Elves: starting from the different color Lalulas

Regarding the daily life, it mainly focuses on the daily communication between Xu Qiansu and Cattleya, which are all dialogues, with occasional benefits mixed in, but more of them are a lot of inexplicable expressions and movements, which many people find inexplicable, confused, and weird .

This is what I did on purpose. I didn't deliberately write it inexplicably, but deliberately wrote the emotional drama in a subtle and euphemistic way.

Xu Qiansu, Ma Li, and Cattleya are all smart, quick thinking, and keen observation skills... It is similar to Miss Hui Ye's "Psychological Warfare in Love between Genius Boys and Girls", except that I didn't write happy love comedies, but It is reflected in their words and deeds.

As far as the relationship between Xu Qiansu and Cattleya is concerned, many of Xu Qiansu's words are subtle and euphemistic.

Let me give you a very straightforward example that I have written in the text for your understanding.

Feng turned into Cresselia, which made Cattleya fall into a sweet dream. Xu Qiansu cared about Cattleya, but said, "As Pokémon, Xanadu and the others always make me feel more at ease in terms of safety."

The logic of this sentence is that you and the Pokémon are in a dream - the Pokémon are not as weak as you - he doesn't have to worry too much about the Pokémon - but you are weak, I am afraid that you will act The spiritual body cannot afford a dream.

And Cattleya was well aware of Xu Qiansu's implicit statement, so she felt relieved, and thought to herself, even if he cared about herself, he wouldn't say it so bluntly, he would only use this implicit statement.

Yes, implicit, these two words carried through Xu Qiansu and Cattleya's love from beginning to end, carried out almost every word Xu Qiansu said to Cattleya, and occasionally said a few straightforward words that were close to Cattleya It was also Cattleya who forced Xu Qiansu to say it by means of words and tricks... This is why Cattleya often smiles like a 'winner'.

Give another example.

Beili Town was assassinated, Xu Qiansu asked after touching Ye Zi, "...you don't read my mind anymore?"

This sentence was hinting at Cattleya. He already knew that Cattleya killed the two of them. He hoped that Cattleya could tell him anything, without hiding it.

"If I want to study, I can study. Besides, sincerity is often mutual. If you are willing to treat me sincerely, I will naturally not read your heart every time." Cattleya blinked before explaining... This is the original text .

Cattleya guessed from Xu Qiansu's reaction that he found something tricky, but she couldn't be sure, but she didn't dare to read her mind. It was similar to self-evasion... because she didn't want Xu Qiansu to die for Zhulan at the moment, she herself didn't want to die for Zhulan. Constantly struggling, she hoped that Xu Qiansu could find out the problem by herself and live on. At that time, Cattleya would have nothing to say and accept her fate calmly.

The reason why she mentioned sincerity is because she and Xu Qiansu had talked about sincerity when they were at the seaside villa, and said that they should treat each other with sincerity, but at this moment, Xu Qiansu guessed Cattleya's secret, but didn't tell Cattleya. No matter how sincere, Cattleya has never been sincere from beginning to end... so full of irony and self-deprecation.

This kind of conversation with deep meaning has always been there since the two came to Xicui.

At the same time, this implicitness is also reflected in the plot arrangement.

Compared with other web articles in this volume, there is one thing that has to be mentioned, that is... the male protagonist has a very low presence.

During the time in Xicui, Xu Qiansu basically didn't do anything special.

What would happen if the other elven writers came to Xicui when their heroines came to Xicui?

In front of the Galaxy team, Pearl team, King Kong team and others, pretend to slap the face, push the "kings" one by one, subdue them, or seize the power of the slate in their bodies as golden fingers, and finally unite with the space-time gods , defeat Giratina's conspiracy, get Arceus' friendship, get some golden fingers, and finally sublimate the theme, humans and Pokémon begin to understand and tolerate each other under the interference of the male protagonist...

The details of the plot may be different, but the general direction must remain the same.

