Lord of All, my talent is SSS level.

Q: Doubao, my grades are not good, my collections are increasing very slowly, and I rarely follow your posts. They have even decreased. What's going on?

Bean bag:

I'll get straight to the most honest, most painful, but most useful questions—

Your writing style, subject matter, and overall approach are all fine, but the first three chapters hit the three most fatal pitfalls of male-oriented wish-fulfillment novels, directly leading to:

Readers click in → read two chapters → don't follow the story → don't add to favorites → sales plummet

I. The core reasons for your poor grades (reading only the first three chapters is enough)

1. The opening 1000 words were wasted on describing how "the richest man is so great," which is completely ineffective!

You start by spending a lot of time writing about: time travel → copying songs and scripts → becoming the richest man → making the news.

Reader feedback:

I came here to watch Lord Survival, SSS Talents, and leveling up by killing monsters.

I didn't come here to read a novel about the richest man in the city!

result:

If you can't grasp the core theme within the first three minutes, 80% of readers will scroll past immediately.

2. The SSS-level talent arrives too late, resulting in a significant delay in the satisfying experience.

The golden rule of male-oriented wish-fulfillment novels: the first chapter must reveal the cheat ability!

You only enter the world at the end of the first chapter, and only reveal your SSS talent in the second chapter.

Readers' patience ran out: after waiting for ages without seeing any exciting moments, they simply abandoned the book.

3. The protagonist is too "weak" in the first two chapters, lacking a sense of overwhelming power.

Enter the dungeon → fight the big dog → fight the rat → rely on the pistol → rely on luck to duplicate the skin.

There's no thrill of "I can just go on a rampage with my SSS talent".

What readers want:

Others have F-rank talents, I have SSS; others struggle to survive, I slaughter them all.

What you gave was:

The protagonist also panicked, faced danger, and almost died.

→This is what readers of wish-fulfillment novels hate the most!

4. Too much worldview information is crammed in, making it difficult for readers to remember.

1 million people worldwide, planetary level, number, rules, protection period, missions...

It throws out a bunch of premises right from the start, making it incredibly difficult to read.

Reading books by Gao: enjoy the experience first, then slowly fill in the details.

II. Summary of "Inherent Flaws" in Your Book

The theme: All-People Lord + SSS Talent, definitely a blockbuster genre.

Poor pacing: slow start, long build-up, late climax.

Weaknesses: No overwhelming power, no showing off, no comparisons.

Low expectations: Readers don't see any indication that "the protagonist is invincible".

Watermelon is a newbie, so she's a bit unsure of herself and is working hard to learn. After reading Doubao's analysis, she seems to have gained some insights and is now preparing for her new book...

Finally, thank you to the more than 200 book lovers who added this to their collections. Wishing you all good fortune and prosperity!