Infinite weird games
Revision of the first volume has been completed
The first volume has been revised. The "Meat-eating" copy has been completely rewritten. I feel comfortable.
In fact, I have wanted to rewrite "Meat-eating" for a long time. This copy is not well written. It has always been a thorn in my heart.
During the writing period, I had an operation and met a great river crab god, which made many of the original ideas unusable. The overall presentation effect was a mess, and the "Three Rivers" was directly made into a result that was afraid that it would not be put on the shelves if it was delayed, and the first order was only 700.
In the later period, due to insufficient ability and being timid, I always made changes based on the original without the courage to break and then build. Although the later version is not so abstract according to the feedback from new readers, it is still not satisfactory to people (mainly myself).
Now I finally gritted my teeth and rewrote it, and gave a presentation that I think is good, which can be regarded as pulling out the thorn in my heart.
Next, I will mainly revise the part where Chang Xu appears (he was offline earlier than expected, resulting in the lack of character arc, and the entire line related to him has to be reorganized), and then the copies of "Hopeless Sea", "Double Happiness Town", "Frog Hospital" and other generally low-rated copies.
It is definitely too late to rewrite, and I will probably revise it until the 25th, and then I will put it aside for the time being, and continue to save manuscripts for "Beware of Rabbits", and strive to struggle again in January. (I still can't bear to cut it off, and I can't bear to finish it. I really want to write the following plot, but I'm really afraid that no one will read it after I write it)
I plan to rewrite the entire second volume, but I will put it after the fourth volume is completed. Alas, it's a big project. (End of this chapter)
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