College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 83 Saying "An" (2)
So who "went to Zitai and Shuomo, and left the green mound alone to the dusk?" Chang'an, who gave up the green willows and the river, the long wind and the clouds, and went away gracefully, is willing to go to the yellow sand desert. Withstanding the eternal hunting wind and sand and stone blowing, in exchange for peace and freedom from war?It was Wang Qiang, that stunningly beautiful woman named Zhaojun, who supported half of the sky of stability, well-being, and tranquility for the Han Dynasty.

So who "looks back and smiles at Bai Meisheng", gave up his fame and loved ones, went to the country of Wu, and dedicated everything to the victory of his country?The "sinking fish" girl who washes the gauze enables the people to live and work in peace and contentment, and the country to be stable and united.

Then who is "the wordless stele is full of words", and the merits and demerits are left to future generations to judge?She is the only female emperor in Chinese history!She promotes imperial examinations, employs talents, governs the country rigorously, promotes water conservancy, and spreads the word, creating a scene of prosperity and peace.

From Concubine Ming to Emperor Wu, women can also support the sky alone, and women are also a symbol of peace and happiness.

It is safe to have women in the room, and a home with women is truly like a home. A home with women is a stable home, a peaceful home, a comfortable home, and a safe home.

score review
Unique conception is the outstanding feature of this article.Candidates entered the questions from the ancient man-made "An" character, and then from the ancient man-made "An" character, to the ancient women's life... The concept is exquisite and the concept is novel, which shows that the examinee's intention is outstanding.In addition, the article is rich in connotation, elegant and refined in language, and has a strong cultural atmosphere, which is really a rare masterpiece in the examination room.

classic case
King Zhou and Daji, Tang Xuanzong and Yang Yuhuan, Wu Sangui and Chen Yuanyuan, Lin Juemin and his wife, Wang Zhaojun, Xi Shi, Wu Zetian say "An"

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

The word "an" has many meanings, one of which is "easy", which is actually a life attitude pursued by many people.

"While opening up the wasteland and the southern fields, keep the humble and return to the garden" is a kind of ease;Ease is a kind of relief, a kind of freedom, and a kind of peace and enjoyment after a storm.

The Buddha Sakyamuni gave up his luxurious life as a prince, preferring to wander in the world, seeking the truth.Finally, under the bodhi tree, he was enlightened and perfected.What he pursued was a kind of comfort.This kind of comfort is different from being content with the status quo. It is what he found in the difficult self-denial and self-sublimation.Such ease is not the same as happiness.After he found a perfect self, he was not satisfied with this, but traveled around the world and darkened all beings.Therefore, ease is inner peace after finding the truth, and selfless dedication after self-cultivation.

Tao Yuanming left his worldly fame and wealth behind and retired to the countryside.Whether it is the Wuling Peach Blossom Land he once dreamed of, or the "Eight or Nine Thatched Houses" he runs, he is always pursuing a kind of comfort.He "does not bend his waist for five buckets of rice" because he does not want the stench of material copper to destroy the holy place in his heart.His ease is different from some people's carefree and happy life, which is different from some people's own affairs, but he hopes to return to the simplicity and purity of the countryside, and return to the kindness and nature of human nature.

Li Bai's official career was not going well all his life, and he was repeatedly rejected, but he never thought that in the eyes of later generations, he was not shadowed by the shadow of official failure, but a "five-flowered horse, rich gold, and Huer will be exchanged for fine wine" The heroic poet!His "safety" can break the eyebrows and bend the waist to serve the powerful and make me unhappy. It has been passed down for a hundred years, and the world praises it.Isn't his relief and boldness also a kind of comfort?Not being bound by fame and fortune, even the emperor at that time could hardly enjoy this comfort.Without such ease and freedom, how could Li Taibai leave to future generations such famous sayings that have never been seen before or since?
Ease is given equally to all people in the world, it is not a piece of cake shared by everyone.It is an attitude buried deep in everyone's heart.After we have struggled all our lives and pursued our ideals, we may have white hair and wrinkles on the corners of our eyes, but at this time, we can say that our energy has been truly released, that we have really worked hard and paid , even if there is no afterlife, we will not regret it.At this time, we got a very precious thing - ease, we can really smile, be tolerant, and have no regrets at this time.

score review
Superb artistic conception, appropriate illustrations, fluent language, and the ability to expound poetically and philosophically on the topic are the outstanding features of this excellent work in the examination room.In addition, examinees are also good at turning the big into the small, choosing one of the multiple meanings of the word "An"-"An Yi" to write, not only has a small angle, but also enters the questions quickly and cleverly.This is another feature of this article.

wonderful words
"While opening up the wasteland and the southern fields, keep the humble and return to the garden" is a kind of ease;Ease is a kind of relief, a kind of freedom, and a kind of peace and enjoyment after a storm.

classic case
Buddha Sakyamuni, Tao Yuanming, Li Bai

say "an"

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

Fu Lei once gave the following concepts for "advanced art": be happy but not lewd, sad but not complaining, graceful, elegant and natural, not pretentious, excessively vulgar, and showing off skills.The tranquility, tranquility, and serenity embodied in this high-level art are confirmed here in Peking Opera.

