Paradise of Infinity

It happens rarely that I stumble upon a series of lemons to write spanning across multiple chapters and even rarer is for the same thing to happen in not one but two fanfics simultaneously lol. To be honest, I may just take a break from all the lemon writing that happened all this week in the patron updates... I hope I haven't disappointed others greatly

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I've honestly been meaning to leave a review for this story, but something always seemed to come up, but here goes. [Writing Quality: 5/5] Spelling, grammar, punctuation, & text spacing are all near perfect with very few mistakes or areas to nitpick making reading very pleasant. [Story Development: 5/5] The plot is steady without feeling slow and each chapter offers some form of progression. Whether that progression is plot sided, character growth, or relationship advancement between characters. [Character Design: 5/5] Author tastefully increased the ages of the ATLA cast by pushing back Aangs reappearance a few years. The characters aren't 1 dimensional and have logical reasons for their actions. [Update Stability: 5/5] Author sticks to their stated release time frame & even releases an extra chapter on occasion. [World Background: 5/5] Author made the MC's 'homeworld' a combination of the reality mixed with various romance & H-manga that im more interested in for reasons of culture. Author also does a good job with handling the world building of ATLA in a timeline where Aang woke up late so im also eager for the plot to advance to see how its handled. Anyway, thats all from. This story is definitely worth your time and highly suggest giving it a try.

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I'm sure I'll love this book as it's a rewrite of my most favorite fanfic as it's a rewrite it's even better so let's see how it goes ........

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This is a modified, better version of GC:EHG. Its awesome, and is a must read for anyone. I loved it and believe me you will too. Well it unfortunate that previous version got banned but now rewrite is going to be even better. Thank you author-san!

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Seeing how this a rewrite, i just hope the other charcter that he pick up on his travel will have more a interactive role after they leave their original world.

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5 stars from me, because it is the improved version of one of my favorite fanfic tops, as the MC, the FMC, the background plot, the worlds, is really well thought out, of course there may be small improvements, but still I feel really happy to read this work and also improved!

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The best harem FF I have ever read. The interaction of the characters is so real that it makes me admire your work. Stick with this amazing FF.

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