Ninja School Teacher, I Can Become Stronger By Teaching

Final comments

At this point, the main line is over.

The original idea was to write about Naruto and the others growing up, but after thinking about it carefully, I felt that there was too little content to write.

In the end, it is decided to write the rest as extra after finishing Otsutsuki, so that it will be easier to write better.

Here, Xiaoju says something in her heart.

First of all, I would like to thank readers who have been following and subscribed.

Because the early grades of this book were really bad, Xiaoju almost gave up writing for a while.

All the books written by Xiaoju (Nine Tails Night) were on Sanjiang, and this book that Xiaoju thought she had improved her level and better content was not available, but Sanjiang couldn't get it.

Xiaoju almost thought that she could no longer write books and felt good about herself.

Fortunately, with the support of my brothers, this book without Sanjiang made a counterattack all the way. At its peak, it was only a few dozen of them that were ordered from 20,000 yuan.

This achievement is rare among fan members, and Xiaoju is quite satisfied.

However, although the results were beyond expectations, Xiaoju still felt a little regretful about this book.

This book is Xiaoju’s first book with more than three million words. For Xiaoju, a newcomer, there are really many, one book is more than the first two books combined.

Due to lack of experience in long serialization, many problems arose during the writing process.

There are three who have impressed Xiaoju.

The plot of the Rain Country Ninja Master, fighting Uchiha Madara, and four parallel world battles.

The Country of Rain is a big plot that implements the main line and plays an important role in this book, but due to various complex reasons, it failed to show the effect Xiaoju wanted.

There are many reasons, but in my opinion, there are two main problems.

One is the protagonist's character, and the other is that there is no writing experience in this area, which leads to empty content and lack of tension.

If the latter wants to expand in detail, it is really not enough for a few thousand words, so let me talk about the character design.

At the beginning, I imagined that Mu Yue was just a graduate who knew human nature and had no special ambitions. Because a person traveled to another world, he would feel fear and loneliness, and thus became a self-interest who did not have much emotion. .

But as the protagonist of Xiaoju who likes the reunion plot, can Mu Yue always be such a person?

Obviously, not.

In the plot I designed, Mu Yue initially contacted the disciples just greedy for their rewards, and wanted to win the rewards and then become strong and save her life.

But while getting along, Mu Yue moved her sincere feelings, and her mentality gradually changed, and she wanted to protect these disciples from the bottom of her heart.

Mutual redemption is the theme I set up for my disciples and the protagonists.

Mu Yue changed the tragic life of the disciples, and the disciples used sincerity to heal a lonely time traveler who quickly closed his heart.

Although Xiaoju has a good idea, she actually wrote it up, and it is difficult.

In the early stage, because the protagonists were all acting for profit, many people commented that they were not worthy of being a teacher and were too selfish. Or too dark or something.

This was the first time Xiaoju was criticized for writing a book, and she was stunned. In addition, her grades were not good at that time, so Xiaoju could only try to reduce her shaping in this area.

Then the character change made a mistake, and the plot of the Ninja Ninja is immediately followed by problems.

In Xiaoju Outline, Mu Yue's mentality change is very important. After completing mutual salvation with his disciples, Mu Yue no longer looks at the ninja world from the perspective of a time traveler, and no longer looks down on the ninja world from the perspective of an outsider.

Only in this way can Mu Yue feel the cruelty of the torture world more deeply, recall the education he received, the great man he respected, and finally decided to change the torture world and make the torture world peaceful.

One mistake made the Ninja Master of the Rain Country pull his hips. But this is still an important plot that runs through the main line. Xiaoju can only delete the plot of the Rain Country as much as possible to keep reading.

It is precisely for this reason that Xiaoju has always had the idea of ​​writing an extra chapter of Mu Yue without gold fingers, which makes Mu Yue's image more full.

Instead of the old man of some disciple, he has no emotional tasks and cameras.

The problem of fighting Uchiha Madara is not as serious as Master Ninja, but it is not that good, not bad.

The reason why I was impressed is that Uchiha Madara is the core boss of the main world. She paved the way for a long time, but she only wrote a mere 27,000 words and was killed.

Many readers say that it is sloppy and that it is too easy to die, the content is not rich enough, and the emotions are not fully released.

