superstar of life

Chapter 187 Change the script
Yang Xiuyuan sat over. He hadn't read this script, and after reading it, he always felt a little awkward.

Logically speaking, there are two lines.

owner and dog.

But only one line is highlighted.

master line.

The owner's name is Yu Dong, who lost his legs in a car accident. He lives with his younger brother and is taken care of by his younger brother and daughter-in-law.

One day my younger brother brought back a puppy. The family didn't like puppies at first, but considering that it would be better for Yu Dong to relieve boredom, they stayed.

He can do some tinkering, but he can only stay at home. After all, no one will find a home to do it for him.

So Yu Dong made a small trolley and started to go to the market to set up a stall, using his hands instead of his feet.

The dog followed him all the way, and later the dog dragged Yu Dong out of the stall to close the stall.

Where is the awkwardness?

In the end, the dog dragged Yu Dong out of the stall to close the stall all the year round. It was a famous dog in the market, and someone wanted to buy it.

Will it sell?
It's really sold, the younger brother's family has an accident, and they are short of money.

So Yu Dong had no choice but to sell the dog for several thousand yuan to solve the difficulties of his younger brother's family.

In the end, the dog ran back by itself, but was bitten by a stray dog ​​while looking for food on the road, and Yu Dong died the next day after seeing him.

Yang Xiuyuan felt that the structure of the whole story was suddenly pulled down.

Forcibly touching.

"How about it?"

Yang Xiuyuan thought for a while and said: "It's not easy to say, the theme of the whole script is a bit messy, I want to reveal the loyalty of the dog, and I want to reveal the emotional sublimation between Yu Dong and his younger brother's family, but the two themes are in conflict. Forcing a touching ending."

Qu Xiuyi smiled and said, "There are still people who say the story is simple."

"When they say simplicity, they don't mean the story is simple. They may think the story is low-level. This story is a typical low-budget literary film. The key shooting difficulty is not small, and it is thankless."

Qu Xiuyi nodded: "When I bought this script, I paid attention to the line between the dog and the owner, but the whole setting is a bit too routine."

"Then how are you going to change it?" Yang Xiuyuan asked.

"I have an idea, you said, if I only keep the thread of the dog and the owner, how about using another story background?"

"what story?"

"Bang Bang." After Qu Xiuyi finished speaking, she opened several webpages, all of which were full of stories and reports about Bang Bang.

"Isn't this story from Yuzhou? Bangbang is also a characteristic industry in Yuzhou. How about I add a line of Bangbang Army?"

Yang Xiuyuan stared blankly at Qu Xiuyi, he had this idea in just a moment.

Because he is from Yuzhou, when he was a child, he watched a TV series about Bangbang, which is the memory of the people of Yuzhou. In other words, the main city of Yuzhou was picked up by Bangbang.

Yuzhou is mountainous, and the transportation was not developed at first, and most of them were transported by sticks.

Later, due to urban development, the Bangbang industry gradually disappeared in the city of Yuzhou.

If the line of bang bang can be embedded in the movie, the meaning of the whole movie will immediately rise to a higher level.

"What about the settings?" Yang Xiuyuan asked.

Qu Xiuyi opened another file, which was the script that Qu Xiuyi himself modified.

Yang Xiuyuan was very curious and was watching carefully.

In terms of setting, Qu Xiuyi eliminated the line of the younger brother and added a few characters, all of which are awesome.

But the written part of the plot is reasonable and full, why?
With interaction.

Yu Dong set up a stall in the market, and a group of great friends kept watch beside him, and they had very warm interactions with the dogs.

For example, in one scene, Yu Dong went up the slope, and the dog pulled Yu Dong, which was very difficult.

There is a new stick to help, but it is stopped by another stick next to it, saying that it can do it, it is the best dog.

With a lot of details, people will not be facialized. What about the previous script?

There are not too many descriptions of the market, the most important plot should be the plot of the dog dragging Yu Dong out of the stall to close the stall, but this plot was briefly mentioned in the original script, and it was suddenly given a few years later.

The modification of Qu Xiuyi is to highlight the plot between Dong Chuishan and the dog, and weaken the miscellaneous things behind it.

"What are you laughing at! Did you change it badly?" Qu Xiuyi asked a little nervously.

Yang Xiuyuan shook his head: "That's great, what's next? How are you going to write it?"

"I'm still looking for information. The most important thing about this kind of film is the truth. I don't know the lives of the sticks. If I want to write interactive scenes alive, I may have to find the real sticks to understand the situation."

"You ask me, I'm from Yuzhou, I know it's great."

Qu Xiuyi looked at Yang Xiuyuan suspiciously: "Do you know the life of Bangbang?"

Yang Xiuyuan nodded: "Of course, why is this film improving the theme? Bangbang is already an industry that exists in name only, and the loneliness of this profession can be included in it. For example, Yu Dong died of illness, but the dog still sticks to it, dragging it every day." Yu Dong’s cart goes to the market, we are changing a detail, many Bangbang have carts, and Yu Dong’s cart is sent by Bangbang.”

"The dog drags the cart to the market every day, and drags the cart back when the market closes. This is the same. What has changed? The city! The city is developing. After Yu Dong dies, the sticks will take care of him. Dogs, but the city doesn’t need Bangbang any more. They left one by one until all the Bangbang who knew that dog left the industry. Ten years later, Bangbang who had the best relationship with Yudong came back, and the whole Yuzhou has become a super-developed city, there is no BANG BANG anymore, and there is no need for BANG BANG anymore, he came here to commemorate, to see where he lived and where he worked, and talk about here and there The change."

"Of course, there is still the market, the market is still there, and the dog is also there, lying in front of the cart and guarding the stalls, but the dog is already old and twilight."

"Bangbang's emotional breakdown, the story ends."

Qu Xiuyi was substituted by Yang Xiuyuan's description, and she could even imagine a scene.

Stepping into the bazaar, the old friends at the familiar stalls are gone. I am getting old and the city has changed.

But the dog is still there, guarding the cart and stall.

It seems that he is still guarding his great career in the past. At that time, Yuzhou City could not lack of Bangbang, because Yuzhou City needed them.

But now it is no longer necessary and cannot keep up with the times.

When he is about to grow old and is about to meet those old friends who are not there, the dog is still sticking to it.

Still waiting for its owner, the first wait is ten years.

This scene made Lao Bang Bang cry.

One sentence: "Are you still waiting for an old friend?"

And ashes to ashes to ashes.

Qu Xiuyi regained consciousness, her eyes were red, she looked at Yang Xiuyuan: "That's great."

Yang Xiuyuan held Qu Xiuyi's shoulders, his thoughts drifted away, and said: "I have already thought of a few great characters, each of Henan, Lao Gan, and Lao Jin has a reason why they should not be great. Everyone is real."

　Thanks to Situ Zaizai for the reward of one thousand, thanks to hsclaker for the reward of one hundred, and thanks to me for being the two rudder masters of brother Yi Zhidao. I owe two changes, and I will pay it back within this month!
　　
　
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