Bodyguard: my daughter

Chapter 578 Playing with me, you are still tender (13)
You must know that the number one in the world, because her grades are not very good, she never said it to the outside world. In addition, this is a male-oriented book, and she uses a waistcoat, so others don't know that she wrote this book. It stands to reason It is impossible for Chen Shou to know, but after a few quick glances, Chen Shou was able to understand something, which naturally surprised her.

She didn't think Chen Shou could let him see it by sliding the mouse like that.

Chen Shou didn't explain anything, but read Yao Xue's second novel Cultivator. Compared with the book No. [-] in the world, Yao Xue was already able to control the book of Cultivator, but Yao Xue In terms of fighting and girls, the handling is so-so, making people feel nothing at all when reading it, it's just words.

In fact, these two parts were not handled well, and the whole novel was downgraded by two major grades.

Yao Xue, who was on the side, saw that Chen Shou stopped after quickly operating the mouse twice, and couldn't help wondering: "What's wrong?"

Looking at Yao Xue who was paying attention, Chen Shou didn't hide anything, and told the specific situation in detail.

"Did you read it just now?" Yao Xue couldn't help being surprised, and then she realized that what she said was a little vague, and continued: "I mean, you read the content so quickly just now?"

"What's the matter?" Chen Shou said disapprovingly: "Many readers on the Internet can read ten lines at a glance. In fact, the main reason is that your novel is not well written. If it is well written, readers can't read ten lines at a glance. A really good novel is It will bring people into the situation in the novel, let people enter that world with each sentence after sentence, and imagine the picture of what happened at that time."

Yao Xue didn't feel unhappy because of Chen Shou's comments. On the contrary, her attitude changed for the better, as if she was talking to a friend, and said: "You are right. Indeed, there are still many areas for improvement and improvement, otherwise, my grades in this book would not be reluctant."

"Actually, I think, you can read more novels written by other successful authors, study them, and think about it in another way. If you were to write it, how would you write it? The easiest way is to imitate directly. In the book, he traveled through time after being hit by a car, you can completely write down the building and time travel."

(End of this chapter)