Chapter 4 Reading (2)
Clouds wrap around it, fog surrounds it, rain pulls it, wind destroys it, frost oppresses snow, thunder and lightning strike the top, nature seems to be unable to tolerate its existence, and must get rid of it quickly.However, it does not bow its head, does not give in, and is not afraid of the pick and choose of wind knives and snow axes. Amidst countless counterattacks and angry howls, it has cultivated a body of iron and steel, and condensed a strong and tough spirit.
Again and again, it fought and shouted in the wind and rain; once again, it tore the clouds into pieces; it forced Frost and Snow to flee obediently with its majesty;
All the longing for life, the struggle of life, and the struggle of life are all displayed in this symphony of fate swayed by the pines.
Reading Huangshan pine, don't you think our Anhui is just a tall and straight pine?
Anhui, where the Jinjiang River leads to the Huaihe River, has been turbulent for thousands of years, and after several ups and downs, how many thrilling stories have been staged on this vast land!
It used to be one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization.Laozhuang Taoism, Sancao Huazhang, Xin'an Literature, Tongcheng Prose... These are all an indispensable part of Chinese culture.
The phrase "When misfortune is upon us, fortune rests upon it; when fortune comes, misfortune rests upon it" expresses the vicissitudes of life; the phrase "When the crops are hoeed at noon, sweat drips down the soil" expresses the hard work and hardships of the people of Anhui.
"Never tire of looking at each other, only Jingting Mountain", "Tianmen interrupts the Chu River, and the clear water flows eastward to this point", "Five Sacred Mountains do not look at the mountains, and Huangshan does not look at the mountains"... These are incorrectly confirmed by the literati. Longing for the beautiful scenery of Jianghuai River?
Everyone knows that Dayu "passed through the house three times and never entered", but how many people know that the girl from Qianshan, Anhui, who stands leaning on the door and looks up into the distance, "with a peach blossom on her face"! "Qiaogong's two daughters show their love, autumn water and hibiscus together" make the poet full of infinite yearning, and the love of Jiao Liu, who "raises his hands for a long time, and the two love each other", doesn't it also move people today across time and space?
The Four Treasures of the Study, Huizhou Architecture, Wuhu Iron Painting, Huangmei Opera, Fengyang Flower Drum... These are all the crystallization of the wisdom of the sons and daughters of Jianghuai!
The vigorous Chen Sheng and Wu Guang uprisings that overthrew the brutal rule of the Qin Dynasty a thousand years ago, and the heroic deeds of countless warriors who fought bloody battles in the War of Resistance Against Japan and the War of Liberation a thousand years later, all testify to the sons and daughters of Jianghuai who are not afraid of oppression and resist bullying.
Huangshan pine, I understand you!Huangshan pine, you are Huihun!
score review
This article has a far-reaching intention. The author takes "Huangshan pine" as a symbol, and expresses his eulogy and admiration for Anhui culture and the spirit of Anhui people through the description of Huangshan pine.Starting from the Huangshan pine, the incision is small, but the big can be seen in the small, and the virtual and real are alternated to build the similarities between the Huangshan pine and the "Huihun".The interleaved use of whole sentences, the quotation of famous aphorisms, etc., enhance the momentum and connotation of the article, and make the article flourish.
words of water
(A candidate from Anhui)
Everything in the world has its own shape, and some interpret what is eternity in the immutable and ever-changing, like a mountain.There is one who laughs at the stiff and clumsy steps of all things in the world with his own hundreds of turns, like the wind.Only water is the combination of gentleness and strength, harmony and perseverance.The ancients said: the highest kindness is like water, benefiting all things without fighting.Isn't that what you said?
I first read water in Qingdao.The sea is like a kind mother, quietly watching a group of tiny creatures playing around her.Looking around, one side is the golden beach, the other side is the distant sky, and the sea lies in the middle.Whether it is a storm or a thunderstorm, the sea is always so calm and peaceful.
With a strong but not overbearing attitude, Dahai let me understand that a real winner is not a character standing at the front desk and pointing fingers. Real success requires a tolerant attitude and a maturity that embraces everything.
