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Chapter 189 A Failed Performance
Perhaps it was the slightly melodramatic plot that left the audience momentarily stunned.
The rest of the story proceeded without any major surprises. The hero defeated the demon king and rescued the princess from her so-called "biological father." In the end, the two stood hand in hand in front of a castle made of cardboard.
With the narration, "And they lived happily ever after," the first performance officially came to an end.
Thank you everyone!
The student in charge of hosting the event stood up and bowed.
The classroom responded with applause, though not particularly enthusiastic, but at least there was no awkward silence as everyone left after the performance.
"Ha...it's over, what a fantastic performance!"
Lin Zhou and Bai Wanwan bowed along with the other actors. He secretly glanced at the audience below. He originally thought the first show should have ended smoothly, but he soon noticed that many people had started to scan the QR code for feedback posted at the entrance with their mobile phones.
This QR code was added temporarily.
[We welcome your feedback on the 3A class's play. Ten lucky audience members will be randomly selected to receive a school anniversary souvenir.]
have to say.
Prize-winning questionnaires are truly unbeatable.
Normally, when teachers hand out questionnaires, they practically beg everyone to fill them out. But now, with a lottery announcement on the form, Lin Zhou even saw people who had just passed by and hadn't seen the performance scanning the forms.
"It's over." Lin Zhou breathed a sigh of relief and looked down at Bai Wanwan beside him.
"How are you? Are you feeling alright?"
Bai Wanwan was still holding Lin Zhou's hand. She glanced down at it, as if she had just noticed, but showed no intention of letting go.
"good."
"I think my acting skills are pretty good."
"Um."
"Especially when facing the Demon King."
"childish."
"That's art!"
Bai Wanwan fell silent.
However, she was actually quite satisfied.
The script doesn't matter, and the acting doesn't matter either. The most important thing is that the hero will come to find the princess in the end, and then the two of them will go home together.
That's a good point.
The suggestion is never to change it.
……
After the audience left, the students quickly regrouped.
The end of the first show doesn't mean everything is over. According to the original plan, they were to perform at least three shows a day, and the entire school anniversary celebration would last for seven days. If the feedback from the first day wasn't good, they could certainly continue to make changes.
"Let me take a look at the questionnaire."
The student in charge of the survey sat at the front with a tablet, and others gradually gathered around.
Lin Zhou was initially quite looking forward to it.
After all, there was a lot of laughter just now, and everyone applauded at the end, so it can't be that bad, right?
"There are 127 copies so far," a student said. "The average grade is... 6.1."
"Out of ten?"
"right."
The classroom fell silent.
6.1.
Lin Zhou's back bent low. "No!!!!! This is just bottom-tier level?!"
"Don't rush, it's just the first round." A classmate patted him on the shoulder. "Besides, isn't six points a passing grade?"
"Would you consider yourself to have passed if you got a score of 60 on the college entrance exam?"
"meeting."
"..."
Ok.
Makes sense.
"Let's see the feedback first." The student in charge of the script remained relatively calm. "This is our first official performance, so it's normal to have problems. We still have six days left, which is more than enough time to revise it."
Click to view detailed feedback.
The princess is very beautiful, five stars.
Bai Wanwan is pretty, the others are just average.
[The hero's bangs are too long, you can't see his face at all, minus one point.]
Ugly guy, points deducted.
[This guy, nicknamed "Mushroom Guy," got the role because he brought his own funding, which is ruining my chance to see my goddess Bai Wanwan!]
[It's practically a large, light meal; you could eat it to your heart's content no matter which word you remove.]
"..."
Upon seeing these comments, the girl in charge of props immediately sat up straight.
Look!
It's not just me who wants to watch this! Although I commented a few times, the vast majority of viewers think the same way!!!
"Keep going, keep going," Lin Zhou urged quickly.
The stage was too small, and it felt crowded with many actors, especially when the hero was fighting the demon king; it felt like they could walk across the stage in just two steps.
The props are too childish; the castle looks like a kindergarten craft project. However, it's understandable that the students made it like this themselves.
[The plot is so clichéd. The hero rescuing the princess story has been around for decades. If you're going to be melodramatic, go for it! Now the demon king claims to be the princess's father, but there's no explanation for it later.]
[Yeah, I thought there would be some kind of ethical battle later on, but it turned out to be just one line of dialogue?]
