: the antique furniture exudes a charming halo , an old Chinese woman in a maroon cheongsam lay on a gorgeous carpet in the center of the living room.There was also a stack of manuscripts and an uncovered pen on the table.Black and white melon seed shells are scattered aside... Guzman naturally does not know that in front of him is Zhang Ailing, a talented woman who is well-known in the Chinese literary world; he does not know what kind of thoughts and feelings this talented woman who died quietly in silence has!

Perhaps Eileen Chang had already calculated her death, otherwise why did she leave the last words of "bringing the remains back to Shanghai".Friends once invited her to go back to China, but she was unwilling: "Shanghai is no longer the one that can go back." Yes, she belongs to the old era of China, with ten miles of foreign lands, luxury and luxury, and that era has long since passed, and what she can do is gone. What I want to do is to forget, forget the hustle and bustle of the first half of life, forget the glitz of the first half of life, forget the pain or unhappiness brought to me by others, and even forget myself, and completely exile the soul among a group of Berkeley students walking like flying.Zhang Ailing wrote all the glitz on the sand, the strong wind whizzed past, the traces gradually faded, everything was so lonely... So she said: "My heart is light..."

Fifty years ago, Eileen Chang put her favorite photo on the title page of "Rumours"—the young face was full of smiles. Fifty years later, facing many old photos from the past, she resolutely picked up a pen to record her thoughts, reminiscences, and gratitude and touch under each old photo.It is impossible not to love or not to hate, and love becomes more unforgettable as time goes by.And reminiscing is like a spiral staircase, going up and down, going back and forth, no one knows which step will get lost, no one knows which step will stop.Therefore, "Contrast Notes" became Zhang Ailing's last writing.Zhang Ailing deeply engraved her sincerity, true feelings, and true thoughts into the stone, and the stone marks became clearer under the erosion of the years...

In "Love in a Fallen City", Zhang Ailing said affectionately, "Be happy with your son, live and die together, hold your hand, and grow old together with your son"-isn't this the love she remembers in her heart?Isn't this the "remembering" that she used to support her life and soul after "forgetting"?

She is asleep, she is dead and alive.When the lost life is taken into the dark world of the other side, the soul has been condensed into a clear white stone.Forget the vanity, remember the sincerity.

Let us say it again: Hold your hand, life and death are bound together...

score review
This examinee has a deep affection for Zhang Ailing, a talented woman of the generation, and wrote her "Forget the vanity, remember the sincerity" with a pen full of affection.The easy-to-handle discussion materials in the article show the author's broad reading vision.In addition, the language and characters of the articles are quite elegant and full of literary flavor, which reflects the candidates' profound language skills.

Forget unhappiness, remember happiness

(A Candidate from Shaanxi)

Picking up "Jane Eyre" again, when I saw Jane Eyre say the phrase "If God gave me beauty and money, I would never let you leave me", I couldn't calm down again. Jane Eyre was sad.She remembered her own so-called flaws, but forgot her own unique charm; she remembered too much pain and helplessness, but almost forgot the soft heart under Rochester's strong appearance!

Jane Eyre didn't pay much attention to the things that should be kept in her heart. Even before other things, these things that should be kept in mind seemed to have become words written on the sand and gone with the wind.I think she has her reasons, I can only regret about the book.

If you have regrets, you will pursue the perfection in your heart.I often imagine that if I can enter the book and come to Jingyuan, if I am Jane Eyre, I will never leave!I want to say to myself: "Calm down, Jane Eyre! Look at your elegance, your demureness, and your kindness, and you will find that beauty and money are nothing, and you have more precious wealth!"

If I were Jane Eyre, I would remember the strength of the little girl in the boarding school when she faced corporal punishment; I would remember the bravery of the young lady who walked to Jingyuan with her luggage alone in the field at dusk; I would remember the late night In the castle, when faced with dripping blood, the female teacher was calm and calm.When I find that my heart has blended with Rochester's heart, I will forget that I am not beautiful, forget my origin, what can stop the fusion of two souls?Nothing.

