Naruto: The village was on the verge of bankruptcy, and I struck oil.

(?_?*).

What a bizarre name!

My arms are not as long as my legs.

I'm a bit confused.

It is also the black soil of literary young women.

"Sir, what are you writing?"

Mu Feng: "The story of Princess Altair descending upon the world, creating chakra, and bringing ninjutsu to the world."

The more attributes Altair has, the stronger he becomes.

Mu Feng thought to himself, "Why don't I write one myself?"

They directly attributed ninjutsu, chakra, and the like to Altair.

When Kaguya or the Otsutsuki clan arrive, they will discover that there truly is a God of Ninjutsu who has developed 99999999 kinds of ninjutsu, and a God of Chakra who is the progenitor of chakra.

Mu Feng was quite satisfied with the novel he had painstakingly written.

"Look quickly!"

"Give me some advice."

Left with no other choice, Heitu had to grit his teeth and keep watching.

It ended after flipping through about ten pages.

Heitu: "Is it that short?"

Mu Feng: "It's a bit short, but tell me if it looks good or not."

The black soil is of a pure color.

"Sir, do you want to hear the truth or a lie?"

Mu Feng also became serious.

"Of course it's the truth."

"Do not worry."

"Just tell me, I won't lay a hand on you."

Hei Tu then launched a swift and furious rebuttal.

"We won't talk about the short parts."

Mu Fengˋ?

Can we please not use the word "short"?

The text is profound and complex.

You can describe it as essence or concentrated.

Heitu: "First of all, your book title is no good."

Mu Feng: "What's wrong?"

Heitu: "First: Why did you choose so many book titles? Who taught you that?"

Mu Feng muttered to himself.

This is not a test book title.

Then we'll try to fool as many people as we can.

Heitu: "Secondly, you see that best-selling books all have four characters in their titles, such as 'Intimate Paradise,' 'Intimate Violence,' and 'Intimate Tactics.' Only four-character titles can become popular."

"Your name is so long and weird, you'll never become famous."

Bathed in the wind.

⊙▽⊙

I never expected you to be this kind of person.

How many volumes have you read?

Black soil opens its mouth

Immediately.

⊙﹏⊙‖°

She quickly waved her hand.

"I haven't seen it, I really haven't seen it."

"Sir, please don't misunderstand."

"I'm not that kind of person."

Mu Feng: "No misunderstanding, no misunderstanding, I'm not that kind of person."

Hei Tu blushed and changed the subject.

"Secondly, your novel has a lot of typos and missing words. Points will be deducted."

Mufeng~('o︵o`)~.

I type too fast.

His thinking is too unrestrained.

That's not good either.

"Third, look at the numbers you wrote inside, they're absolutely ridiculous and completely illogical. How can a 120-meter-long piece of iron only weigh three tons?"

Mufeng

('Д｀)y━?~~

What were my thoughts when I wrote that?

forget.

Haha.

Next item.

"Fourth, look how boring the fight scenes are. The protagonist is invincible. Look, every time he sees someone, he shouts out a skill, and the enemy falls down."

"From beginning to end, no one can last more than two seconds in front of the protagonist."

"This is too fast, too predictable."

"And you never kill anyone, how can you feel good or show off if no one dies?"

"Do you understand 'upgraded killing and looting'?"

"If you really can't do it, you can write it with some color."

Do you know what's most important in writing a novel?

Mufeng (^_^)?

"What is it?"

Heitu is very serious.

"Of course, it's because the story is interesting, suspenseful, and engaging."

"After reading it, the reader will have a certain feeling."

Mu Feng: "How does it feel?"

Heitu couldn't really say what he felt.

She gave an analogy.

"Just like when I read the story of 'Make-Out Paradise,' I might forget what the characters look like, their height, what they do, and their lines."

"But the heart-pounding feeling lingered in my mind after I finished reading it."

Mu Feng: "Is that feeling warm? Will I need to get up to drink water at night?"

Hei Tu glared at Mu Feng with murderous intent.

Painful Sky Document Bag.

Mufeng

|д?)っ.

"Oh dear, everyone agreed not to fight!"

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"In short, your kind of weird novel will never be popular."

"You've mixed robots, telekinesis, magic, and Devil Fruits all together. Aren't you afraid of it collapsing?"

"Do you know what kind of impression your writing gives to people?"

Mu Feng: "How does it feel?"

Heitu: "It feels like I've been shot in the head."

"Furthermore, as is widely known, ninjutsu was passed down from the Ninja Clan."

"No one will read your novels that challenge common sense."

"Just give up on that idea."

Black Soil advised Mu Feng.

Mu Feng let out a long sigh.

I really don't have the talent of a novelist.

Falling down doesn't even count.