Read the water again, in Huangguoshu.I have long heard that Huangguoshu Waterfall is magnificent and vast.But when I really saw the curtain of water flowing down, I found that language has become superfluous at this moment. Before reaching the waterfall, the scenery I saw was so charming and moving. The galloping momentum of the horse dwarfs all previous beauty.I am amazed that this seemingly weak water can emit such a huge energy.
The waterfall made me understand with the attitude of a brave man: life requires the determination to move forward regardless of everything, and the fighting spirit to dare to innovate and forge ahead.
Finally read the water, in Huanglong.Water everywhere.The stream seeping from the crevices of the rocks, the dewdrops scattered on the leaves, and the water vapor in the air - this is clearly a water world, a water paradise!Looking at it, the fine and dense lines engraved on the smooth stone are not left by the passing water?How many years ago, these stones were so angular.But now, under the washing of water day after day and year after year, they finally put away the edges and corners of the past and become round and smooth.What kind of patience and perseverance does this require!If there is no such determination as Kuafu Zhuri, how can we do it?If there is no perseverance like Prometheus, how can it be successful?
Huanglongzhishui made me remember with a subtle but firm attitude: as long as you have faith, everything is possible!As long as you never give up, miracles will eventually appear!
Holding a handful of water in the palm of my hand, my heart is full of awe for these elves. What they bring us is not only the source of life, but also the truth of being a human being!
Water is indeed a masterpiece of nature. No matter rivers, lakes, seas, streams or waterfalls, they are reserved but not cowardly, confident but not ostentatious, interpreting the meaning of life to people.
Words of Water, have you read it?
score review
Candidates choose water as the object of reading. The incision is small, the concept is high, and the theme is deep.The structure of the article is clear, the layout is orderly, clear and beautiful.The article uses "first reading of water", "re-reading of water" and "final reading of water" to deepen the interpretation of water from the shallower to the deeper, and finally the water will come into being. Waterfalls, they are reserved but not cowardly, confident but not ostentatious, interpreting the meaning of life to people.
reading life
(A candidate from Anhui)
Life is like a big thick book, waiting for people to write it with their own hands, and also waiting for people to read and savor it carefully.
The book of life may not be as ups and downs as a novel, not as beautiful and profound as prose, nor as abstract and obscure as poetry. Its content is just some ordinary people and things, even as plain as a glass of boiled water.But as long as you read it carefully, this glass of "plain water" will turn into a glass of mellow wine, which is endless aftertaste.
To read life, one must first learn to read others.Every friend, teacher, and even every passer-by in life can give us useful enlightenment.Confucius said: "When three people walk together, there must be my teacher." Everyone has different advantages, which are worth learning. Therefore, Confucius learned from different scholars, such as Tan Zi, Chang Hong, etc. From small things, I learned that the answers obtained from different perspectives are also different.Professors Cao Huaidong and Zhu Xiping gained inspiration from previous studies and finally proved the Poincaré conjecture, one of the "seven major problems in the world".As long as you are good at reading, everyone can inspire others, even a beggar singing in the square can make people feel his optimism and love for life.Reading others is a kind of communication and a kind of learning.
To read life, we must learn to read failure and pain.Edison read the more than 1000 failures, and finally succeeded in inventing the electric light; Goujian, the king of Yue, read the failure and bitterness of mourning the country. Not only did he overcome the illness, but he also returned to his beloved cycling field.Failure and pain are a kind of tempering, a kind of test, which makes real gold shine in the fire, and makes the phoenix nirvana in the fire.Reading failure and pain is not only a lesson of reading failure, but also a kind of courage to face it.Reading failure and pain is a kind of facing and a kind of perception.
