Doomsday Jigsaw Game
: :About story follow-up and positioning
I have always followed your chapter reviews. The story is written here, less than 200,000 words, in fact, compared with the whole book, it is still not out of the novice village.
The blue area is regarded as the warm-up area, and the purple and red areas are the areas that run through the entire story, but it is still too early.
Looking at it, the three biggest problems in the comments and feedback are that the combat effectiveness is difficult to reflect, the protagonist keeps talking, and the story is suspicious. I will also explain to you.
Because of serialization, many things can't be written all at once, so the plot is not coherent.
Regarding the combat power system, because the current protagonist is weak, and the teammates in the same period (59 or 9) are too strong, it is difficult to say how big a scene is to describe, basically in seconds, after all, the book only has dozens of chapters.
What I can tell you is that although it is an apocalyptic expedition, the combat part of this book is not too small, so wait patiently, the high-energy chapter has not come yet~ The starting point book is different from other books, at least I personally This is the case. Readers who have read my previous book know that this author's book is not the kind of early-stage and boring late-stage book.
is the protagonist's mouth escape-in fact, it is mouth escape, the main thing is to collect information and use methods other than force to win. This is definitely more difficult to write than fighting, but I had to do it early. Believe me, I'm a reckless man. If the fighting strength becomes stronger, I am definitely more willing to write stories about physical persuasion.
In the end, it is the positioning of the story. It is not a suspenseful text or a supernatural text. This is a post-apocalyptic text. There are many areas outside the tower. As far as Cain is concerned, it is just an early boss. Some copies do have some suspenseful aura, but foretell it in advance, not suspenseful text~
Finally, there may be a single chapter on Sunday, writing a book. This year is four years, and I finally made it to Sanjiang. On Sunday, I changed the list and went up. I still have to write a testimonial from Sanjiang, and at the same time py the previous chapter. The authors of this book.
So I'll talk about the rest on Sunday.
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