College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 86 Chopsticks and self-deprecation (1)
(2005 Chongqing Roll)

composition test questions
(1) Write an explanatory text with "chopsticks" as the object.

Requirements: ① Comply with the style characteristics of the expository text. ②The number of words should not be less than 200 words.

(2) "Self-deprecating" is interpreted as "self-deprecating" in "Modern Chinese Standard Dictionary".Self-deprecation is not only a humorous way of speaking, but also a means of psychological adjustment, and a manifestation of life wisdom.Everyone can laugh at themselves and criticize the self-deprecation of others.Please write an article on the topic "self-deprecating".

Requirements: ① Except for poetry, there is no limit to the style of writing. ② No less than 600 words. ③No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
Comparing the 2005 college entrance examination composition questions in Chongqing with the 2005 college entrance examination composition questions in other parts of the country, it seems quite satisfactory and did not make students unable to write.Because chopsticks are something that everyone is familiar with, something that is in contact with every day in life, even students with poor grades can enter smoothly, so as not to digress.The big composition is "self-deprecating", and there is a lot of room for development. Whether it is writing about yourself or others, you have something to say, giving people room for imagination, and it is not easy to deviate from the topic.But the small composition is worth 10 points in total, and it is difficult to widen the gap when scoring.Students who are good at writing do not have much advantage on this topic.If you want to get a high score on the big composition questions, you need to think deeply. Whether you should praise or derogate the "self-deprecating" point of view, and how to put forward arguments are all very elegant, and it is not easy to write well.In addition, although the total score of the composition and the number of words remain unchanged, the number of questions has increased significantly.Moreover, after writing the explanatory text "chopsticks", candidates have to make a big turning point or jump in thinking before they can select content, determine the center, and select materials.Therefore, the difficulty of composition test questions in Chongqing in 2005 has increased compared with previous years.

Writing Ideas Tips
The first question is to explain "chopsticks". You can start with the types, uses, and methods of use of chopsticks. You can also mention the use of serving chopsticks and the promotion of environmental protection. You can also start with the historical evolution of chopsticks and the Chinese history represented by chopsticks. Start with culture and so on.It can be explained plainly, just like ordinary expository texts; it can also be explained vividly, such as "self-report of chopsticks".As long as we are familiar with it, clarify the levels of explanation, and try to describe it vividly with novel and vivid language.

The second question, "self-deprecating" can be regarded as a kind of self-mockery, a humorous attitude towards life, a way of adjusting the mind, and a manifestation of wisdom in life. "Self-deprecating" can also be optimistic and open-minded, full of confidence in one's character, life, and study; it is also a confirmation of one's excellent personality and wise actions, such as not following the world and being willing to give regardless of giving.This is based on a deep understanding of self, belief in yourself, and respect for yourself.In this way, the space for candidates to choose is large.Candidates can write their own "self-deprecating" and other people's "self-deprecating"; they can describe their "self-deprecating" experience, and they can also comment (discuss) "self-deprecating".Just grasp the degree of "self-deprecating".

Full score sample essay
chopsticks
(a candidate from Chongqing)

I am a pair of chopsticks with a simple structure, born in ancient China, and I am honored to be called "China's fifth great invention".

Since I took root in China, after a long period of development, our chopsticks family has become very large, especially with many sisters.There are bamboo, wooden, plastic, ivory, gold, silver, etc.Under normal circumstances, our height is about 25 cm, the lower end is round, and the upper end is square, which looks well-proportioned and cute.

People can hardly leave me when they eat, because I am the tool through which they eat.Before eating, people will gently take me out of their chopstick pockets, put them on the table, and use me directly after the food is ready; after eating, they will put me away, clean them, and return them to their chopstick pockets.This cycle continues until we "get old" and finally "die".

score review
This article adopts the method of vivid explanation, using No.1 as the name, and through the self-report of "I" (chopsticks), it introduces us to the history, types, structures, functions, etc. of chopsticks.The full text is clear, structured, lively and touching, and vividly illustrates the characteristics of chopsticks. It is an explanatory essay that meets the requirements.

chopsticks
(a candidate from Chongqing)

First, please guess a riddle: "The yellow rabbit chases the white rabbit, the white rabbit jumps off the cliff, and the yellow rabbit falls back." Can you guess what the yellow rabbit is?It is the chopsticks that we use every day and I will introduce to you today.

The structure of the chopsticks is simple and original.It consists of two small sticks, usually made of wood, bamboo, plastic, ivory and other materials.The length of chopsticks is generally about 25 cm. The lower end of the chopsticks is round, and the upper end of the hand is square.The diameter of the lower end of the circle is usually about 2 mm, and it increases slightly from bottom to top.Chopsticks are mainly used for people to eat.When eating, people often hold the chopsticks with their right hand, and hold the two chopsticks together, and control the aggregation and separation of the two chopsticks with their fingers, so as to accurately send the food into the operator's mouth.Chopsticks have a long history and are of great variety.With the progress of the times, people now endow chopsticks with the role of art through innovative design of color, pattern, shape and other aspects of chopsticks.

score review
The article is logical, rigorous, and well-structured.At the beginning of the article, candidates used guessing puzzles to draw out the object of explanation——chopsticks. The form is novel and unique, and it can attract the attention of the examiners.Then, the candidate introduced the structure, material, shape, size, usage method, history and current situation of the chopsticks in turn.

Self-deprecating
(a candidate from Chongqing)

Self-deprecation is a humorous way of speaking, a humorous attitude towards life, a way of psychological adjustment, and a manifestation of wisdom in life.If there is a lack of self-mockery in life, maybe this kind of life will be very tiring.

Teachers usually say, you are a student now, and everything should focus on your studies, and other things will be discussed later; parents say, you are a student now, and other things have nothing to do with you now; classmates say... a On the [-]st, when my sister and I went to the market to buy vegetables, we walked around for a long time before we finally weighed some potatoes.Maybe because I love to eat, I bought several catties at once, seventy-five cents a catty.My sister asked the boss how much it was.The boss said, the little sister next to you seems to be a student, so if you ask her... I thought, what's so difficult about it, doesn't it just cost a few brain cells?Just as he was about to say something but before he could say it, the boss suddenly said: "It turns out that students don't know how to settle accounts!" For a moment, I don't know if it was because he was not convinced, so he blurted out: "The teacher said, I am a student now, and learning is the most important thing. What happened to me has nothing to do with me; my parents said..." The vendors and pedestrians next to me laughed, and I was so uncomfortable that I almost couldn't get off the stage.

Actually, it's easy to settle accounts, but isn't it a kind of "merit" to make so many people laugh in that damp and gloomy vegetable market?I then relieved and laughed along with them.

(End of this chapter)