Reborn 1980: The Hot Wife Has Space

Chapter 398 Call Back Every Minute

Shen Wudi knew that An An was going to write a script, so he joined in the fun, "Brother and sister-in-law, sister An An wants to write a script? Can you include me in it too? I am so cute, and I am the representative of cute characters."

Lin Yuan patted his head, "Then you have to ask Miss An An."

Fifth Brother Shen was delighted, "Okay, then I'll go ask Sister An An."

Lin Yuan couldn't help shaking her head, with a doting smile on her face.

That night, An An roughly showed the backbone of her own story to Lin Yuan.

Just looking at this simple story line, Lin Yuan couldn't help but feel pain in her heart.

Because, this is An An's own life experience.

This script tells the story of a little protagonist who is fostered by his uncle and aunt because both of his parents died. The uncle and aunt dislike having an extra mouth to eat at home, so the little protagonist who is only five or six years old washes clothes, feeds chickens, collects firewood, etc.

The little protagonist is very sensible, and she is as diligent as she can be under the roof.

However, the uncle and aunt's family was still dissatisfied, and they beat and scolded her.

Later, the uncle and aunt of Qinshou discussed and planned to sell the little protagonist to a widower to be his daughter. In order to sell it at a good price, the uncle and aunt tried their best to sell it.

"Look, my An'an can tell from a young age that she is a beauty. Although she is a loser, she is a beauty after all when she grows up. Moreover, this girl is flexible in her hands and feet, and she is a good hand at work. It will not hurt to raise her. You bought it and raised it as a daughter, and when you grow up... Hehe, it's not impossible to be a daughter-in-law."

Regardless of the young protagonist's age, she understands what it means to be a daughter-in-law, because her parents have told him that a daughter-in-law is very close and intimate, and she can't be called casually.

Therefore, the little protagonist escaped, and she wandered all the way, eating and sleeping in the open. Many times, she did not have the courage to live, but she could not forget that when the building collapsed, her parents protected her with their bodies. But he told her lovingly.

"An'an, you must live a healthy and happy life, otherwise... parents can't smile at Jiuquan, we, we don't want to die with peace..."

With the advice of her parents, the little protagonist never thought of giving up on herself no matter how difficult she was. She wanted to live on and live like what her parents wanted to see...

Lin Yuan's heart hurt even more after reading it, and she reached out and patted An An's face lightly, "An An, you have been wronged."

An An's eyes were also red, "No, I..."

Lin Yuan gently hugged her into her arms, "I miss them very much, don't you?"

An An shook her head gently, "...Actually, I can't even remember the appearance of my parents, but that vague memory has been lingering in my mind. Whenever I dream back at midnight, my heart I can't stop the dull pain, regretful, suffocating, and astringent."

Lin Yuan naturally understood, and tightened her grip, "Don't be sad, if your parents know better, they will be pleased to see you now."

An An shed tears and wiped away her tears, "Sister-in-law, then... my script, is it okay?"

Lin Yuan nodded, and then made a serious evaluation, "The script is very good, but it's a bit monotonous. This story line can be enriched. Since it is a script, you can set up some contradictions to make the whole story more tense. Some, especially the characters, need to be fuller."

An An nodded, "I see."

Lin Yuan smiled softly, "Then go and change it."

An An revised the script overnight for three days. When An An re-shown the revised script to Lin Yuan, Lin Yuan saw it from beginning to end.

After reading it, her eyes were red.

Because, the little protagonist in the script is really pitiful and touching.

Her tragic life experience, her strength, her sensibility, and everything about her biological mother are touching people's hearts. At the end of the story, although the little protagonist has fulfilled his wish, it still makes people feel unsatisfied. It is very regrettable, and I always feel that it should not end like this.

"How is it? Sister-in-law? Can you do it?" An An asked nervously.

Lin Yuan slowly raised her red eyes, "Yes, it's very touching. An An, you are a very good person, and this script is also very well written, almost perfect, which shows that you have a great ability in text creation. Talent, but I can create more in the future."

An An was shy, "Thank you sister-in-law."

Lin Yuan touched her head tenderly, "Silly boy. But An An, the end of this script is a bit regrettable, the ending is too fast, the whole story is very good, but the story of the little protagonist should not just be Staying at her sixteen or seventeen years old should be her entire life."