To read life, we must also learn to read success and joy.There are both thorns and flowers in the road of life. Reading about success and joy can help people learn to cherish, cherish the hard-won success, and cherish the happiness in front of them. High peaks strike.The living conditions of modern people have been greatly improved, but the sense of happiness has been greatly reduced. Why?Because modern people have forgotten the joy of reading and cherishing happiness.Marie Curie discovered the radioactive element polonium. After receiving the Nobel Prize, she cherished this achievement and refused to stop. Instead, she continued to explore and discovered the more precious radium, which won the Nobel Prize for the second time.She tasted success and had a correct understanding of success, and only then did she achieve greater success.Reading success and joy is a kind of taste, but also a kind of transcendence.
To read life is to learn nutrition from others.
To read life is to learn lessons from failures.
To read life is to learn to cherish in success.
The book of life requires us to write it with our own hands, and we need to read it carefully.Every sentence of smiles and tears, every sentence of success and failure will be constantly polished and beautified in repeated readings, becoming bright pearls and treasures for our life.
score review
The article explains how to read life from several aspects, such as "reading others", "reading failure and pain", "reading success and joy", with clear levels and strict logic.The author cites a large number of examples from Confucius, Cao Huaidong, Zhu Xiping, Edison, Goujian, Lance Armstrong, Marie Curie, etc., from ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad, and quotes from many sources.And when listing examples, there are whole sentences and prose sentences, with various forms and flexible brushwork, which give people a beautiful enjoyment.
classic case
Confucius, Cao Huaidong, Zhu Xiping, Edison, Goujian, Lance Armstrong, Marie Curie, etc.
A Browsing of Students' Essays
(A candidate from Anhui)
I often feel lucky that I am a Chinese teacher, because every time I read the essays submitted by the students, the fresh and unique words are like the calm and refreshing cool breeze in the gradually hot summer sky.
1. ×××——Politics class representative
I read the smile of the stone in the sand, the smell of the sea in the dew, the jump of the autumn wind in the green leaves, and the dance of the sun in the snowflakes.
2. ×××——Art class representative
My favorite color is green plus a little green, like slender wicker floating on a calm lake; my favorite color is white plus a little white, like white snowflakes surrounded by fragrant plum blossoms; my favorite The color is red plus a little red, like the charming sunset covering the face of the sun; my favorite color is blue plus a little blue, like blue crystals floating on the vast sea; my favorite color is black Add a little black, just like the shadows of trees on the mountainside in the evening.
From the seemingly monotonous colors in the world, I read the beauty.
3. ×××——Representative of social class
Attitude is like a magnet, whether your thoughts are positive or negative, you are attracted to them.Thoughts are like wheels, they lead you forward or backward.
Cong Fei, who moved China in 2005, showed us the greatness of attitude and belief.This ordinary singer, with his selfless love for children and the society, made more than 140 students return to school, and even asked to donate his cornea at the last breath of his life.
I read greatness from Cong Fei.
4. ×××——Chinese class representative
"Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, and seeing Nanshan leisurely" made me read Tao Yuanming's leisure; The silt is not stained, and the clear ripples are not demonic." This made me read Zhou Dunyi's independence.
5. ×××——Representative of labor department
Life is like a bunch of dried radishes hanging under the eaves. Only after being slowly soaked in the sesame oil of memories can the taste of sour, sweet, bitter and spicy be revealed.
6. ×××——Mathematics class representative
In the spatial rectangular coordinate system, I take information as the axis and action as the point, let the point move into a beautiful arc, let the line move into a beautiful curved surface, and let the surface form my beautiful tomorrow.
As a Chinese teacher, I was once again impressed by my students.From them, I read my own shortcomings, the beauty of life, and the greatness of nature.
score review
The article takes "browsing" and "students' essays" as a Chinese teacher as clues, and revolves around the feelings of "I as a Chinese teacher". Through the narration of six fragments, the theme is highlighted, the content is substantial, and the center is clear.Candidates select materials from things and people around them, which are rich in materials and far-reaching in artistic conception.In addition, the student used the method of superimposing film shots to design six clips in sequence, with ingenious ideas and novel forms.
wonderful words
Life is like a bunch of dried radishes hanging under the eaves. Only after being slowly soaked in the sesame oil of memories can the taste of sour, sweet, bitter and spicy be revealed.