However, all this is just my fantasy after all, I am not Jane Eyre, and Jane Eyre cannot hear my words.She is bound by ethics, and even more bound by those things in her heart that cannot be forgotten.She flinched, carrying her luggage, and with a heart full of pain, she chose to leave.

I can't keep her in her footsteps, because not even Rochester can keep her...

Maybe God has the same mood as me, and sent down a storm to make her go through a thorough baptism!During the days when she woke up from the coma, she must have sorted out her memory again, those that should be remembered and those that should be forgotten finally have their proper places!

Jane Eyre returned to Thorn Garden. When the blind Rochester asked "Jane Eyre, is that you?" Can't you forget the pain?

score review
Candidates interpreted the love view of the heroine Jane Eyre in "Jane Eyre" from a unique perspective, and believed that the tragedy of Jane Eyre was caused by the dislocation of "forgetting" and "remembering". Hope to change Jane Eyre's behavior, so as to "forget misfortune and remember happiness".Revealing the theme through unique ideas is the biggest feature of this article.

Autobiography of "Backyard Flowers"
(a candidate from Gansu)

The wind is rustling, the rain is raining, and the time and space of a thousand years are like a meteor with a long tail, fleeting.The glory is gone, and the tears are also shed. Let us sing our millennium in the passing of ancient music.

My real name is "Yushu Houting Flower", and I was born in the hands of Queen Chen in the Southern Dynasty.What a majestic and romantic time it was, when the court musicians played my soft piano sound, the beauty was like a cloud, and I was surrounded by countless praises and surprises. It has been sung from generation to generation, and it has been passed down from generation to generation, and it will be remembered forever by the literati and the people of the world.

Yes, as I expected, even though I never saw Empress Chen again, after a hundred years, I was really sung, literati, poets, musicians, singing girls... kept singing about me and remembering me.I was sung in the banquet where the cups were mixed, in the court where poems were recited and prose, in teahouses and restaurants, in the atmosphere of intrigue...

I am very proud, and everyone remembers me. The century has proved that I do have the capital to be very proud.Looking back at those years, I can be seen everywhere in the north and south of the river, inside and outside the Yellow River, and I am remembered...

However, when I came to the banks of the Qinhuai River and immersed myself in my own music on a bright moonlit night, I heard a poem written by a poet that chilled my heart: the smoke cage is cold, the water is moon cage sand, and the night moors near Qinhuai River. restaurant.The business woman doesn't know the hatred of the subjugated country, and she still sings "Flowers in the Backyard" across the river.

I don't take Du Mu's poem seriously, he must be jealous, jealous of my distinguished background and reputation.I dismissed him, so I continued listening to the merchant girl's chants.

However I was wrong.In a few years, Du Mu's poems became famous all over the world.I was still wandering around, and bumped into walls everywhere.The geisha changed the music, and the music scolded me everywhere.I panicked and had to put my airs down and tell people I sounded really good, really.However, everything has changed. People look at me with disdain, resentment and hatred come to me.I was scared, so I hid.

I shook my hands to check the information related to me, only to find that I was synonymous with "subjugation".

I hid, no, people forgot about me.Regardless of the change of dynasties, as long as people think of me, they think of the subjugated country, even though I am really beautiful, really.

Hundreds of years of vicissitudes, hundreds of years of forgetting and remembering.

In this new era, I have matured, and I finally understand that remembering and forgetting are never absolute, and they both change with people's feelings.Forget the painful past, remember the happy moments, treat life with forgetting and remembering, let forgetting and remembering create your colorful life, and reconcile the ups and downs of your feelings, just like treating me: forget me, because of my meaning Kind of emotional garbage; remember me because I'm really pretty, really.

score review
The form of this article is novel and the idea is peculiar. The examinee creatively uses the technique of "personification" and uses the music "Yushu backyard flower" recorded in the ancient book as No.1 to "self-report", which is quite fresh and unique.

Smoke goes with the wind, name flows with history

(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

(End of this chapter)