My liver skills in the military camp

Let’s talk about updates first.

In the next few days, 13,000 words were updated every day, and then it returned to 10,000 words every day.

As for the plot after the military academy chapter, the foreshadowing in the article is already obvious, so everyone can look forward to it.

As for the emotional drama, let me tell you about it.

Some brothers asked if they could not write emotional dramas, but the author couldn't let Ye Fei die alone, right?

The emotional drama is not well written and cannot be liked by all the brothers. This is the author's problem.

First of all, let’s make it clear that this book is about a single female protagonist, and the heroine is one of the two female characters who appears in the military academy chapter. Who won’t spoil it first?

But both of them have big plots to follow, such as today's Sandhurst competition plot. In the original outline, Qin Wanru was to compete together as the only female player in the team.

Now everyone has seen that the author has changed the outline.

Some brothers expressed that they hated Qin Wanru, the female supporting character, which is normal, because Ye Fei, who had just arrived at the military academy, also disliked her very much, and it was mentioned in the plot.

It may be due to the author's writing skills. Going too far is not enough, including Qin Wanru's transformation. Some brothers felt it was awkward and stiff.

The original arrangement in the outline was to use the previous events as a foreshadowing, so that the guilty Qin Wanru could apologize by cooking for Ye Fei. This plot was originally going to be interspersed with the life of the first semester, because Based on everyone's feedback, the author has changed it.

But the author really can't change the big plot that follows Qin Wanru.

It’s not that I’m unwilling, it’s that I can’t think of a more reasonable arrangement.

For example, Qin Wanru cooked for Ye Fei. If I directly wrote that Qin Wanru, who was behind the generals, was attracted to Ye Fei and pursued her to cook for Ye Fei, some brothers would definitely find it awkward.

It's a little more reasonable to use it as an apology.

Originally, I wanted to portray Qin Wanru as a charming, straightforward, quirky character, but some brothers didn't like it. I once again apologize to everyone because of the author's writing skills.