Blue Sword

I thought it would take millions of words.

To be honest, as a new author with no experience, although this book has shortcomings of one kind or another, such as "the characters are too simple", "the setting is too complex", "why are all female team members" and "introduction" reported to me by some readers Too poisonous”, “I can’t understand the title of the book”, “I’m not used to it because there is no system”, “The author is not smart enough”, etc.

However, without any official recommendation, relying on the book lists of several big guys and the spontaneous spread of some Longkong netizens, I am very surprised that we can achieve the current results.

Let’s answer the above questions one by one.

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[Character design is too simple]

In the words of the British writer Edward Morgan Forster, there are two ways to describe characters: "flat" and "round".

Flat characters have simple and distinct personalities, while round characters have complex and changeable personalities.

I wrote it using "round characters" because I had unrealistic expectations before writing the book and wanted to write all the characters as if they were real people.

Real characters will have more complex personalities and be closer to reality.

Of course, the price is the lack of labels. With a small number of words, these characters are not easy to leave a deep impression on people.

More words are needed to fully capture the full personality of these characters.

However, the newcomer is simply committing suicide by writing this. It makes me cry when I talk about it, so I won’t say more.

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[The settings are too complicated and some places are not reasonable enough]

Reasonability can never be 100% rigorous. I just need to avoid any flaws.

For example, some readers reported "Why do stores openly sell pistols with silencers?" "Why is the king's intelligence ability so poor?" and so on.

That's because "Dongluo has its own national conditions here."

The world in this book is a world of "general chaos and partial order".

There are many countries, wars are frequent, the science and technology tree is seriously deformed, and the extraordinary power is not systematic...

To put it bluntly, it is chaos, and anything can happen in a chaotic world.

Even in reality, Mexico sells RPGs openly, not to mention silencers. Don’t their top management know that this is dangerous?

As President of the United States, Clinton was actually assassinated. Why is the FBI's intelligence capabilities so poor?

All I can say is, "I, Lao Mi/Lao Mo, have my own national conditions here." I suggest that you don't use domestic impressions to substitute into the novel.

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【Why are they all female players】

It’s my fault that I won’t talk about the selection of materials. You can't change this. If you change it, the book will collapse.

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[Introduction is too poisonous]

I imitated the introduction of "Hidden Killer" written by Banana Da Da. The original intention was to attract some readers with more evil tastes. My fault.

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[The title of the book is too ordinary]

Admit your mistake again.

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[I’m not used to it without a system]

Material selection issue, admit your mistake*4.

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[The author is not smart enough, everyone who is smart knows to add more updates]

It's not that he's not smart enough, it's that the author can't devote more time to adding updates.

The author is not a full-time writer. Currently, he works at 775, and he cannot write more than a few thousand words every day, so he has to make up for it on weekends.

I also want to have a golden finger, for example, there are 48 hours in a day... Forget it, I am thinking about peach.

Consider changing to two updates a day, with each update containing 2,000 words?

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Final words:

Thanks to @Lazy Yinglong, @He Yuxiangtian, @Wang Yuxiuge for adding books.

Thank you for your daily recommendation votes. There are too many people to list them all.

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