Quan Shao's new wife

Chapter 1201 Persistence (6)
"This paragraph shows the pure and simple feelings between children. How about we extend this feeling upwards and give this story a romantic start?"

"Our romance still begins with an artificial moon—I designed the scene like this—"

Wan Sansan turned the PPT to the next page, which was a hand-painted background image: "Night, village, starry sky, bright moon."

"The little girl said: The moon is so beautiful."

"The little boy said: Then I will pick it for you."

"The little girl said: The sky is so high."

"The little boy said: I am a boy."

"Simple scenes and dialogues echo the real moon with the artificial moon behind; the highlight is-the boy's performance: people have expectations for the next plot."

"The next thing is the naturalness and innocence of two children lying on the ground and sleeping, and then the camera turns to the morning light in the distance, indicating the change of time."

"Then give the little boy two shots: that is, pour the Garan shampoo into a moon-shaped bottle, and then quietly put the bottle where the shampoo was originally placed."

"In the second shot, the little boy shuts himself in the room and starts making an artificial moon."

"Next, it is consistent with the plot designed by Manager Xu. Then add a set of scenes: the little girl will play alone from now on, and will argue every day to wash her hair with the shampoo from the moon bottle, but the little boy has never appeared .”

"Then there is a camera cut: the camera turns from the sky above the village to the ground in the wilderness, a luminous artificial moon, in the dark night, glowing softly alone, beside it, there is a bottle of exquisitely packaged, Moon-shaped Garan Shampoo."

"Then a little girl in a white dress ran into the camera, bent over to pick up the shampoo, and tentatively pushed the artificial moon with her hands——touching the moon with her fingers, the light suddenly illuminated the whole night, printing on the little girl's face With a pure and pleasant smile, the voice-over advertisement appears—”

"I'm sorry, I didn't think about the words of the advertisement." When everyone was listening to Focus, Wan Sansan's apology made everyone boo.

"Thinking so much, my brain cells have died countless times." Wan Sansan said wrinkling his nose.

"Very good." Xu Nuo nodded approvingly, and after Wan Sansan returned to his seat, he looked at her and said, "The added elements are almost integrated with the original idea, and there is no trace; the center of the idea is very It is clear and does not deviate; the added plot is very interesting, and recently the cute children have attracted more people's attention, and this plot can be said to be in line with the popular trend."

"OK, I've said so much about the advantages of Sansan's supplementary creativity, so let's discuss what are the advantages or disadvantages." Xu Nuo took the mouse in his hand, brought the PPT to the front, and looked at everyone and said.

"I think the plot is a bit inconsistent. If you use a montage method, each segment is too long; if you use a realistic method, there are gaps between each plot; so the creative idea is good, but it really needs to be completed. No, it's not a high-quality film; it's just a collection of ideas."

"I also have this feeling. Although the plot is richer, it feels cumbersome compared to the original version."

"I'm leaning more towards the simplistic picture."

"The same idea, but with an added plot, why does it feel like it has been pulled down all of a sudden?"

"..."

"Ahem, can you talk about some more advantages?" Xu Nuo is actually very happy to see that the questions pointed out by everyone are sharp and precise. As a creative, the ability to appreciate and identify comes first; creativity comes second.

"The moon-shaped outer packaging is a very good idea. I suggest that our creative theme be called: Garan? Moon. I think it is very artistic."

"Very good." Xu Nuo nodded, looked up at Wan Sansan, and said with a smile, "This is the biggest contribution. The theme of 'Galan? Moon' and the packaging of the meniscus are very bright."

"Thank you, Manager Xu. I just think these ideas are very good, and I am reluctant to delete them. I have actually considered whether the complete ideas are too crowded." Wan Sansan nodded and said.

"Yes, people who are creative will have this problem. Do it a few times and know how to let it go." Xu Nuo nodded, got up and walked to the projection screen, looked at everyone and said, "The time for this project is relatively tight. So there is no more time for everyone to discuss. After I make an interception of this draft, I will finalize it, and then continue to create the script and prepare for shooting.”

"Character relationship setting: Boys and girls are brothers and sisters. We use care and family affection to embody the temperament conveyed by 'Galan'—rare, pure, indifferent, and timeless."

"The length of time is set: the boy is 5 years old, the girl is 3 years old, and the mother is 32 years old."

"The dialogue at the beginning is retained, and the camera is canceled-that is, there is only sound but no video at the beginning."

"In the first scene, the little boy pours shampoo into the moon-shaped bottle, and then runs out holding the moon-shaped bottle and handing it to the mother who is helping his sister wash her hair."

"Next, a close-up of the camera, the shampoo in the palm of the mother, and then on the head of the younger sister, the happy and satisfied smiling faces of the mother and daughter, and the hair is silky and gentle after drying."

"The camera switches to the night sky, with stars, the moon, and my brother's voice—the moon I made should also be able to shine."

"Use this sentence to express the unbroadcast story of brother and brother making a handmade moon."

"Then the camera cuts to the ground - a field full of pebbles, a clear winding stream, a woods where the wind blows leaves, a bright crescent moon, a crescent-shaped bottle of shampoo, and then my sister wearing a white gauze Qun ran over and said as she ran, "Brother, the moon on the ground is the moon that shines."

"Then the screen is released, the screen is black, and finally there are product images and advertising words: Jialan? Yue, the most beautiful is you."

Xu Nuo's slow and soft voice, like the bright moon passing through the distant mountains, is clear and soft, making the colleagues in the creative room forget to respond.

Xu Nuo went back to the table and sat down, looked at everyone and said: "Because the creative keyword we selected is 'rare', so the whole creative film, as long as it can express the creative intention, the shorter the better. I will use two more In a few days, I will confirm the final creative draft. Colleagues have any ideas and opinions, and you must tell me as soon as possible in these two days."

(End of this chapter)