College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 44 Seeing Yourself and Seeing Others (2)
Arrogant people, arrogant people, can't see other people in this world. "Outside the mountains, the green hills and the buildings outside the buildings", only when you see others can you remind your sleeping self!
Boiled water is really a good medicine for awakening people. Open your eyes, see the world, care about yourself and others.

score review
The language of the article is elegant and subtle, showing an inner literary talent. "Through a glass of boiled water, what you see is the whole world. Spring breeze and summer rain, autumn fruits and winter snow, vegetation, insects and fish, birds and beasts... and how small I am!" Reading such words is like sipping fragrant tea, like drinking strong wine.What should also be noticed is that the examinee never forgets to focus on the theme while displaying his talent, for example, the last two paragraphs hold the topic well.

The meaning of life

(a candidate from Gansu)

Only with many notes can a beautiful and majestic symphony be played; a single note, no matter how unique it is, will always produce monotonous and boring music.

--Inscription

On the land of 960 million square kilometers, there are tens of millions of steps, different people, different things, and different things.

Whether a person does good or bad things needs others' evaluation; a person's life is happy and ordinary, needs others to embellish; if a person wants to gain the trust of others, he needs to make efforts first.

A rich man is not very happy, because he cannot get the care and trust of others, and he cannot integrate into the love of the public.

The poor are not very sad, because he has received sympathy and care from others, and he has integrated into the love of the public.

If you want to get a little love from others, you must first love others a little more; if you want to get a little affection from others, you must first give others a little affection.

We came into this world equally, there is no distinction between the rich and the poor, neither the pure nor the cunning.It is only because of the change of people's hearts that there are good and evil, rich and poor.

Life is like this, otherwise how can there be bumpy and tortuous roads, the will to struggle and fight, and the feelings of sadness and passion?

If you want to be loved by others, why not lower your own status?Want to get other people's laughter, why not share your own happiness with others?If you want to gain the trust of others, why not reveal your true heart?

As long as you don't reject Xiaocao's humbleness, the field of hope will not refuse you to let go of your dreams.

As long as you don't reject the majesty of the snow mountain, the holy snow lotus will not reject the purity of your heart.

As long as you don't refuse the ordinary step by step, the alluring brilliance will not refuse your possession of them.

As long as you don't refuse your sincerity to help others, kind people will not refuse their love for you.

It's not that the god of happiness refuses to patronize, but that you didn't take good care of her when happiness hovered around you.

It's not that others ignore you, but that you cover yourself with a mask of money so that others can't feel your kindness.

When you change your life situation, don't try to change other people's mentality, try to change yourself, and make yourself and others feel connected.

The connotation of life, keep pace with the times, try to change your own shortcomings, try to be kind to others, and there will be no barriers between people, and you will be recognized and appreciated by everyone.

score review
Candidates used lyrical techniques and parallel paragraphs to write this beautiful prose poem, which vividly interpreted the topic of "seeing yourself and seeing others".The articles have peculiar imaginations and rich flavors, showing candidates' unique perceptions of nature, life, themselves, and others, and their profound literary literacy.

a letter to peace
(a candidate from Gansu)

Mr. He: How are you doing recently?In recent years, your figure has frequently appeared on the silver screen, and a series of Qing Dynasty historical dramas have vividly interpreted your stories, making your name known to all women and children.Mr. Xiang spent his whole life at the top of the temple, not worrying about his lord or his name, and devoted himself to searching for corruption and accepting bribes, making his brain full of fat, but unexpectedly, the organ was too clever to calculate, and it cost my husband's life.Not only was he dead, his family's wealth was gone, and he wasted a lot of energy for nothing, but he was also notorious for a thousand years. If you know it, have you ever been ashamed?Do you regret it?

You should be a sensible person, but why can you only see yourself and not others because of that little money?Why do you only have the dazzling light of gold in your eyes, but why don't you have the anxiety of worrying about the suffering of people's livelihood?Why do you only have the magnificent ruby ​​on the head of the scepter in your eyes, why are you not tired of working hard for the country?Do you want to know the reason why you ended up ruined?Xiaosheng is not presumptuous, and is willing to give rough advice to Mr., and hope that with the words of a bystander, he can make him repent, and he should be a warning to those who come after him.

There is such a sentence on the gate of the Greek Temple of Wisdom, "Know yourself", and this is where Mr. Mi's fault lies.Knowing yourself is not easy. You have to look at yourself in the eyes of others and examine yourself with your own conscience. This process should accompany you throughout your life and cannot be abolished even for a moment.Only in this way can we have a clear mind, understand our responsibilities and obligations, and understand the meaning of our existence.

