No Way People Find Cultivation Difficult, Right?

　　 The first question is first.

　　 The protagonist is a bit naive, and did not write the image I want to express. At the same time, it may be a problem in the later period of the writing. It is easy to write a lot of things that should not be written, which leads to poor plot coherence and weakened sense of expectation of the plot!

The protagonist's talents in Chapter 9 are revealed. In order to suppress the plot, the dark night deliberately drags it, causing the reader to be very unhappy, and the sense of expectation is instantly weakened. Although some readers say that it is acceptable, the book is written for the public. Many authors in the industry helped me read it, and asked an editor to help me carefully review the manuscript, and they gave consistent opinions.

　　 The second problem is that the supporting role writes more scenes than the protagonist.

　　 This may be because I wanted to establish a good personality, but I got into a misunderstanding. After realizing it, I decided to correct both of these issues.

　　Book has been signed.

　　 plus the current pen name is a bit famous.

　　 So there is no **** running away.

　　 Please rest assured, my readers.

　　 is nothing more than trying to be better. After all, the second book is more important than the first.

　　 will be restored to 50,000 words within two days as much as possible.

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　　 Discussion posts, if you want to say something, you can talk about it here, and talk about some shortcomings.

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