Help all mankind

Self-summation, the first volume has many shortcomings, mainly in the rhythm.

The main reason is that the technology involved in the later plot has done too much science, and has done too much for the background of the story. This problem will not be repeated later.

If I write a lot of daily routine like ordinary works, I can also achieve a smooth story.

But I tried very hard to hope that every story is different, and I omitted a lot of the process of writing that is plain. So I could write a story with many chapters, but I will think of a brain hole, and then take a few chapters, and then Suddenly, the next technical point was taken, which seemed to be lacking in plot.

The only thing I can assure you is that I will bring an extraordinary story, and I have done so much before.

Well, the settings that need to be introduced have been introduced, the things that should be introduced have already appeared, and the plot will be temporarily opened next.

Next, enter the military chapter which is full of smooth plot.