Consumer male god

Han Lie did not rush to add her as a friend, but opened the book "Misty Rain and Frost", which was full of mysteries from the name to the introduction to the story, and read it carefully.

At 11 o'clock, Han Lie finally finished reading all 120,000 words, and Han Lie felt confident.

Open your own account, enter the number, search, and see the interface again.

who I am?

Proud little cucumber.

Who are you?

Swap the ham for cucumbers.

What do you want from me?

Exchange...ah bah bah!

Delete it and solemnly change it to two other words: communication.

After sending the application, Han Lie turned up the volume to the maximum and went to take a shower and brush his teeth.

The lights in the Humanities Apartment Building are turned off at 11:30 p.m., with the exception of sleeping rooms.

But now everyone has a smartphone, and even if the power is cut off, there is no need to delay chatting on QQ - at the end of the 3G era, apart from chatting on QQ and reading novels, there is really no other entertainment.

Therefore, Han Lie estimated that Xi Luting was still very likely to log into the trumpet today.

At almost 11:30, Han Lie was about to go to bed when a coughing sound suddenly came from the laptop speaker.

Yoxi, I applied as a friend!

Brother Lie jumped up, jumped out of bed, and sat in front of the table.

[A piece of loneliness has passed your friend request]

A hint of loneliness: "Hello. Thank you for your support."

A very reserved and quiet opening statement.

This is not possible...

Han Lie decisively sent out a sand sculpture, which aroused enthusiasm.

(Kowtow to the boss)

Ham for cucumber: "Why are you a eunuch! (Crying) (Crying)"

Ham for cucumber: "I really like your writing..."

Ham for Cucumber: "Do you have any plans to write a new book?"

…

In dormitory 2333, Xi Luting was lying on the bed, leaning sideways, legs curled up, and looking at the QQ interface of his phone anxiously.

Her book makes too many beginner mistakes.

How self-righteous I was before I started writing, and how disappointed and embarrassed I was after the results came out.

100 collections in one and a half months, three bomb rewards, more than 20 snake oil reviews...

There may only be a few people who really like this book.

And there is no one who is willing to communicate with her as the author.

Therefore, it was her first time to add a reader’s QQ account and chat with the reader.

She was looking forward to it so much.

But the problem is that the reader opposite is the only "tycoon" who gives a large reward. She attaches great importance to it, but she doesn't know what kind of attitude she should use to deal with it.

Therefore, worrying about gains and losses is very serious.

However, when the other person sent three warm greetings without stopping, her heart was shocked, trembling, and numb, as if being penetrated by electricity.

look! That's my fan!

Finally, someone recognized my artistic expression in the vast sea of ​​books!

I am not a poor little person that no one understands!

Xi Luting was extremely excited. A sense of relief and surprise that Boya finally met her son came to her heart, making her let go of her coldness and defensiveness in an instant.

A hint of loneliness: "Hahaha! Thank you for your like!"

A twinge of loneliness: "It's not that I want to be a eunuch, it's just that the data is so bad, it really hits my mentality, and I really can't write anymore. (Woo-woo)"

A hint of loneliness: "I even suspect that I may not be suitable for writing novels. Apart from words, I am really in a mess."

A piece of loneliness: "(crying) (crying) (crying)"

…

When talking to girls, the most important thing is to know what they want to hear.

Many licking dogs think that all they need is a mindless boast, but they are totally wrong!

Every beautiful woman has heard countless compliments from childhood to adulthood. Boredom, boredom, and indifference are the norm.

This involves another "qualification" issue.

It means, do you have enough weight to praise others directly?

For example, Zhang Yimou said casually: "Girl, you are so beautiful and have a good temperament."

Ouch, what an honor!

But a boy who was just a passerby praised him as soon as he came up to her: "Beauty, you are so beautiful!"

That's called frivolity.

Han Lie's 100-yuan reward initially solved the qualification problem and allowed her to praise her writing skills without causing resentment.

However, the following chat cannot continue on the old path of mindless praise.

The portion is still not enough, and exaggerating too much seems false.

And we can’t even get to the root of it.

So Han Lie carefully analyzed Xi Luting's mentality, roughly determined what she wanted to hear most, and then carefully started to pull.

Ham for cucumber: "Huh? Your current condition is very good!"

Ham for Cucumber: "To be honest, the plot setting of "Small Rain and Frost" is really problematic."

Swapping ham for cucumber: "And the technique is too immature."

Ham for cucumber: "However, now that you have calmed down and can face your shortcomings, you will definitely make rapid progress!"

Ham for Cucumber: "As an online article writer, except for a few top-notch talented monsters, the rest of the great masters and minor masters have been trained little by little. Your later style will be very good!"

Seeing those two criticisms, Xi Luting felt a little uncomfortable.

But when I saw the two words of encouragement at the end, I felt very warm.

Therefore, I easily accepted the other party's qualification to comment.

Um!

My Tie Tie is right, if you want to succeed, you must face your weaknesses!

With an unprecedented humility, she asked the only reader for advice: "Can you tell me specifically about my problem? Also, how can I correct it?"

This question is too big a question, and it sounds like seeking medical treatment indiscriminately.

Han Lie smiled as soon as he saw it.

If any fan can analyze this kind of problem to the point, then why do we need professionals?

But, you're lucky, I'm really an expert...

More than ten years of super high reading + level 3 literary knowledge + level 3 writing skills = a little god who can write and teach.

It's even a bit overkill to give guidance to a pure novice.

In order to enhance his authority in Xi Luting's heart, Han Lie was full of firepower as soon as he came up.

Swapping ham for cucumbers: “Say it in advance, the following are all personal feelings.

I think your biggest problem may not be clichés such as plot, character design, and rhythm, but that your common sense and social experience are not able to support such a story.

To put it simply, it is a typical accumulation that cannot keep up with ambition.

The story you want to tell is too big, magnificent, magnificent and dreamy, it is the perfection in your imagination.

But if you can't fill in the appropriate details, it will look very vain.

I often feel "struggled" when reading.

Your writing is more than adequate, and in some places it can even be called spiritual.

But putting aside the details and looking at the overall situation, the phenomenon of a small horse pulling a large cart is very prominent, and it is obviously difficult to control it.

Then there will be dispersion and chaos.

Coupled with your unconstrained spirituality, the result of wanton writing will inevitably lead to more prominent structural problems, and the reading threshold is so high that it far exceeds the level of online articles...

Therefore, your writing is not bad, it will become good only when you meet people who understand it.

I might even wonder, are you underage or just an adult?

It is difficult for someone who is too old to maintain your writing style that may seem cold at first glance, but is actually delicate and innocent..."

wow~⊙o⊙!

Xi Luting's eyes widened and he gripped the phone hard, his whole body trembling slightly with excitement.

This is not Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi!

But Nalan Rongruo met Gu Zhenguan!

I am Zhenguan, and you are my Rongruo!

How can it be so accurate? !

Xi Luting suddenly felt a kind of ecstasy, and he was very excited. His brain was filled with a certain emotion, and dopamine was secreted crazily, which was pleasant but sluggish.

So, she finally replied with only seven words——

"How to change it? I listen to you!!!"

There are three exclamation points in total, which is called a firm determination without hesitation.

Goose Goose Goose Goose Goose Goose……

Han Lie was lying on the desk, laughing so hard that his liver ached, his stomach ached, his intestines knotted, and he almost burst into tears.

Little cucumber, just listen to my brother!

Will I harm you?

It cannot be specified!

Next, let us get along happily!