Master the Abyss, starting from an apprentice priest
Opinion collection chapter (check it out!)
Send me a single chapter to ask about the arrangements for the player plot.
The previous three chapters are all from the player's perspective (total 2,000 words), and they should be the most player-length chapters ever written. Because some readers have said that players have no plot, so I conceived this short paragraph ()
But the data feedback seems to be average, and so is the review feedback. There will be no more pure player-oriented plots with more words than this in the future, but I still ask.
Is a coherent, non-protagonist-perspective, pure player plot like the first 3.5 chapters too redundant from a reader’s perspective, or is it acceptable? I'm looking for more opinions so that I can revise the outline direction in a timely manner.
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