(End of this chapter)
Clouds wrap around it, fog surrounds it, rain pulls it, wind destroys it, frost oppresses snow, thunder and lightning strike the top, nature seems to be unable to tolerate its existence, and must get rid of it quickly.However, it does not bow its head, does not give in, and is not afraid of the pick and choose of wind knives and snow axes. Amidst countless counterattacks and angry howls, it has cultivated a body of iron and steel, and condensed a strong and tough spirit.
Again and again, it fought and shouted in the wind and rain; once again, it tore the clouds into pieces; it forced Frost and Snow to flee obediently with its majesty;
All the longing for life, the struggle of life, and the struggle of life are all displayed in this symphony of fate swayed by the pines.
Reading Huangshan pine, don't you think our Anhui is just a tall and straight pine?
Anhui, where the Jinjiang River leads to the Huaihe River, has been turbulent for thousands of years, and after several ups and downs, how many thrilling stories have been staged on this vast land!
It used to be one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization.Laozhuang Taoism, Sancao Huazhang, Xin'an Literature, Tongcheng Prose... These are all an indispensable part of Chinese culture.
The phrase "When misfortune is upon us, fortune rests upon it; when fortune comes, misfortune rests upon it" expresses the vicissitudes of life; the phrase "When the crops are hoeed at noon, sweat drips down the soil" expresses the hard work and hardships of the people of Anhui.
"Never tire of looking at each other, only Jingting Mountain", "Tianmen interrupts the Chu River, and the clear water flows eastward to this point", "Five Sacred Mountains do not look at the mountains, and Huangshan does not look at the mountains"... These are incorrectly confirmed by the literati. Longing for the beautiful scenery of Jianghuai River?
Everyone knows that Dayu "passed through the house three times and never entered", but how many people know that the girl from Qianshan, Anhui, who stands leaning on the door and looks up into the distance, "with a peach blossom on her face"! "Qiaogong's two daughters show their love, autumn water and hibiscus together" make the poet full of infinite yearning, and the love of Jiao Liu, who "raises his hands for a long time, and the two love each other", doesn't it also move people today across time and space?
The Four Treasures of the Study, Huizhou Architecture, Wuhu Iron Painting, Huangmei Opera, Fengyang Flower Drum... These are all the crystallization of the wisdom of the sons and daughters of Jianghuai!
The vigorous Chen Sheng and Wu Guang uprisings that overthrew the brutal rule of the Qin Dynasty a thousand years ago, and the heroic deeds of countless warriors who fought bloody battles in the War of Resistance Against Japan and the War of Liberation a thousand years later, all testify to the sons and daughters of Jianghuai who are not afraid of oppression and resist bullying.
Huangshan pine, I understand you!Huangshan pine, you are Huihun!
score review
This article has a far-reaching intention. The author takes "Huangshan pine" as a symbol, and expresses his eulogy and admiration for Anhui culture and the spirit of Anhui people through the description of Huangshan pine.Starting from the Huangshan pine, the incision is small, but the big can be seen in the small, and the virtual and real are alternated to build the similarities between the Huangshan pine and the "Huihun".The interleaved use of whole sentences, the quotation of famous aphorisms, etc., enhance the momentum and connotation of the article, and make the article flourish.
words of water
(A candidate from Anhui)
Everything in the world has its own shape, and some interpret what is eternity in the immutable and ever-changing, like a mountain.There is one who laughs at the stiff and clumsy steps of all things in the world with his own hundreds of turns, like the wind.Only water is the combination of gentleness and strength, harmony and perseverance.The ancients said: the highest kindness is like water, benefiting all things without fighting.Isn't that what you said?
I first read water in Qingdao.The sea is like a kind mother, quietly watching a group of tiny creatures playing around her.Looking around, one side is the golden beach, the other side is the distant sky, and the sea lies in the middle.Whether it is a storm or a thunderstorm, the sea is always so calm and peaceful.
With a strong but not overbearing attitude, Dahai let me understand that a real winner is not a character standing at the front desk and pointing fingers. Real success requires a tolerant attitude and a maturity that embraces everything.
