To be honest, this book can make many readers like it, and it is quite fun to run it.
And in the comment area, many readers have put forward a lot of opinions.
One of the most important opinions is that the protagonist already has such a strong plug-in, why does it look so weak?
In fact, this point may be that I did not deal with this problem well.
In total, the first volume is close to 200,000 words throughout, except for the first two chapters, which introduce the system, and then basically the plot trend is basically unrelated to the system.
After all, everyone should be clear about the introduction of this book, not only basketball anime, but also tennis, road bikes, volleyball, long-distance running and so on
If you want to win national championships in different fields, even a genius that is rare in a century is basically impossible, so the introduction of the system is only to let the protagonists have strength in different fields or capital to compete with the protagonists of various sports.
In this book, the system does not play a decisive role, but serves the plot, so please do not delve into the problem of system plugins.
Of course, on the other hand, it is true that the protagonist is not so powerful.
This is just a matter of facts, maybe many readers have seen too many 'Dragon Aotian' plots, and they are invincible when they appear, but although it may look cool in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, no matter what powerful opponents come out, they are crushed to death by the protagonist like stepping on ants, is it a little too boring?
What's more, I was only in junior high school.
Taking my first volume as an example, I also found that many readers said that black and blue and slam dunk are not the same dimension at all, which I also understand.
In fact, many outrageous actions in black and blue have also been made by players in the NBA, such as full-court shooting in the green room, Qingfeng's rebounding shot and so on.
It's just that black and blue normalize this rare action in the NBA, so it will make us feel too outrageous.
But isn't that why we look cooler....
Of course, all in all, the suggestions put forward by everyone have been read seriously, and sometimes they have not had time to reply, please forgive me.
The first volume is indeed true, and there is a lot to improve or improve, which will be slowly adjusted and improved in the next few volumes.
In the second volume, our protagonist will step into the world of tennis.
The younger brother was also a little apprehensive when writing this volume, because compared to the speedy otaku or volleyball teenager who slam dunk or black and blue, or even the follow-up files, the prince of tennis is the least understood by the younger brother.
Before I finished watching most of the animation, I was attracted by the various cool moves in the Prince of Tennis in the animation, of course, the new Prince of Tennis in recent years has also been watched one after another, but the action is really more and more outrageous, I feel that if a war breaks out in the future, the army will not have to send soldiers, it is enough to send a few tennis players. .jpg So
the second volume about the Prince of Tennis, in order to be able to write well, is really making up for the manga at present, just look at the original Prince of Tennis manga, I didn't read it after U17, I saw the end from the beginning, and I have seen the Kanto Tournament so far, and I am still chasing.
And on our tomato platform, I also read a lot of popular novels with the theme of the net king, and I more or less understood how to write to be brilliant, hoping to help myself.
This time, the organizer may focus more on combining the competition with the daily life, although the competition runs throughout, but there will be daily life, I hope everyone will like it.
At the same time, because the second volume has already begun to be written, it has been confirmed that our protagonist Li Ang Sadou will join the Youth Academy.
Oh yes, the Prince of Tennis in the manga happened in junior high school, and now the demon has changed to high school, for its reasonableness, so please don't care.
You can enthusiastically suggest that at present, the office plans to write the story of "Speed Otaku " in the third volume, which team do you think you want the protagonist to join? Total North? Hakone? Still is... My favorite Kyoto Fushimi? (squinting smile.jpg)
Actually, I really want to write that the protagonist joins Kyoto Fushimi, after all, it is really rare for such a pure athlete as Midosuji, and there should be a lot of interesting things if you interact with him, but now it is also in the mind, and everyone can give opinions or suggestions....
Well, so much verbosity, it's Valentine's Day....
Happy Valentine's Day to everyone, there are lovers in the world are... Sibling?!! (Hee-hee!)
February 16th, Prince of Tennis, blue and white dreams, let's see you together!
And in the comment area, many readers have put forward a lot of opinions.
One of the most important opinions is that the protagonist already has such a strong plug-in, why does it look so weak?
In fact, this point may be that I did not deal with this problem well.
In total, the first volume is close to 200,000 words throughout, except for the first two chapters, which introduce the system, and then basically the plot trend is basically unrelated to the system.
After all, everyone should be clear about the introduction of this book, not only basketball anime, but also tennis, road bikes, volleyball, long-distance running and so on
If you want to win national championships in different fields, even a genius that is rare in a century is basically impossible, so the introduction of the system is only to let the protagonists have strength in different fields or capital to compete with the protagonists of various sports.
In this book, the system does not play a decisive role, but serves the plot, so please do not delve into the problem of system plugins.
Of course, on the other hand, it is true that the protagonist is not so powerful.
This is just a matter of facts, maybe many readers have seen too many 'Dragon Aotian' plots, and they are invincible when they appear, but although it may look cool in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, no matter what powerful opponents come out, they are crushed to death by the protagonist like stepping on ants, is it a little too boring?
What's more, I was only in junior high school.
Taking my first volume as an example, I also found that many readers said that black and blue and slam dunk are not the same dimension at all, which I also understand.
In fact, many outrageous actions in black and blue have also been made by players in the NBA, such as full-court shooting in the green room, Qingfeng's rebounding shot and so on.
It's just that black and blue normalize this rare action in the NBA, so it will make us feel too outrageous.
But isn't that why we look cooler....
Of course, all in all, the suggestions put forward by everyone have been read seriously, and sometimes they have not had time to reply, please forgive me.
The first volume is indeed true, and there is a lot to improve or improve, which will be slowly adjusted and improved in the next few volumes.
In the second volume, our protagonist will step into the world of tennis.
The younger brother was also a little apprehensive when writing this volume, because compared to the speedy otaku or volleyball teenager who slam dunk or black and blue, or even the follow-up files, the prince of tennis is the least understood by the younger brother.
Before I finished watching most of the animation, I was attracted by the various cool moves in the Prince of Tennis in the animation, of course, the new Prince of Tennis in recent years has also been watched one after another, but the action is really more and more outrageous, I feel that if a war breaks out in the future, the army will not have to send soldiers, it is enough to send a few tennis players. .jpg So
the second volume about the Prince of Tennis, in order to be able to write well, is really making up for the manga at present, just look at the original Prince of Tennis manga, I didn't read it after U17, I saw the end from the beginning, and I have seen the Kanto Tournament so far, and I am still chasing.
And on our tomato platform, I also read a lot of popular novels with the theme of the net king, and I more or less understood how to write to be brilliant, hoping to help myself.
This time, the organizer may focus more on combining the competition with the daily life, although the competition runs throughout, but there will be daily life, I hope everyone will like it.
At the same time, because the second volume has already begun to be written, it has been confirmed that our protagonist Li Ang Sadou will join the Youth Academy.
Oh yes, the Prince of Tennis in the manga happened in junior high school, and now the demon has changed to high school, for its reasonableness, so please don't care.
You can enthusiastically suggest that at present, the office plans to write the story of "Speed Otaku " in the third volume, which team do you think you want the protagonist to join? Total North? Hakone? Still is... My favorite Kyoto Fushimi? (squinting smile.jpg)
Actually, I really want to write that the protagonist joins Kyoto Fushimi, after all, it is really rare for such a pure athlete as Midosuji, and there should be a lot of interesting things if you interact with him, but now it is also in the mind, and everyone can give opinions or suggestions....
Well, so much verbosity, it's Valentine's Day....
Happy Valentine's Day to everyone, there are lovers in the world are... Sibling?!! (Hee-hee!)
February 16th, Prince of Tennis, blue and white dreams, let's see you together!
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