Second, man should see others as he sees himself.Mr.'s mistake is that he only sees money and power, and neither examines himself nor cares about what others think of him, so he goes astray, which is very regrettable and lamentable.People's life in the world must be the root of the body and become the foundation of life.Virtuous people, like the sages of Confucius and Mencius, are all diligent in self-cultivation, this is to look at themselves; they devote their lives to lobbying the monarch to stop wars and cease military operations, benevolent government and love the people, the root of which is to see the pain of others and feel pain in their own hearts.Talented people, such as Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty, are also well versed in the principles of looking at themselves and others. On the one hand, they are strict with themselves and keep themselves clean;They are not blinded by fame, wealth and beauty, so they have won the praise of history, the admiration of the people, and have been praised by people for thousands of generations.

Those who can see themselves and those who can only see others are mortals, and those who can see both themselves and others are sages.Mr. Nai He only sees himself, but turns a blind eye to others, because of his death and reputation, it is not appropriate to blame others.

May you reincarnate as soon as possible and become a person who is useful to the people and the country again, so as to cleanse your filth and win the praise of future generations.

score review
The examinee chose the letter style with a high degree of freedom, and directly "dialogues" with people to express his point of view. It should be said that he was quite courageous.The author makes use of time-space dislocation, which is both fantasy and reality, grand and humorous, positive and negative. With vivid and humorous writing style, the author analyzes He Shen's dirty soul, makes history and reality subtly overlapped, and gives people useful enlightenment.

father's shoes
(a candidate from Gansu)

In my mind, my father has always been an indomitable hero, his mind is as broad as the sea.

My father has always worn a pair of cloth-soled shoes, white-soled black gangsters, wide and big, which are particularly dazzling and outdated among the people coming and going on the street.I once asked my father with a smile, "You are a famous person now, why do you still wear such dirt shoes?" My father smiled for a long time without saying a word.

My father once said to me: "Son, don't think that we are rich now, but the blood of rural people flows in our veins, and we must have the simplicity and loyalty of rural people in our bones." I listened to my father. If so, nod thoughtfully.

My father’s family was very poor when he was a child, he didn’t have good clothes to wear, and he didn’t have enough to eat. However, my father studied very hard and was willing to work hard. He was always No. 1 in the class.

Under the threat of poverty, many children drop out of school and go home to herd sheep, but my father's father, my grandfather, an honest but resolute farmer, gritted his teeth and said: "No matter how hard or poor you are, let the children learn to go home." Come out." In this way, grandpa used his broad shoulders and crystal clear sweat to pay for his father's completion of junior high school, and the family was so poor that they had nothing.Father, with the hard work, honesty and intelligence of his rural children, he was admitted to the county key with the No. Where does the tuition fee for the middle school in the county come from?" Grandpa tossed and turned on the kang, worrying all night without worrying about the result.The next morning, grandpa said to his father with a sullen face: "You and I will cut the wheat this morning." The sensible father blinked, as if he understood something, he picked up the sickle and followed grandpa out of the yard without saying a word. Door.

But when the grandfather stepped out of the threshold, he couldn't help being stunned, and so was the father—the whole village, men and women, stood outside the door, some with half a bag of rice in their hands, some with a chicken, and some with a chicken. Some were holding a few torn banknotes stained with sweat, and some were holding some old but clean clothes... The fourth grandfather of the village chief smiled and said: "Our village ancestors accumulated virtues, had good feng shui, and produced talents. The third son ( Father's nickname) fought for the face of our village, and our faces are radiant...Everyone comes to see off the baby..." Tears rolled down the wrinkles on his face, and grandpa yelled at his father: "Kneel down, everyone! Down..." Father said "Boom", and his knees fell on the dirt...

Later, my father said to me: "Do you know why I wear cloth shoes all the time? When I left that day, the fourth grandma in the village stuffed me with a pair of cloth shoes and said, 'Little Sanzi, everyone is struggling these days. This is the truth. , but people live a lifetime, they can't always think about themselves, but also think about others. Who doesn't have a problem? Your fourth grandma and I have lived to this age, and I hope that the future generations will produce talents. In the future, let us Everyone in the village can eat enough to eat, and the children can go to school.' After I went to college, I saw the world, but whenever I faced the world of feasting and debauchery in the city, I thought of the gift that the whole village gave me. People have to have a conscience, people can’t just think about their own well-being, but also think about others!” Looking at the tears in the corners of my father’s eyes, I suddenly understood that my father had given up his generous treatment and returned to the village after graduating from college. The reason for leading everyone to start a business - people can't just live for themselves.

score review
Through a short story with profound meaning, the examinee revealed the truth that "people cannot live for themselves", which met the requirements of the topic.There is no reasoning, but an irrefutable conclusion is demonstrated with facts.The article is novel in conception and fluent in language.The death of Zhang Xianzhi played the strongest voice of the full text.

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