An An nodded, "Then...shall I write again?"

Lin Yuan shook her head, glanced at her, and spoke in a negotiating tone, "I'll write the latter part, or I can find someone to do it for you, do you think it's okay? Sister-in-law means that she wants to grow up with the little protagonist. Then add some things. For example, she came out to start her own business, and after she started her business, she met the right person, fell in love with the right person, got married, had a baby, etc. Because of your age, you must have never experienced these , so you can’t write it even if you are forced to write it, so I need someone else to write it.”

An An actually wanted to write about growing up, but she really had no experience.

"Okay, the second half of the script will trouble my sister-in-law."

Lin Yuan was relieved, "You are really sensible, so my sister-in-law will do it for you. Your first half of the script is really good, come on!"

He clenched his fists, his face full of encouragement.

An An also clenched her fist, "Come on!"

And Lin Yuan didn't want to waste a good script, and she didn't want her experience to be completely based on An An's script, so as not to ruin the script.

As a result, Lin Yuan decided to let people try the second half of the script.

If there is a more suitable one, someone else will write it.

Because the price offered was not low, there were not a few people who were willing to try the manuscript. Lin Yuan gave three days, and she made a decision after reading the draft three days later.

This trial draft is about the second half of the story line, as well as the plot and lines of one or two episodes.

For the trial draft, Lin Yuan was also full of expectations.

And taking advantage of these three days of trial drafting, Lin Yuan was also happy to have a leisurely time, letting Shen Shuting drive the car and take the family to go sightseeing in the mountains and rivers.

This winter is also suitable for barbecues. Under Lin Yuan's suggestion, the family went to barbecue.

Three days passed very quickly, and three days passed in the blink of an eye.

Except for a small number of those who tried the draft, they abstained from submitting the draft. Regardless of whether it was good or bad, they basically handed in the draft.

Lin Yuan first ruled out the trial drafts that she thought were inappropriate, leaving only three trial drafts.

As for the three trial drafts, she thought they were all very good, and it was difficult to make a decision right away.

"Shen Shuting, come and help me see, which of these three drafts is more suitable?"

Lin Yuan sat on the bed, covered with three thousand blue silks, just a thin silhouette made people feel pity.

Shen Shuting swallowed, sat down beside the bed, and took her into his warm arms with one hand.

"Okay, let me see."

Pulled off the quilt, wrapped her up tightly, held her in one hand and picked up a trial draft in the other.

Lin Yuan was depressed, "Just look at it, what are you doing with your arms around me? I can't even breathe."

Shen Shuting said, "It's windy, I'm afraid you'll catch a cold."

"..."

Lin Yuan also followed him, leaning on his shoulder delicately and following him to read the trial draft, "What do you think of this trial draft?"

Shen Shuting commented, "This trial draft looks good, but the character of the male protagonist is not good. I don't trust my wife enough. Besides, why do you want to start a business behind your back? Not good!"

Immediately, throw this trial draft away.

Picking up another trial draft, Shen Shuting looked at it for a while, and said cheerfully, "This one, that's all, this trial draft is not bad."

Lin Yuan glanced at it, but frowned, "This trial draft? Not bad, the love between the hero and heroine is also very sweet, but...is it too sweet? And how can there be such a good love in the world? I always feel This lacks twists and turns, but makes people feel a little tired and crooked, and I don’t think it’s good enough.”

Shen Shuting retorted, "Why is sweet love not acceptable? This heroine has been suffering since she was a child, so why not meet a husband who dotes on her and loves her when she grows up?"

Lin Yuan also retorted, "But reality is reality. It is impossible for reality to give you a tall, rich and handsome man because you worked hard when you were a child, and then spoil you and love you. Moreover, the plot is arranged in this way, which is actually a drag. The entire script was written, and the heroine’s brilliance was completely concealed, her growth experience when she was a child, and she grew up just to meet a tall, rich and handsome girl?"

"Then what do you want?" Shen Shuting hesitated and asked her.

Lin Yuan picked up the last one, "I think this trial draft is suitable, but the author's writing skills need to be improved, and his lines are also lacking, but so far, her conception is the most suitable. The protagonists have known each other since they were young, but they didn't communicate too much, and even because of some things when they were young, the male protagonist is prejudiced against the female protagonist.

