Create a sandbox world

The end of November, this month's update is still pulling crotch (it seems to have not risen), a total of nearly 200,000 words updated, the average daily change of six thousand six ...... than last month slightly higher.

In terms of plot, three copies were written, corresponding to three worlds, the Earth line was opened to all people to cultivate martial arts, and a few chapters at the end of the month will shake out the setting of the spirit world, by the way, far peeped under the empire, the prayer candle this item re-enabled.

Last month's summary, I said that this month to start to solve the problem of "break a throw a", now look back, basically achieved this goal, in fact, so to speak, most of the plot of November, is to serve this core purpose.

Through the copy, the second, third, fourth, several worlds of time stopped, no longer jump, like three cars parallel to each other slowly braked ...... in order to achieve this purpose, at the expense of reading coherence, but only so, in order to have a drop in the subsequent plot, the front of the stable, in order to have room to open a new one.

And as a price, it is a continuous change of map resulting in a sense of reading cut.

And, due to the short length of the copy, each other's style is very different, but also this sense of fragmentation is magnified, specifically in the three copies, the moon sea continent plot structure is the most complete, but made several mistakes.

The first is to change the identity of the "mountain and the sea" led to a sense of immersion decline. Initially set the "reborn" ability, there are two purposes, one is to follow the empire line may need, the other, or to solve the problem of cutting into the new world of raw ...... try a new method of entry, now look back, some of the gains are not worth the losses.

Second, is not tense the plot. The sinking effect is not obvious enough to lay in front, it looks loose, especially the celebration plot gives the impression of deviation from the main line ...... but in fact, the purpose of writing the celebration plot, or in order to give the world of the moon tribe in the length of ten chapters to portray as much as possible.

Stop the world, not simply stop accelerating on the line, but to write a clear form of different worlds, to improve recognition, so that people's brains have a more certain prototype of the interior of the sandbox, and then focus on writing a few characters ...... connected with the protagonist, and all this to be completed within ten chapters, you need an event to bring ...... write a reference to the way of writing farming text, want to highlight the sense of cool, but the different topics grafted instead seems inappropriate, this problem is the second time to commit, to focus on attention.

The third, or the old problem of changing the map, the strange environment after entering the moon sea continent, the only memory point of the moon tree did not pull up the sense of anticipation, resulting in a decline in experience.

Referring to the above several problems, I tried to modify the South Continent copy ...... originally, Ningli this episode is arranged for the red dust adventure, belong to the temporary change, resulting in the problem is that some settings seem a little raw, such as the identity of Lin Tuo psychological teacher, such as the flower stream to school... ...Oh yes, the plot of the sky meteor shower was also this piece, but because of changes, put on the back end.

But this paragraph does a better point is to learn a lesson.

By bringing Flower Creek, Hathaway into the copy, reduce the cut-off feeling of changing maps, through the "daily" short film update, strengthen the connection with the Earth ...... and the presence of a single-eyed giant, but also so that the plot can be tensed up ...... is considered a comprehensive reflection on the moon sea copy.

In addition, here, I also finally determined the approach to cut to the new scene ...... After trying four different methods, I reluctantly found that the most appropriate may be the fifth: hard cut ...... (sigh)

In short, introspection still has a little effect.

So wait until the Tian Yuan continent, the red dust adventure copy, the protagonist again took the flower Xi into, but this copy because there is no enemy, so the plot can not be taut ...... I also can not frequently arrange the spirit world invasion, that will again lead to reading fatigue, so after thinking about it, I decided to use "interesting "to dilute the slack in the plot.

And based on the interesting plot from the interesting characters this my personal point of view, so the Tian Yuan copy focus on the characters.

I wondered if I could write a little more interesting.

And then there was the premature death, and Pei Ming's dog-licking scene ...... even though I'm not good at writing characters, but I thought I'd try my best to write about it.

But the data feedback is not good, according to the background data trend, I judge that the main problem or frequent map changes caused by.

You know, I had intended to write a longer copy of the adventure, about twenty chapters in length, after all, the best way to solve the change of map is not to change ......

But there is no way, eventually chose to cut off half of the plot, in fact, there was a sentence in front of the ambush, the second half of the plot is to write "ask the General Assembly".

The result was cut, which led to a lack of explosive power at the end of the Tian Yuan copy.

Like the moon sea copy, there is a climax at the end, the southern continent copy of the defeat of the spirit world lord is also the climax, but the climax of this piece of the Tian Yuan continent was originally intended to be in the "Taoist Conference", so did not burst up.

As for the rest of the plot, because of the small amount of space, there is really not much to say, the only idea is to try to avoid this in the future, the good thing is that next month should not have.

Three sandboxes are successfully stopped, finally fucking do not have to run back and forth to the map ...... next month, that is, December tentative plot is the fifth sandbox will open, and then the role of the Earth will gradually increase, the Empire appeared or not to see the specific situation to adjust ...... in addition is The first thing that I want to do is to gradually open up several worlds to each other, and I hope that I will be able to finish the twentieth year smoothly.

That's it, I'm going to cook some noodles, good night everyone.