College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 88

(2005 Liaoning volume)

composition test questions
Topic: This year's flower wins last year's red
Requirements: Except for poetry, the style of writing is optional.No less than 800 words.

Question Analysis
In 2005, the composition questions of the Liaoning college entrance examination changed the old face of topic composition for many years, and adopted the old form of proposition composition, which has not been used for many years. It has emerged as a dark horse, and most of the college entrance examination questions in the fifteen provinces of the country are more argumentative. Under the old style of topic composition, it made a bold new attempt to return to the composition of the college entrance examination proposition.The proposition person positions the proposition to allow candidates to get close to life, describe life, dig out philosophy from life, appreciate the truth, goodness and beauty of life, proceed from reality, examine the thinking ability of observing life from life phenomena, call on students to write their own personality, and pay attention to humanities The publicity of the spirit, using the beauty of flowers to write true feelings, directly allows students to start from the real life around them, to observe life, think about life, feel life, love life, select materials, refine themes, and then praise our real life. After the reform, great changes are taking place with each passing day.It should be said that the composition questions of the Liaoning college entrance examination have well grasped the mainstream of the development of the times, and the way of proposition is back to the basics, which is the starting point of the 2005 Liaoning college entrance examination proposition.When selecting materials, candidates should base themselves on the life around them, cut in from a small perspective, use contrastive techniques, and use a hierarchical structure to write about families, streets, shopping malls, schools, factories, rural areas, and cities. The ever-changing changes, writing that the present is better than the past, writing the reasons for the changes, seeing the essence through the phenomenon, praising reform policies, and praising the progress of the times, will have more depth.

Writing Ideas Tips
There are generally two directions of thinking in this composition question, one is positive, affirming that the redness of "this year's flowers" is better than last year's, and the other is negative, although the redness of "this year's flowers" is worse than last year, but I feel that Not as good as last year.The second is to migrate the flowers in nature to the "flowers" in real life.From a positive point of view, it can be written that this kind of flower is Yao Ming's three-year history in the NBA, and it has matured year by year; The three armies are done in one go, and the "Jedi counterattack" is even more soul-stirring; it is one monument after another after Yuan Longping's life in the research of hybrid rice; The best proof of the continuity of our reform and opening up policy. "Last year's flower" is the ignorance and innocence of childhood, "this year's flower" is youth and maturity; "Last year's flower" is the launch of my country's hydrogen bomb and atomic bomb, and this year's flower is the launch of "Shenzhou V".From a negative point of view, it can be written that "flowers are similar every year, and people are different every year." In the eyes of the queen master Li Yu, will the flowers of the prisoners be more popular than the bonuses of the guests?Flowers are the same. Whether a flower is red or not depends entirely on a person's mentality.

Full score sample essay
This year's flower wins last year's red

(a candidate from Liaoning)

My hometown is in Anhui. Because of my parents' job transfer, our family moved to our current home - Liaoning last year.I love Liaoning, and I love Anhui even more, because my roots are there.From TV, newspapers and magazines, I saw that my hometown has undergone tremendous changes, and I feel very proud and proud.

Since ancient times, my hometown, Anhui, has been a place of outstanding people. Whether it is the bank of the Yangtze River where "sunrise river flowers are red than fire", or the banks of the Huaihe River where "weeping willows on both banks are as light as smoke", they have left countless admirable pride.The Taoist School, the Jian’an School, the Tongcheng School and other literatures that originated in Anhui have made great contributions to Chinese culture; Anhui people have a long history of doing business, and they have created the "rich Jiangnan" and The miracle of "no town can't be built without Hui"; a large number of important figures in Chinese history have been born in this hot land of Anhui. Tao Xingzhi, Chen Duxiu, one of the founders of the Communist Party of China and the New Culture Movement, etc. all came from Anhui; Anhui is also the source of national opera. During the Daoguang and Xianfeng years of the Qing Dynasty, Anhui opera was combined with Hubei Han opera in Beijing and gradually evolved into Peking opera. .

