My seven demon sisters

(First of all, I'm sorry for being so short, I'm also trying my best to code words, but because of work, it's really time-crunching, and one day is the limit at present.)

Before I knew it, I wrote 50W words, and I was halfway to the small goal of 100W! Thank you for seeing this!

At the end of the first volume, I said that this volume is about the eighth sister... But it was actually written... I feel like it's too sudden...

And sometimes new ideas pop up as you write... So I decided to postpone it a little longer... The more

I write, the worse I feel... Whether it's the plot arrangement or the shaping of the characters, I think it's much worse... That's why I dissuaded most of the people...

I often think that I'm really not the material to write novels, and that being said, but I still feel a little uncomfortable after actually seeing some bad reviews... (Of course, I'm referring to the brainless bad reviews that don't point out the problem.)

But even so, I don't want to give up, after all, my original intention was just to present a story that I had been thinking about for a long time.

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I saw a lot of people saying that the male protagonist was too wasteful, and there was indecision, and even the male protagonist was too virgin.

I won't say anything negative about this, after all, everyone's values are different, so the perspective of the protagonist's behavior is also different.

I know you should prefer the kind of protagonist who is invincible all the way, but for me, a male protagonist like Cangyun is more to my liking, not perfect, not invincible, has his own flaws, and will not make ghosts in his heart, not blindly arrogant. (If you really want to say it, all the plots of Aotian are given to the eighth sister...

(If you have any ideas, you can also let me know, and I will actively refer to the improvement.) Again, if there is any problem or big poison, you can reflect it at any time.

Another point is about the writing style, and some people have reported that I write too "seriously", such as not playing with memes or stuff.

Personally, I really don't like nonsensical style... For example, what kind of little sunspot, or take out some characters from real games as a comparison... In general, I just don't like novels that "have too much taste of reality".

Regarding the plot, as a book friend said, the entire protagonist group of the second volume is basically deflated.

I admit it... This is true from the current point of view... It's because I don't have a good grasp of it...

According to the setting, in fact, the protagonist group is considered to be the top combat power, but their opponents, Eighth Sister and No. 379, are too outrageous.

Speaking of which, it is clear that the plot of the masked man and the eighth sister has not yet unfolded, and suddenly ran out of No. 379, presumably you must be a little confused...

Of course, we will expand on them one by one, so I hope you don't rush.

Then there's the setting of "time and space" and "world line".

Theoretically, there could be an infinite number of worlds here.

But after all, it's an alternate novel.,In order not to make it too complicated, you must tighten it a little.,Otherwise, the world is really messed up....

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After that, I will try to read as many good works as possible to improve my writing skills, and I hope you can support me a lot.