College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 25 Crested Pork Belly and Leopard Tail (1)
(2005 Jiangsu volume)

composition test questions
We often talk about writing with the six characters "crested head, pork belly, and leopard tail" as the ancients said, which means that the beginning should be brilliant and bright, the middle should be full and rich, and the ending should be loud and powerful.This is true of writing, but if you think about it carefully, why shouldn’t it be like this when it comes to life and study, career and life as big as it is?

Requirements: Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "crested head, pork belly, and leopard tail".

Question Analysis
This is a metaphorical topic.The material itself is relatively popular, and more specific hints are given, which reduces the difficulty of writing. The "crested head, pork belly, and leopard tail" are intended to guide candidates to pursue perfection, pursue excellence, work hard forever, and never be satisfied, etc.Candidates must not only understand the meaning of each word, but also consider the relationship between the three, that is, to form a whole that starts well and ends well, so that they can grasp the proposition's intention.The proponent uses "crested head" as a metaphor for the initial stage, "pig belly" as a metaphor for the middle process, and "leopard tail" as a metaphor for the end stage.Propositional thinking points to thinking about life.Candidates can discuss in an all-round way, or they can focus on a certain stage and involve the other two stages.

Writing Ideas Tips
The key to writing this topic well is the explanation of the three nouns. Candidates should dig out the hidden meanings in the materials and analyze the metaphorical meanings in them. The composition should be written out of metaphors.The beginning of writing emphasizes a good beginning, for example, laying a good foundation and taking the first key step; the writing process emphasizes enrichment and enrichment, for example, being down-to-earth, pioneering and innovative; evening festival.In addition, candidates can also define "crested head, pork belly, and leopard tail" by themselves, pointing out that ordinary life also has the demeanor of crested head, pork belly, and leopard tail.

Full score sample essay
don't watch the sequel
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

Literature is getting worse and worse nowadays.

From Quasimodo's sad love for Esmeralda, to Qiong Yao's increasingly popular "My Fair Princess" I, II, III, and IV, where the heroes and heroines are all the same; Overturning Hemingway's double-barreled shotgun and the broken harpoon in Santiago's hand, to Jin Yong's Gulong Liang Yu's return to the pearl master's familiar sorrows; from the ancient Greek tragedy master Aeschylus and comedy master Aristotle Fen, to the sensationalism of Zhang Yimou's "Hero" and "House of Flying Daggers"... I couldn't help but let out a sigh.

This is the tragedy of literature.

Indeed, Qiong Yao's lingering sentimentality in her first debut is indeed sad and moving; Jin Yong's "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is indeed majestic and magnificent, with a strange imagination, which is refreshing; Zhang Yimou's "Raise the Red Lantern" is not in vain.

However, why are piles of cultural rubbish instead of classics after the excitement?Why is it not pork belly and leopard tail after the phoenix head, but phoenix belly and phoenix tail that were fabricated in the same way?
The crested head is certainly beautiful, but are the phoenix belly and tail also necessarily beautiful?
A work is successful, but will it be successful if the duplication of styles or even content is too numerous?

Not also!

These writers cannot escape the responsibility for the production of cultural fast food and cultural garbage.Under the impact of the tide of the market economy, facing the honor and money brought by the first successful work, they lost their way; thus, they crudely produced works with similar styles, and even sequels after hard thinking The family picks and pulls RMB, completely ignoring that this is a dog's tail.Literature is not a whore, a whore to be played with at the whim.It is solemn and sacred.Those writers with "Marlboro" in their mouths and their legs crossed may not understand this point; even if they understand, they will inevitably be deliberately profane.What emanates from them is not the smell of books, but the smell of copper.

The deluge of sequels is a turnoff.The phoenix belly and phoenix tail written by those money-worshiping writers are also uninteresting.

Ms. Qiong Yao's fixed sentence pattern of "Okay...yeah" has become the symbolic sentence that appears most frequently in each of her works, which makes people get goosebumps when they read it, and it has also become the most important factor for me to reject her.

By analogy, the rest of the writers' follow-up works are also itchy with hatred.Not to mention the lengthy series and movies with several sequels...