When they first met when they grew up, the hero still had subconscious distrust towards the heroine, but as time got along, he gradually changed his view of her, and bit by bit engraved the trust into his bones and blood, In the end, I fall in love with her naturally and trust each other. I think this kind of love itself is very romantic.There is no vigorous love process, but it is touching. "

Shen Shuting nodded, "Well, since you have decided, then use this story."

Staring into her eyes, Shen Shuting's deep eyes almost looked into her heart, suddenly cupped her face, and gently approached her ear to whisper a word.

"Yuanyuan, to be honest, if you can choose, what I want to give you is the life in the second script, hold you in the palm of my hand, warm you, and pamper you."

Lin Yuan's nose soured, "...Shen Shuting, in fact, you have already done it."

Now, he does hold her in his hands, and he does warm and dote on her.

Shen Shuting shook his head, "No, I still can't forgive myself. In the future life, I tossed you a lot. I blamed me for being too proud at that time. Since I like it, why did I do so? I regret that I didn't just lift you up from bed at the beginning. run up..."

Lin Yuan's ears felt hot, and she pushed him angrily, "That's off topic."

Shen Shuting smiled and squeezed her hand.

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The script is officially finalized, and it will take some time to write and revise the draft later.

An An spends every day in her room, writing manuscripts without leaving the door.

Every time An An finished writing a draft, she would read it to Lin Yuan first and ask for her opinion. Lin Yuan also studied the script as a reader, and then put forward corresponding opinions.

As for everything in Qianyuan, Shen Shuting, who was not willing to let Lin Yuan get tired, took care of everything.

Of course, Qian Yuan has become more and more mature.

Under Shen Shuting's management, everything is in order.

In recent days, Lin Yuan's belly has grown a lot. It is almost four months now, and her abdomen is a little bulging.

When the fetus was almost four and a half months old, it was Lin Yuan's first Spring Festival after arriving at Shen's house.

This Spring Festival must be lively, couplets, window grilles, and blessing characters are indispensable, and Lin Yuan wants to buy these things herself, feeling like it is responsible.

In the afternoon, Lin Yuan directly pulled Shen Shuting up and went to the street.

Because it is the end of the year, New Year’s goods are being sold on the market day. It is no exaggeration to say that the whole street is selling them. When it is not the market day, many people come out to sell goods on the street.

There were too many people on the market day, Shen Shuting didn't agree to come out to buy new year's goods, after all the street was too crowded, Lin Yuan was pregnant, if she accidentally got squeezed, he would feel distressed.

"Shen Shuting, take a look, should we buy this couplet or this one?"

Lin Yuan hesitated between the two couplets, how to choose at the moment.

Shen Shuting glanced at it, and pointed to one of them, "Of course this one is good, family fun."

Lin Yuan nodded, "I also think this pair is good, so let's go with this pair. Let's pick another pair of lanterns."

In the 80s, there were still many people selling handmade lanterns on the street, and handmade lanterns were made into various shapes. Looking at the dazzling array of lanterns, Lin Yuan fell into difficulty in choosing again.

"How to choose?"

Lin Yuan looked up at Shen Shuting asking for help.

Shen Shuting pointed to one of the pair of rabbit lanterns, "That's right, rabbit lanterns, this is cuter."

"Isn't it too childish?" Lin Yuan frowned, not paying much attention to the rabbit.

Shen Shuting shrugged, "It's right to be naive, there are so many little radish heads in our family, apart from the two of us, which one is not naive?"

Lin Yuan smiled, thinking it made sense, "Are you talking like you're not a childish ghost?"

Shen Shuting hooked her chin evilly, "That's it, isn't it true that if a family doesn't enter the house, who hasn't been childish yet? Look, my little daughter-in-law, isn't she being childish when she smiles foolishly?" ?”

Lin Yuan suddenly realized that her eloquence had become stupid, and she didn't know how to piss him off.

The two chose lantern couplets, and then they had to buy New Year's goods, such as peanuts, red melon seeds, and dried raisins.

Normally, Lin Yuan really rarely buys candy, because it is too sweet, and it is easy to cause tooth decay. She has always controlled not to let the little radish heads of the Shen family eat more, but the Chinese New Year is different, and they are allowed to eat some.

(End of this chapter)