Xiaoju reflected on it afterwards and it was indeed the case, and the content could be richer.

The reason for this is not only because of writing problems, but also because I am easily influenced by comments.

When most of the comments say that they will kill the villain as soon as possible, Xiaoju will subconsciously speed up the progress. There are both good and bad points in this. The advantage is that it is easy to know what readers want to see. The disadvantage is that problems are easy to have problems. After all, readers are not professional authors, and they are prone to misjudgments if they are not firm in their own ideas.

I hope Xiaoju can be an author who can absorb opinions and strengthen his own ideas in the future.

As for the four battles in parallel worlds, in my opinion, it is the same regret as the Ninja Master of the Rain Kingdom, and it is even bigger.

Unlike the ninja master, it runs through the main line. The original intention of the four battles in parallel worlds is to have fun. It is fun to fight the boss who is not fighting and is more operational.

And unlike the plot of the Country of Rain, which was criticized from the beginning, the parallel world started well, and everyone was praising it as interesting as they imagined, and there was no problem to say that it was high.

However, due to Xiaoju's poor mental state at that time, and the outline I wrote before did not check it carefully, a major problem that Xiaoju did not expect, eventually turned into a high and a low end.

The biggest conflict in the parallel world that exists at present mainly lies in the strength of the protagonist.

The protagonist and Obito and the others arrived together, and even the six paths of Obito and the six paths could not come out, so they would clean up all in just a few seconds.

But in the outline, coming to the parallel world is to fight for the bosses that are not available in the main world, such as Otsutsuki Kaguya and the Six Path Madara.

So the protagonist can only come out at the end, otherwise the outline will be announced and sent out.

If it were just to change the outline, Xiaoju would be willing to spend more time, but the problem is that when Xiaoju realized this, the progress of the parallel world had reached one-third and could not make major changes.

No mistakes, one song, one content, one in 6, one book, one bar, one reading!

Xiaoju could only continue writing with a tough bullet.

At that time, every time I opened the chapter and read the review the next day after writing, Xiaoju had to spend more than twenty minutes to brew before she had the courage to click.

At that time, Xiaoju, who had poor psychological tolerance, really wanted to uninstall Qidian and the writer assistant.

But it won’t work if you don’t read it. There are already problems, and it’s easier to have big problems if you write it alone.

After writing the parallel world, Xiaoju thought a lot, and the most thought was how to write about the four battles that were more fun.

In the end, Xiaoju felt that it might be better not to write about those six-level levels.

Because the battle is too tight, the characters can't even chat.

But this is the scene of a cruel war, so you can't stop fighting and chatting.

If you do it again, Xiaoji will focus on the interaction between characters such as Double Obito and Kakashi.

As for the bosses, if you don’t fight, don’t fight. In fact, it doesn’t make much sense. There is no need to sacrifice plot for the boss.

In addition, although the main line is completed, this book will not end yet. Xiaoju will write some extras next.

In addition to supplementing the main line content, there are also some extras that are independent of the main line. Let’s roughly make a list here.

Extra:

1. If line without system

This time, Mu Yue has no plug-ins. Will he still have intersections with Obito and the others, and what actions will he take?

2. Obito travels through the original world.

Obito woke up and suddenly found himself traveling to a parallel world alone.

"Since there is no Mu Yue Immortal in the parallel world, then I will become Mu Yue Immortal here!"

3. If line of Mu Yue was killed by Yin

For unknown reasons, Mu Yue died in the battle with Uchiha Madara, and Nohara Lin was also taken away by Uchiha Madara.

The disciples gradually had differences in their ideas and eventually parted ways.

Some people want to resurrect Mu Yue at all costs and return to the good times, while others think that they should inherit Mu Yue's will and move on with Mu Yue's expectations.

(It won't return to the original line)

4. Supplementary extras to the main line.

This is quite a lot, very complicated, and there will be the future life of the protagonist group, as well as the content of the next generation of Naruto when they grow up.

I basically write the extras that Xiaoju mentioned before.

If you have any interesting inspiration or extras you want to watch, you can leave a message, and Xiaoju can absorb it at your discretion.

(End of this chapter)