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Chapter 391 Report: Regarding plot changes

Cute little angel!Mo finally edited the text!

Well!Almost exhausted!Fingers hurt so bad!
A lot of typos have been corrected earlier, let me talk about the plot of the earlier changes here.

1. The plot of candied haws in the previous article, because it is best for pregnant women not to eat candied haws, so I changed it. Thanks to the cute little angel for reminding me about this, okay!
2. The plot of Shen Yuzhong's Jun Ruxin has also been changed a little. Interested little angels can go back and have a look.

3. Mingyan has Mochou Villa, Liuyan Pavilion, Canfengtang... emmm, she still has Shantouer, and she used to call her the owner of the villa, etc., which was a bit confusing, so she changed it to a unified name: Shanzhu .

4. When Ming Yan entered the capital, she used Yan Shilan's identity to put it in the text in advance.

5. Focus on the key points. The most important changes are after chapter 320. After the title is "Night Detective 1", the changes are very big!

To elaborate here, the original plot of Night Detective was that Mingyan went to Zhanwang Mansion to find a child, and then was imprisoned, etc. Jiangzi's plot, but it has been changed now.

After becoming Mingyan and entering Zhanwang Mansion, he sensed something was wrong, and gave it out again, and then went to the Duke's Mansion to find the Shocking Dragon Ring... Here, the Duke of the Kingdom will make an early appearance, and he will give the Shocking Dragon Ring to Gu Yu, The reason why he was asked to take the Ring of Startling Dragon out of the capital was that not only Mingyan was looking for Ring of Startling Dragon, but also another group of people were looking for... emmm, you can go back to see the details, but I can't explain in one or two sentences.

Then there was Mingyan's fight with Shen Yu after he went to the Prince Zhan's Mansion, and Shen Yu's changes in his heart later on, as well as Mingyan's changes in his heart.

The previous version was actually written incorrectly.

In fact, Shen Yu didn't blame Mingyan for controlling him, what he was angry about was that Mingyan sent him away without his consent.

As for Mingyan, she shouldn't feel too much guilt, after all, in order to save Shen Yu, she cut off all her supernatural cores, how can she treat him any better?

The little angel Meng wants to watch the plot of abusing Shen Yu, don't worry, it's in the back, he absolutely won't want to abuse him!

6. This change is mainly about Shen Yu's family members. It is in the plot of the Duke's Mansion. If the little angel is unwilling to go back and watch it, Mo will simply say here that the old Duke is Shen Yu's grandfather. The father-in-law is Shen Yu's father. In fact, these three people are from the same line, they are direct descendants.

The roles of Shen Yashu and Shen Yamei that appeared in the early stage, as well as the uncle, second uncle, third uncle, fourth uncle, fifth uncle, etc., are actually adopted. There is an explanation in the article for why it was adopted, so go find it yourself!
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Alright, let’s not talk anymore, Mo Chao overestimated himself——

Such a powerful revision of the text, with a total of more than 40 words, took a few days, plus changing the plot, Mo really reached the limit...

Forgive me some time, little angel Meng, and continue with the five shifts tomorrow, when the time comes for a new chapter and a new plot, good night.

- 2018/12/22
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