Girl, there's something wrong with you
End of volume remarks
This volume completes the first climax, that is, our protagonist finally drives the Gundam, masters Susanoo, and becomes Tsukoku Tokio (Tokio's weakest form).
However, many readers have reported that the pace of upgrading is still too slow.
Looking back at the chapters again, I found that if I read them in one go, there would be basically no rhythm problems; but if I read them again, I might feel that I have made little progress.
To put it bluntly, I divided it into three chapters with the focus on "showing off my power after upgrading", and the feedback from readers was very happy; I divided it into three chapters with the focus on "preparing and accumulating power before upgrading", and each chapter received feedback from readers: "Ah. Ahhhhh why haven’t you upgraded yet?”
In other words, these readers still feel that there are too few small climaxes before the big climax, and they are tired of chasing them.
Regarding this, I thought of a wonderful way to write it. I can't write it here at the end of the volume, so I won't go into details.
I wonder if it can be applied to the outline later in this book.
If not, use it on the next book.
Regarding the battle rhythm, many readers expressed their opinions; regarding daily interactions, everyone was more satisfied than the former. At most, they felt that there were too few scenes with Lili, Princess, Azhi, and Qingqing.
Cui Xiaoniang is really not my biological daughter. Among girls, Cui Xiaoniang’s character is like a catfish in a large group of sardines. It’s normal for her to be a little conspicuous.
Lively atmosphere (Qingqing, look at this!)
In addition, someone told me that the three phantom gods are Miss Wang, Her Highness the Princess, and Lili. This is the first time I have heard of this.
However, Miss Wang is so scheming that no one can offend her, Princess Sister is so powerful that no one can beat her, and the rational demon can do whatever she wants and no one can compare to her. These three girls are indeed not on the same level as the other girls.
Therefore, once the three phantom gods join the Shura field, the other girls will have nothing to play with. The difference in strength is too big, and there is really no suspense in the fight.
As we all know, if there is a fantasy god, there is a cornerstone.
If the Phantom God is too powerful to join the Shura Field, just standing outside the field can create intimidation and expectations; then the cornerstone is the main character of each Shura Field. Everyone will feel at ease as soon as he appears in any chapter - there must be good ones. Watched the show.
So who are the next three cornerstones? Of course it's ______, ______ and ______, did you guess it right?
In the next chapter, "Physical Activation", new members will be added to the card pool, so stay tuned.
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