Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant

I've been sorting out new plots and settings all day today, so I'm sorry that the update is a bit late and only has 4,000 words.

Then let’s report the situation first.

At the beginning of last month, the average order for this book was almost 2,000, and now it is more than 2,600. I have calmed down and will try my best to continue writing the first book.

Then let’s talk about the shortcomings in this volume.

The disadvantages are many:

1. Since the previous volume did not set up enough expectations, foreshadowing, and related characters, when the new volume opens, it looks like a completely different story, with a serious sense of fragmentation;

2. The leisurely feeling that I originally wanted to write could not be expressed. Instead, due to the rush of manuscripts, the pace of this volume was a bit rushed. It did not have the feeling of relief that I wanted to create, and it did not match the title of the volume;

3. I am not very satisfied with the final climax. What I want is the ultimate explosion after extreme suppression, but the suppressed emotions in the previous foreshadowing stage are too little, resulting in the final explosion without that kind of smoothness. dripping feeling;

4. My writing method is to set up the final climax first, and then reverse the previous plot. I think there is no problem with this method. The problem is that when I reverse the plot, I ignore some logical things and it is a bit rough. As a result, the plot of this volume is awkward in some places. For example, the chapter about Zhang Daobai in Chapter 29 could have been handled better, but it turned into a poisonous point.

5. To summarize, I have tried my best in this paper, but in my opinion, the effect is probably below the pass mark.

Advantages: It’s up to everyone to discover this.

As of now, this book has just reached the first million words in my life.

By the way, let’s also conduct a stage summary.

From the beginning, I wanted to write a story that was first depressing and then comfortable. During the writing process, except for the extremely painful part when it was about to be published, at other times, I still felt that it was very smooth.

However, when I read everyone's comments, I vaguely felt that my writing was a little too true.

Readers find some poisonous points poisonous, but I don't think they are poisonous. This is because I really put myself into a real person. Such a person will make mistakes, be impulsive, and have problems. Long life and so on.

But in online articles, this is undoubtedly a clear poisonous point.

Coupled with the fact that I didn't handle it tactfully enough, many readers didn't stick around until the end.

It’s not the readers’ fault, it’s my own fault.

What needs to be changed is to write in a way that is completely self-centered, avoid poisonous points, and respect the objective situation.

Of course, I will make some attempts later in this book, which may be better or worse, but no matter what, I will try my best to make it better.

Then, regarding updates, I can only say that I tried my best.

Last month, 230,000 words were written, which should not be too little...

Also, some people who read a lot of paragraphs and then come over to scold them, well, please keep your words in mind.

Finally, I would like to thank all the readers who have persisted until now. Your positive comments allow me to write happily every day, instead of being as sad as I am.

Thanks for having you! (End of chapter)