Anhui in history has left countless splendid chapters for Chinese culture, and Anhui today has written a more glorious page in the history of China's development. As the saying goes, "this year's flowers are better than last year's reds"!Anhui is a proud province of science and technology. The Hefei Branch of the Chinese Academy of Sciences, the University of Science and Technology of China, Hefei University of Technology and other domestic famous research institutes and institutions of higher learning are located here. Famousness; Anhui is a proud tourist province, with famous mountains and rivers all over the territory, and the natural landscape and cultural landscape complement each other; Anhui is a proud agricultural province, and its agricultural economy ranks ninth in the country; Anhui is also a national mine As a major energy province, there are various kinds of mineral resources in the province, with rich reserves and concentrated distribution. The development and utilization of mineral resources play an important role in the national economy. The Lianghuai coalfield is the largest coal production base in southern China; A well-known automobile province, on March 1997, 3, Chery Automobile Engine Factory officially broke ground, marking the beginning of Anhui people's construction of a "automobile province". From the first car off the assembly line in 18 to 1999, In just a few years, Chery quickly became one of the "top eight" in the domestic car industry.

History has witnessed the changes in Anhui from ancient to modern times. In the past, Anhui was a cultural capital, a commercial state, and a place of celebrities, the source of national dramas. Today's Anhui is an Anhui where technology, tourism, agriculture, mineral energy, and automobiles are all booming.Anhui, this year's flower wins last year's red, I love my hometown!

score review
The author of this article sticks to the topic, focusing on the changes in the past and the present in his hometown - Anhui, and draws a conclusion - Anhui, this year's flowers are better than last year's.The ideas of the article are clear, well-structured, and the language is concise and fluent, just like flowing clouds and flowing water.Parallel sentences in the article are used very well.In general, this article is a clear and crisp composition for the college entrance examination.

This year's flower wins last year's red

(a candidate from Liaoning)

God said: A perfect journey of life does not require too many gorgeous words and complex tones, but only a simple touch from the bottom of my heart.

After several productions and links, I hastily shook off the dust on my body, with hope, passion, complacency, and countless black inks, and started a path of my own.Maybe the end of the road is not protected by the sun, but I will still move forward happily and devote my life with calmness, because I chose youth, a distant place, and an unknown but surely magnificent tomorrow.

Facing Venus with a broken arm, I once felt sorry for her incompleteness; Facing the demeanor of the teacher waving snowflakes, I was sad for my ordinary self; Embarrassed and lamented.

The interpretation of the times, the obstacles of the world, the naive heart began to mature.On the scroll of life, I left too many mistakes and too many unhappiness.The innocent eyes have already dimmed, and filled with deepness.When I was young, I began to wake up and began to understand the truth that "the person who regrets missing the first train will definitely miss the next train".I know: I can't change anything for wrong writing, because I am a pen; for frustration, I am just a passing child, my tomorrow is still very long, and my future belongs to the distance.For the sake of nectar, I can only continue to calculate between the knives of the long years until the end of my life.

It is precisely because of the loss of the jade arm that Venus is deeply pregnant with the dream of life with various possibilities; a pen does not have too many functions, but it has the heart of "willing to spin the silk for the spring silkworm, willing to be a red candle to shine on the world" ; the portrait of a person in life does not lie in his grave after death.Just like Tolstoy's tomb, what is beautiful is not the scenery, but the soul.

With the flushing of life, the scalding of the years, and the accumulation of experience, I will slowly withdraw from history and end my pen life.Looking back on yesterday, I will not cry, but continue with a smile, because I learned to be optimistic yesterday, because frost leaves are redder than February flowers, because this year's flowers are more red than last year.Tears are not my bosom friend, because I understand that difficulties are not the end of life, but the beginning of motivation.Contusions are like drops of ink, giving me wings to fly without breath.Even in the coldest corner of the world, I will still set out for happiness.Because the thick cocoon is a kind of solidity, and it is God's comfort to me.

Composing sentences with thoughts, conceiving stories with wisdom, previewing tomorrow with vicissitudes, great gold will also be bred in ordinary sand.

One day, I will be old.Facing the poetic painting environment, I will admire: How wonderful!Because life is beautiful!

How great!Because tomorrow will be even more touching!
score review
The title hints at its subject metaphorically, what is magnificent today will be even more touching tomorrow.The combination of scattered and scattered language is full of changes, and the continuous use of short paragraphs at the end makes the emotional burst reach its peak.The use cases are varied, and it expresses the author's praise of today and his beautiful yearning for tomorrow. It is a lyrical prose with exquisite language and intense emotion.

wonderful words
God said: A perfect journey of life does not require too many gorgeous words and complex tones, but only a simple touch from the bottom of my heart.

(End of this chapter)