Read the water again, in Huangguoshu.I have long heard that Huangguoshu Waterfall is magnificent and vast.But when I really saw the curtain of water flowing down, I found that language has become superfluous at this moment. Before reaching the waterfall, the scenery I saw was so charming and moving. The galloping momentum of the horse dwarfs all previous beauty.I am amazed that this seemingly weak water can emit such a huge energy.
The waterfall made me understand with the attitude of a brave man: life requires the determination to move forward regardless of everything, and the fighting spirit to dare to innovate and forge ahead.
Finally read the water, in Huanglong.Water everywhere.The stream seeping from the crevices of the rocks, the dewdrops scattered on the leaves, and the water vapor in the air - this is clearly a water world, a water paradise!Looking at it, the fine and dense lines engraved on the smooth stone are not left by the passing water?How many years ago, these stones were so angular.But now, under the washing of water day after day and year after year, they finally put away the edges and corners of the past and become round and smooth.What kind of patience and perseverance does this require!If there is no such determination as Kuafu Zhuri, how can we do it?If there is no perseverance like Prometheus, how can it be successful?
Huanglongzhishui made me remember with a subtle but firm attitude: as long as you have faith, everything is possible!As long as you never give up, miracles will eventually appear!
Holding a handful of water in the palm of my hand, my heart is full of awe for these elves. What they bring us is not only the source of life, but also the truth of being a human being!
Water is indeed a masterpiece of nature. No matter rivers, lakes, seas, streams or waterfalls, they are reserved but not cowardly, confident but not ostentatious, interpreting the meaning of life to people.
Words of Water, have you read it?
score review
Candidates choose water as the object of reading. The incision is small, the concept is high, and the theme is deep.The structure of the article is clear, the layout is orderly, clear and beautiful.The article uses "first reading of water", "re-reading of water" and "final reading of water" to deepen the interpretation of water from the shallower to the deeper, and finally the water will come into being. Waterfalls, they are reserved but not cowardly, confident but not ostentatious, interpreting the meaning of life to people.
reading life
(A candidate from Anhui)
Life is like a big thick book, waiting for people to write it with their own hands, and also waiting for people to read and savor it carefully.
The book of life may not be as ups and downs as a novel, not as beautiful and profound as prose, nor as abstract and obscure as poetry. Its content is just some ordinary people and things, even as plain as a glass of boiled water.But as long as you read it carefully, this glass of "plain water" will turn into a glass of mellow wine, which is endless aftertaste.
To read life, one must first learn to read others.Every friend, teacher, and even every passer-by in life can give us useful enlightenment.Confucius said: "When three people walk together, there must be my teacher." Everyone has different advantages, which are worth learning. Therefore, Confucius learned from different scholars, such as Tan Zi, Chang Hong, etc. From small things, I learned that the answers obtained from different perspectives are also different.Professors Cao Huaidong and Zhu Xiping gained inspiration from previous studies and finally proved the Poincaré conjecture, one of the "seven major problems in the world".As long as you are good at reading, everyone can inspire others, even a beggar singing in the square can make people feel his optimism and love for life.Reading others is a kind of communication and a kind of learning.
To read life, we must learn to read failure and pain.Edison read the more than 1000 failures, and finally succeeded in inventing the electric light; Goujian, the king of Yue, read the failure and bitterness of mourning the country. Not only did he overcome the illness, but he also returned to his beloved cycling field.Failure and pain are a kind of tempering, a kind of test, which makes real gold shine in the fire, and makes the phoenix nirvana in the fire.Reading failure and pain is not only a lesson of reading failure, but also a kind of courage to face it.Reading failure and pain is a kind of facing and a kind of perception.