In terms of plot, Peking Opera is peaceful.It does not attract people with intense plots that stimulate the audience's emotions.Beijing opera does not require the audience to cry and laugh, with intense emotional ups and downs.Peking opera only shows its beauty under the condition of describing the plot clearly.Old dramas such as "Ningwuguan" and "Ma Siyuan" were famous for a while, and there were famous actors such as Xiao Cuihua as their specialty, but they were gradually abandoned because the plot was too tragic and complicated. "Wuben Ji" is now just singing the jokes in "Eighteen and a half".Today, repertoires such as "Jade Hall Spring", "Picking up Jade Bracelets", "Longfengxiang", "Selling Water" and other plays are often performed, with simple and peaceful plots.

In terms of accompaniment, Peking Opera is stable.The "innovative" model opera with piano accompaniment during the Cultural Revolution, and the insertion of violin by the old lady in "The Female General of the Yang Family" "Annoyed my temples with fire" are all very offensive.Only Jinghu is at peace with singing.Like the running water in "Wu Jia Slope" and "Sitting Official", accompanied by Jinghu, there will be a seamless sense of stability.

In terms of acting and style, Peking Opera is serene.Peking Opera never emphasizes violence or gore.For example, the suicide in "Farewell My Concubine", the alcoholism in "The Drunken Concubine", the execution in "Xie Yaohuan", the suicide in "Bumping the Stele" and the fighting scenes in various plays are all based on the "extraordinary reality, Based on the principle of using what is expensive and empty, it is artistic and abstract to emphasize the beauty of body, movement or the thoughts and feelings of the characters.The Mei and Yu schools, which are most popular among the audience, have serenity and elegance as their greatest style: they are neither the one-singing and three-sighing of the Cheng school, nor the fierce and passionate ones of the Ma school.Peking opera is neither the Yangchun Baixue of Beijing school writers such as Ling Shuhua, nor the lower Liba people of Pingju. It is content with the mean and takes serenity as its style.

However, in today's society, Peking Opera must develop, innovate, and keep pace with the times.Beijing opera needs to innovate.This "push" is not only "promoting excellent traditional operas", but also "pushing away backward principles".Peking opera, in the process of constantly introducing the old and bringing forth the new, should stand firmly in the position of "national quintessence"!

score review
"Turning the title into an image" is the trick that makes this full-score model essay stand out.The examinee cleverly changed the topic "Speaking of Security" into "Speaking of Peking Opera"; and changed "Speaking of Peking Opera" into "Speaking of the peace, stability, and serenity of Peking Opera" and "Speaking of Peking Opera's restlessness, so it can be peaceful." ".The article has a novel idea and a unique perspective. Obviously, the examinee has a lot of research on Peking Opera.

Safe
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

There is only one human life, and life is so fragile that it needs to be carefully cared for. If you ignore safety, you will ignore the existence of life.

When we are listening to a class in a quiet classroom, the concept or awareness of safety disappears in our minds, and we cannot realize the importance of safety.And every minute and every second, some people are born or die accidentally, the seasons can be reincarnated, and the passing of life is like a river of spring water flowing eastward-it will never return.

Bloody lessons are being played around us: car accidents, fires, falling from buildings, etc., beautiful lives are quietly lost.

Safety first, alarm bells ringing.

Our school's new campus is located in the suburbs. Due to the lack of strict management, the traffic order is abnormally chaotic, the drivers are speeding, and the students' traffic safety awareness is vague. In just two months, three young and fresh lives were wiped out. Falling into grief, and the victim's parents are even more prepared to experience the great grief and trauma of life and death. Whose fault is it?These three incidents have aroused the great attention of the superiors, who have invested heavily in the construction of road facilities and installed a lifeline of protection for the students.Since then, no similar incidents have occurred again. Whenever they see the long protective fence, every student in the school deeply understands that it was bought with blood and life.

Why do you think of repairing it only when it happens?To prevent problems before they happen, it leaves us more than just thinking.

There is an example that I will never forget: In a traffic publicity class, many real car accidents were shown. Among them, a seven-year-old girl lost her lower limbs in a car accident, and her entire upper body was placed in a weak basketball. With one hand leaning on a clog-like wooden board, she snail-climbed the rope. Facing the reporter's interview, she smiled innocently and said that her wish was to have another basketball. Everyone present was moved and shed tears. Like a spring, the classroom was sobbing and crying, sad and heartbroken.

