Eighth Crown
Chapter 999: .Review at the end of the volume (10)
Hello everyone, I am like sunshine.
This is the testimonial at the end of the tenth volume. I wonder how you feel about the writing of this volume?
Personally, I think it should be above the pass line. The distribution of scenes and the development of the plot are relatively average. There is no special bug, but it should not be written very well.
And I don't know if it's because I've been reading Phoenix's book recently, that this volume is a bit sandy, especially in the description of Emiya Shirou and Tohsaka Rin's behavior. It may be infected by the sand sculpture virus.
In this volume, the suggestions of some book friends are also very reasonable.
With Liu Xia's strength getting stronger and stronger, the means more and more abundant, the current enemy basically can't keep up with Liu Xia's footsteps, every time it appears is the ending of being crushed, resulting in more and more dull.
This is unavoidable, and any book will be like this in the middle and late stages, unless it is written in a sandy way to divert attention.
I will improve the shortcomings of this aspect in the next book, but there is obviously no way for this book. After all, the follow-up plot has been completely decided. Even the finale has several versions in my mind. Choose to add some advanced copies, such as One Punch Man and more.
This concludes the summary of this volume, and here is the information about the new volume.
Volume 11, FGO (2), enters the Lostbelt chapter!
Please (don't) look forward to it!
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