The male lead in their novels will achieve great things in the Xicui area and leave a name in history. At the same time, after completing this dungeon, his strength will be greatly improved.

Even if I use my plot to write it, Xu Qiansu should have met by chance, and then joined forces with Ma Jiamu, Xingye and others who were forced away by Chiri, to completely uncover Chiri's conspiracy in Zhuqing Village, and slapped him in the face severely , and then let the bad woman regret for life, and finally unfold a story about how Xu Qiansu helped humans and Pokémon to coexist peacefully...

But I didn't write any of these. It's not that I didn't think of it, but I did it on purpose.

In Chapter 66, Cattleya once asked Xu Qiansu if she wanted to do a big business in Xicui.

Xu Qiansu replied at the time, "I will be satisfied if I can find the Pokémon safely and return to modern times smoothly." '

Yes, that's why.

Xu Qiansu just wants to find the Pokémon... In addition, there is a little attempt, that is, this book is used as a travel note, and I want to portray Xu Qiansu as a pure witness rather than a participant. This is why he often records his experiences. s reason.

At the same time, in Chapter 96, when the bad woman showed her true colors, I mentioned that Xu Qiansu was supposed to accept the award in Zhuqing Village, but he didn't, but went back to find Cattleya directly, which already explained the focus of this volume It's definitely not a fake copy.

Not just this volume, but all the settings, developments, and characters in this book are all for telling stories.

The Canghua chapter just tells the story of Kyuubi waiting for a thousand years just to hear Feng's voice again, Xu Qiansu's gift to Mary who will be thousands of years later, and Soroya.

One of the themes of this volume is that humans and Pokémon understand each other and tolerate each other... I also wrote it, but it is just a metaphor.

Via Sorolla.

Soroya can survive for thousands of years because her race uses resentment as its source of strength and vitality, and her love for Xu Qiansu replaces resentment... Love did not bring her great strength, but only allowed her to survive. It was just seeing Xu Qiansu.

This is my second design, and so far, I think, my best second design.

The research notes at the end of this volume are about the changes of the Zoroya race over the millennia. Their evolution represents the peaceful coexistence between humans and Pokémon... Zoroa is the witness and representative of this history By.

The story of Xu Qiansu and Soroya is the embodiment of mutual tolerance and mutual understanding between humans and Pokémon.

I did not use the conventional way of writing online articles, but used such a short story as a metaphor.

In my opinion, this story and writing method are very atmospheric, subtle and romantic.

At the same time, many people responded that the villains are too immature, and they come to give away their heads one by one, especially Chi Ri.

This is also what I did on purpose, after all, in my writing, the meaning of the existence of the red sun is to set off Cattleya.

Oh, by the way, it is also in Chapter 96 "The Bad Woman Wants to Kill Xu Qiansu". All the descriptions in that chapter are actually to set off the last scene.

Even though Xu Qiansu couldn't see Cattleya, Cattleya took a breath and told Xu Qiansu that she was still there.

I also think this paragraph has a sense of atmosphere, but most book friends only care that Cattleya is a bad woman hahaha.

If you read this volume and read it again, you should have a different feeling... I won’t give more examples here. To put it bluntly, it will lose its flavor.

Someone here is about to ask, Cattleya is obviously struggling and complicated in her heart, but she can't tell it at all!It didn't show at all!

Except for bad women, you can only see the attribute of a defeated dog.

Is it because you didn't think about it that much at all, and now you say this just to heighten the depth and let us readers make up their own minds! ?

no.

Ordinary novels and anime, in order to highlight the growth of the protagonist, will indeed go through a series of processes such as failure, confusion, and pain, and then make up their minds, accomplish something, and grow.

But Cattleya is not. She is an adult, with quick thinking and clever mind. Even if she has complicated thoughts, she will take action when she should, and she will never be soft.

Regardless of her heart, she is decisive and unambiguous in her actions.

Before she was confused, she acted decisively.

Confused, she still acts decisively.

No more confusion...then don't mention it, and act more decisively.