The Demon King is the princess's father, and the King is the Demon King's wife, so what exactly is the hero doing? Kidnapping his father-in-law's daughter? Let's delve into the details.
"..."
The student in charge of the script started sweating and noticed the stares around him. "Why are you all looking at me?"
"You wrote it," Lin Zhou said.
"I didn't write that line about the Demon King!"
"Who is that?"
Everyone looked at the boy playing the Demon King.
The other person silently raised their hand, "Improvisation."
"You improvised a line that really raised everyone's expectations." Lin Zhou patted him on the shoulder. "A talent."
"What should we do then?"
"add!"
"Add what?"
"So melodramatic!"
Lin Zhou slammed his hand on the table. "Since the audience wants to see melodrama, then we'll give them some. The Demon King is not only the princess's biological father, but the best hero is also the Demon King's long-lost son."
"Then the princess and the hero will be..."
"Then let's change it," Lin Zhou quickly said. "The Demon King is the adoptive father, and the princess was actually adopted. The hero and the princess were childhood sweethearts, but they were separated for many years due to a coup in the kingdom. The Demon King deliberately acted as a bad guy to protect the princess."
The student in charge of the script was stunned for a few seconds.
"Wait a minute."
He took out a pen.
"I'll make a note of it."
"..."
No.
Are you really writing it?
Actually, aside from the plot, the most prominent issue is the location.
The classroom for Class 3A wasn't particularly small to begin with, but after cramming in dozens of audience members, the space available for the actors was extremely limited. Many fight scenes simply couldn't be performed, and even if the cardboard cutout of the Demon King's Castle was placed a little wider, it would block the audience's view.
"There's no way to solve this, is there?" someone said. "We can't just smash down the wall."
"Can I request a change of classroom?"
"Other large classrooms also have activities, but even if they are larger, the activities are limited."
"stage……"
Someone mentioned it.
"It would be great if there was a proper stage."
Upon hearing this, Lin Zhou subconsciously thought of the academy auditorium and the playground stage.
With such a large-scale celebration for the 90th anniversary of Yinshan College, the college naturally had a formal auditorium stage. Although it wasn't the largest location, it was still one of the highest-standard venues in the entire school. However, it was usually used for opening ceremonies, orchestras, song and dance performances, and large-scale club activities.
Their kind of class drama...
Lin Zhou felt that if he applied in the past, he would most likely be rejected.
"Why don't you go ask the chairman, Lin Zhou?" someone suddenly said.
Lin Zhou: "?"
"Aren't you very close to Chairman Gu?"
"It's familiar, but not really..."
"Asking won't kill you. Lin Zhou, I'm counting on you. You're my only connection in the student council."
"Yeah, maybe he'll have some free time." Everyone's gaze gradually fell on Lin Zhou.
Lin Zhou suddenly felt like he was being pushed into selling himself.
"Okay... I'll ask." Lin Zhou had no choice but to give it a try.
It's highly unlikely to work.
……
Student Union Office.
Gu Yuning was checking the situation in each area this morning. The walkie-talkie on the table had been ringing non-stop since the beginning of the morning. Sometimes it was a merchant registration on the east side, sometimes it was a visitor guidance at the school gate, and a few classes reported that the equipment was malfunctioning.
She was clearly taken aback when she saw Lin Zhou come in.
"Why are you here?"
"I miss you," Lin Zhou said.
"..." Gu Yuning was taken aback. "You..."
Lin Zhou quickly added, "I also need your help with something."
"..."
It turns out it was just a coincidence.
Gu Yuning felt inexplicably disappointed.
But he quickly reverted to his leader mode, asking, "What's up?"
Lin Zhou recounted the events of the first performance, especially the issue of the venue being too small, and then scratched his head somewhat embarrassedly at the end.
"So we were thinking, is there a slightly larger place we can use temporarily? If not, that's okay, we'll figure something out ourselves."
After listening, Gu Yuning did not answer immediately, but instead opened her computer to check today's venue arrangements. "I will arrange it for you."
"Um?"
"What's wrong?"
"No, no, I just think, is it really that easy to solve? I thought you would reject me." Lin Zhou scratched his head.
Upon hearing this, Gu Yuning paused for a few seconds, her eyes suddenly showing a hint of barely perceptible doting.
How could I possibly refuse you?
I... have been waiting for you to come and rely on me.
fool.
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