When you are worried that your body is not good enough, have you ever thought about how a person without lower limbs lives?Don't you feel ashamed?What are your worries?
Seriously obeying traffic laws is not only cherishing your own life, but also being responsible for the lives of others.By avoiding one car accident, the damage and grief of two families can be avoided.

Tragedy, none of us want to see it!
How to avoid it, you and me, everyone has a responsibility and an obligation.To maintain the beauty of life, we must cherish our own life, and safety is the first.

score review
Taking the word "an" as the starting point, "safety" seems to be mediocre, but the author can find out real and typical cases from around, let people see the bloody lessons, and once again will be confused by mediocrity. The alarm bell that was ignored by us sounded again, telling us the importance of safety with the lessons of blood, which can be described as well-intentioned.The examples are typical and true, which are the outstanding features of this article.

be at ease

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

"Every road that has been traveled has a reason for having to trek like this, and every road that has to be walked has a direction that has to be chosen in this way." Xi Murong said.In the dark, "I have to do this" reveals a little helplessness, but what I read is more of the brilliance and peace of mind of reason.

Some people say that "people are emotional slaves", maybe at a certain moment, if it is possible to put emotions on the scale, where should the scale go?You are hesitating, he is hesitating.But most of us will choose to have a clear conscience, what we want is to reassure each other, and try not to give sanity a vacation.

Home is a warm harbor, home is father's trusting and encouraging gaze, and home is mother's thousand reminders.Ever since, I missed it crazily in my heart. Caring is the most emotional combination in the world. How can Song Zhiwen's "near the hometown is more timid, and dare not ask people from here" not to move you and me?I once said boldly and against my will: "Children who leave home are the most promising." But at this time, it is difficult to feel at ease. When I wake up from my dream, when I am homesick, I want to call at midnight and say, "Mom, I really want to go home." ..." The fragility of hysteria is vulnerable. People who leave home, longing for home, know that there is a touch, but it is thicker than water, and they have forgotten the words.When the sky is not yet clear, stepping on the platform and the exit of the railway station, there is the expectation and waiting of family members. Because of family affection and peace of mind, no one will say "it doesn't matter".

"You give me a look, and I give you a spray. The moon-like cleanliness is your heart, and the enthusiasm of the spray is my friendship." My friend said, and I also feel sorry for him.The comfort of each other is peace of mind. Boya Ziqi caresses the piano and tears, who will listen to the broken strings?It is a true portrayal of friendship.It has to be like this, friendship is inseparable from life, it is a good medicine for healing. "Don't worry about the road ahead without a confidant, no one in the world knows the king", what kind of best wishes? "Luoyang relatives and friends are like asking each other, a heart of ice is in the jade pot", what kind of emotional confession? "Advise you to have a glass of wine, and go west to Yangguan without an old friend", what kind of parting of love is it?Oh friend, tell me what to say to get around your pain.Only a friendly and tacit friendship can last forever. Friendship is like a ribbon. With you at one end and me at the other end, peace of mind is also satisfied.

"My heart will go on!" (My heart is still) How can you not be moved by the lingering and affectionate melody?How many people do not know the love legend of Liang Zhuhuadie?Love - the theme of human singing.The peace of mind and persistence of heart-to-heart bond, the deep love and the sincerity of affection. In "The Thorn Birds", Ralph's desire for Meggie is not enough, but the archbishop still can't escape the shackles of love, because he is afraid of the troubles of the demons and inner uneasiness, and Julien's betrayal, but what is his heart? Turning around and entangled thousands of times.Love is an ocean, deep and timeless, love is a glass of water, transparent and pure, isn't what many protagonists tell us to be at ease with love?
The green grass, the breeze, the knowing smile, needless to say, for family, friends, lover, know how to cherish and satisfy, let the heart feel like a spring breeze.

Roux said, "We will always be locked in the circle, and we will always be in a circle." If I can feel at ease in the circle, I will never give my reason a vacation.

score review
The language of this article is very beautiful, the emotion of prose poetry is beyond words, the style of writing is lively, quite graceful and cordial, the quotations from the classics, the embellishment just right, add a lot of color.Motivate with emotion and understand with reason, calling on people to pay attention to their inner world, treat emotions sincerely, and be worthy of others.This article shows the young author's broad and broad audiovisual experience, rich accumulation, and keen and profound perception. The thoughtful construction of "one line wears many beads, the shape is scattered and the spirit is gathered" is commendable.

Celebrity Quotes
Every road that has come has a reason to trek like this, and every road that has to go down has a direction that has to be chosen in this way. ——Xi Murong
(End of this chapter)