To read life, we must also learn to read success and joy.There are both thorns and flowers in the road of life. Reading about success and joy can help people learn to cherish, cherish the hard-won success, and cherish the happiness in front of them. High peaks strike.The living conditions of modern people have been greatly improved, but the sense of happiness has been greatly reduced. Why?Because modern people have forgotten the joy of reading and cherishing happiness.Marie Curie discovered the radioactive element polonium. After receiving the Nobel Prize, she cherished this achievement and refused to stop. Instead, she continued to explore and discovered the more precious radium, which won the Nobel Prize for the second time.She tasted success and had a correct understanding of success, and only then did she achieve greater success.Reading success and joy is a kind of taste, but also a kind of transcendence.
To read life is to learn nutrition from others.
To read life is to learn lessons from failures.
To read life is to learn to cherish in success.
The book of life requires us to write it with our own hands, and we need to read it carefully.Every sentence of smiles and tears, every sentence of success and failure will be constantly polished and beautified in repeated readings, becoming bright pearls and treasures for our life.
score review
The article explains how to read life from several aspects, such as "reading others", "reading failure and pain", "reading success and joy", with clear levels and strict logic.The author cites a large number of examples from Confucius, Cao Huaidong, Zhu Xiping, Edison, Goujian, Lance Armstrong, Marie Curie, etc., from ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad, and quotes from many sources.And when listing examples, there are whole sentences and prose sentences, with various forms and flexible brushwork, which give people a beautiful enjoyment.
classic case
Confucius, Cao Huaidong, Zhu Xiping, Edison, Goujian, Lance Armstrong, Marie Curie, etc.
A Browsing of Students' Essays
(A candidate from Anhui)
I often feel lucky that I am a Chinese teacher, because every time I read the essays submitted by the students, the fresh and unique words are like the calm and refreshing cool breeze in the gradually hot summer sky.
1. ×××——Politics class representative
I read the smile of the stone in the sand, the smell of the sea in the dew, the jump of the autumn wind in the green leaves, and the dance of the sun in the snowflakes.
2. ×××——Art class representative
My favorite color is green plus a little green, like slender wicker floating on a calm lake; my favorite color is white plus a little white, like white snowflakes surrounded by fragrant plum blossoms; my favorite The color is red plus a little red, like the charming sunset covering the face of the sun; my favorite color is blue plus a little blue, like blue crystals floating on the vast sea; my favorite color is black Add a little black, just like the shadows of trees on the mountainside in the evening.
From the seemingly monotonous colors in the world, I read the beauty.
3. ×××——Representative of social class
Attitude is like a magnet, whether your thoughts are positive or negative, you are attracted to them.Thoughts are like wheels, they lead you forward or backward.
Cong Fei, who moved China in 2005, showed us the greatness of attitude and belief.This ordinary singer, with his selfless love for children and the society, made more than 140 students return to school, and even asked to donate his cornea at the last breath of his life.
I read greatness from Cong Fei.
4. ×××——Chinese class representative
"Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, and seeing Nanshan leisurely" made me read Tao Yuanming's leisure; The silt is not stained, and the clear ripples are not demonic." This made me read Zhou Dunyi's independence.
5. ×××——Representative of labor department
Life is like a bunch of dried radishes hanging under the eaves. Only after being slowly soaked in the sesame oil of memories can the taste of sour, sweet, bitter and spicy be revealed.
6. ×××——Mathematics class representative
In the spatial rectangular coordinate system, I take information as the axis and action as the point, let the point move into a beautiful arc, let the line move into a beautiful curved surface, and let the surface form my beautiful tomorrow.
As a Chinese teacher, I was once again impressed by my students.From them, I read my own shortcomings, the beauty of life, and the greatness of nature.
score review
The article takes "browsing" and "students' essays" as a Chinese teacher as clues, and revolves around the feelings of "I as a Chinese teacher". Through the narration of six fragments, the theme is highlighted, the content is substantial, and the center is clear.Candidates select materials from things and people around them, which are rich in materials and far-reaching in artistic conception.In addition, the student used the method of superimposing film shots to design six clips in sequence, with ingenious ideas and novel forms.
wonderful words
Life is like a bunch of dried radishes hanging under the eaves. Only after being slowly soaked in the sesame oil of memories can the taste of sour, sweet, bitter and spicy be revealed.
(End of this chapter)
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