Therefore, I appeal: smart readers, only read an author's first good work; pay special attention-don't read the sequel!
score review
This article is a short and concise literary review.After reading it, it gives people an atmosphere of "Huashan Lunjian".The beginning of the article sets the tone of the full text, the language is spicy and to the point.The ending appeals to "smart readers, only read an author's first good work; pay special attention-don't read the sequel!" While pointing the title, it shows the author's clear point of view, which echoes the beginning of the article.

heavy heart
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

My uncle, who is making a living in Changzhou, called last night and said that it was rainy and rainy over there, and he didn't do much business.Explain that you are going to take the college entrance examination tomorrow, niece, so don't be nervous; take the exam honestly, and I don't worry about your grades, just don't play foreign things in your composition, don't write anything new in concept, the college entrance examination is not for fun...

I cried when I heard it, I was moved by this thing, a warm word from a relative, my body was like an electric shock.Yes, Uncle, I know that once a person is full, he will be stable.

Shuppen was not a single-minded breadwinner.When I was young, I also pursued bright clothes and so on. After a few years of running-in in the society, I started to work hard and pay attention to reality.Country people know how to raise pigs, and they know that the belly of the pig is fat and rich.

We are all counting down the days.Uncle was driving his car, and I was preparing for my college entrance examination.

School-packed cars are parked all over the campus.I found the seat I should sit in, walked over, and sat down.Drink a sip?Thanks, I have. "Red Bull" shrank back.How about my bottle, how about a sip?It is "Ya Ya" canned Lulu.I smiled, took out my water bottle, and shook it at her.The transparent plastic bottle contained boiled water with a layer of limescale deposited on it. After I shook it, I became excited and swam around, just like our hearts that have been fighting for 12 years, and today we lost no time to be excited.

Grandma came to accompany me two weeks ago and cook for me for my college entrance examination.Every day is a light tofu and vegetable soup, noodles with poached eggs.Grandma said that the college entrance examination does not test the fat in the stomach, but the ink in the head.Also, a scholar is not afraid of the blue shirt being torn... I know grandma, a person who is full of fat and stylishly dressed, but who can't recite Tang poems or do arithmetic problems is the last person who should not be.

Just like pork belly, it is thick and heavy, but it is real and full of ingredients.

Grandma filled me with a full bottle of boiled water, handed it to me, and smiled, I believe in you.Huh, good.

This happened before rushing to the test center this morning.Now I am in the examination room, and there are still more than ten minutes before the end of the exam.I didn't have a topic for my composition, and I didn't write the required number of words.

But grandma's smile is at home not far away. Grandma's granddaughter has fat in her stomach and ink in her head.In a slight excitement, I straightened out the words in my chest one by one, forming Chinese characters flowing from the tip of the pen, just like the stream of emotion bubbling from my heart.

Each of us is a pure flame that lives by the invisible sun within.Live a solid life and work hard, and you will always get the sun's flowery smile.

score review
This article is a simple and touching narrative masterpiece.Candidates avoided writing about the whole life process of "crested head, pork belly, and leopard tail", but chose to write about the warmth of family affection in their own family, praising family affection and the beauty of human nature.The language is plain and vivid, in line with the identity of the characters.But the philosophy is revealed in the simplicity, and the humor is seen in the ordinary, which can be regarded as a masterpiece in the examination room.

heart that refuses to die
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

Perhaps, above the blood relationship, love is always inclined.It is also because of tilt that we can see the hope of immortality, have unbroken dreams, and have the continuation of love.In a person's life, the youth is wonderful and bright, and the middle age is full and rich, but how many people notice the loud and powerful in old age?
A friend told me: His grandmother has Alzheimer's disease.First, she didn't know her grandfather, so she resolutely refused to allow this "strange man" to sleep in her bed, so her husband who had been with her for 50 years had to sleep in the living room with a sigh.Then one day, grandma disappeared when she walked out of the house. Fortunately, the old man was found with the help of the police station.It turned out that she was preoccupied with thinking about her childhood home and refused to admit any connection with her current home.The family coaxed and lied, and finally kept the grandmother, but she forgot about the grandchildren she brought up, thinking that they were a group of wild children who wanted to steal her food.She protected the rice bowl with her hands, and beat them with a cane at the same time: "Go away, go away, don't steal my food." This made the family dumbfounded.

Fortunately, grandma still knows someone—her own daughter.Every time she sees her, grandma will show a strange smile on her face and call her "Xinxin, Xinxin".In the evening, grandma would take a stool and sit downstairs, nagging: "Why hasn't Xinxin finished school yet?" In fact, Xinxin's sons have all graduated from college.The family saw this, and whenever grandma made a fuss about going back to her home, they would threaten her: "If you make trouble again, Xinxin will not want you." Grandma would immediately quiet down.

One year during the National Day, a visitor from far away came, and my mother cooked the food herself.At this time, the grandmother's movements were very strange: she looked around and looked around, like a child who was about to steal candy.When she was sure that no one was paying attention to her, she generously took a large chopsticks dish and put it in her pocket. The host and guest were shocked when they saw it, but they pretended not to see it.Only grandma was elated, as if her technique was very clever.That meal was hard.

When the last dish was served, my mother also sat down, and while being courteous to the guests, she picked up vegetables from the plate and ate them.At this time, grandma suddenly jumped up from the seat, grabbed mother's hand and pulled it out.Mother was baffled, so she got up obediently...

As soon as she reached the kitchen door, grandma vigilantly blocked everyone's sight with her body.Then, digging and digging, I took out the dish just now from my pocket, and put it in my mother's hand: "Xinxin, eat quickly, eat quickly." The mother was stunned, looking at the steaming dish, After a long while, he raised his head and stared at grandma's strange smiling face.With a wow, she burst into tears.

I think grandma's "end" is loud and powerful.Although her soul has slowly died in the torment of illness; but what is always strong is the heart of the mother who refuses to die.

score review
This article focuses on selecting the image of grandma's life in her later years to describe, highlighting the "end" of grandma's life.Although it is not considered a "leopard tail", due to the vigorous exaggeration of the image subject of "the heart of the mother who refuses to die", the arrangement of the structure and themes is even more original.

There is no path for demons to learn from
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

I'm just a scholar, so it's inevitable that I'll be a little nerdy.Every time I read "Journey to the West", I always feel that since Sun Dasheng can travel thousands of miles a day, why not take a step to the west with Tang Seng on his back, and save a lot of hardships along the way, and there are monsters and spirits thinking about Tang Seng's flesh.

It would be refreshing to take a step to the west, but the relationship between master and apprentice may only stay at the level of "friends with wine and meat".The so-called "A friend in adversity sees the truth": Although Bajie is lecherous, he talks about his master everywhere, steals a watermelon and doesn't forget to give half of it to his master; although Drifting is stupid, he works hard and is willing to be everyone's helper; although Wukong is crazy, But the master is in trouble, isn't it also disregarding life and death, subduing demons and eliminating demons?The friendship formed on the battlefield is made of steel!If everything comes too easily, then Wukong is at best a pathfinder, Drifting is at best a porter, and Bajie is just making everyone happy. It would be a too boring story.

If you take a step to the west, Tang Seng can save the worry and disturbance all the way, eat fast and chant the Buddha with peace of mind, arrive at morning and evening, and retrieve the Buddhist scriptures.But the so-called "going out to gain insight", if Tang Seng only traveled thousands of miles in the clouds and fog with his disciples, how would he know the various states of the world?I am not talented, I have never read Buddhist scriptures, but I also heard that the Buddha came from the world, and tasted all the ups and downs in the world, in exchange for the "Buddha" to transcend the mundane world, write it into the Buddhist scriptures, and benefit future generations.Without going through all kinds of difficulties and dangers, how could Tang Seng truly comprehend the profound meaning of this Buddhist scripture?The sun always comes after the storm!

It is really possible to take one step to the west and retrieve the Buddhist scriptures, so what?Or, is the journey to the west just to retrieve a few scriptures?
How would you know the dangers of the world if you haven't met the Bone Demon or entered the Pansi Cave?If you haven't lived in Gaolaozhuang or been to the Dragon King Temple, how do you know the warmth and coldness of the world?How to get rid of the cowardice in human nature, how to get rid of the viciousness in human nature?How to develop the ultimate nature, how to practice the eminent monk?If there is no perception of the hardships along the way, how can it be obtained?

Living in the world, we always hope to find such a shortcut, such a shortcut, lamenting that "reaching the sky in one step" is the greatest wealth.We hate the process and only seek the so-called result. We don't care if it is "pork belly" or "snake belly". We don't want anything but "leopard tail".So today we still need to guard against cheating, taking exams, favoritism and fraud, and counterfeiting.

(End of this chapter)