Compared with the general main characters, Cattleya does not have the plot of "triggering events due to confusion and pain, thus growing up (changing goals/washing white, etc.)"... That kind of character design is too naive for Cattleya .

So she gave herself a psychological hint without hesitation and asked Xu Qiansu to die for Zhulan.

She also committed herself to Xu Qiansu in the reverse world without hesitation, and helped him return to Xicui again.

So when she was rejected by Xu Qiansu in front of the oden cook, she just said "I knew it a long time ago", and there was no other reaction... Of course, I did this on purpose,

However, in order for readers to understand, I still added a lot of narration to draw out Cattleya's complicated mind...but there are still quite a few readers who say they don't understand.

This point is purely because this kind of implicit writing method is not suitable for online texts at all. Most readers just want to read it without thinking about it. Who wants to spend their time thinking about the various meanings of the characters' actions and words in the book?Why is it so tiring to read a novel?

How to write the emotional drama of the characters is simple and easy to understand, how to make it cool and warm.

Therefore, like Xu Qiansu and Cattleya's subtle and euphemistic, full of deep meaning, the vast majority of readers can't understand it, so it's normal to find it boring and boring... But if you don't understand, I understand, you scold Xu Qiansu, Mary, and Cattleya are straight men and straight women, so they scolded me for not knowing how to write emotional scenes, so what?

In the future, I will try to reduce as much as possible such subtle and euphemistic love plots that make people tired and confused.

Try to write about love as simple and understandable as possible. After all, I also have to eat. Using love to generate electricity is really unrealistic.

But I still want a subtle sense of atmosphere.

Xu Qiansu's straightforward confession of "I like Miss Mary" is used in the entire book, and only this time... to reject Cattleya.

Then why did Xu Qiansu reject Cattleya?Can't you just pay them all?

No, because this is a romance novel, not a stallion essay. Xu Qiansu will not accept one after another, nor will he accept girls like collecting achievements and items... Men and women mainly have heart-to-heart communication, and they must have a good relationship.

Xu Qiansu is a principled person. He may be lustful, but he will not do things that break the bottom line. If he likes Mary, he will not date any woman, but he will have a process of becoming a scumbag... Cattleya was the key, the key to his change.

Xu Qiansu lost his memory, so he just had a crush on Cattleya, but Cattleya was still not as good as Miss Mary in his heart... That's why he refused, not flirting with her.

Then why wait until we return to modern times before refusing?Xu Qiansu just throw away Cattleya after using it, right?

no.

Rejection at this moment is for symmetry and blank space.

When they were in Beili Town, the two had eaten oden. At that time, Cattleya asked Xu Qiansu if he liked Mary. Xu Qiansu didn't answer, but just agreed that when they returned to modern times, they must eat oden again.

Back in modern times, when everything was over and the curtain fell, Xu Qiansu answered Cattleya's question in almost the same place.

It is more flavorful to write like this, not because Xu Qiansu used Cattleya.

Those who say that the male protagonist is flirting with every woman, I said, I’m ambiguous, you’re so hot, don’t see a male protagonist who can talk about love and think he is a scumbag, co-authoring the male protagonist can only be dull Fighting Frenzy/Hot-Blooded Youth/Dark Stream and so on, right?

I'm writing love essays, so can't the male protagonist know how to talk about love?

Xu Qiansu was so indifferent to Li Liai before, did you not mention it at all?

……

Some book friends think that I am writing amnesia because I want to write that kind of bloody plot, but in fact it is not at all... One of the purposes of this paragraph is to deepen Xu Qiansu's character design.

He is very smart. Through the book left by Sorolla, the lost 2 minutes of memory, etc., he guessed that Cattleya must have paid a considerable price to him, and must have sacrificed a lot of things.

So although he didn't love Cattleya, he decided to love her.

That's why I said that this plot is not about chasing husbands and crematoriums.

Xu Qiansu and Cattleya, from the moment Xu Qiansu made up his mind to love her...these two have become.

In the character column, I wrote that Xu Qiansu and Cattleya are lovers.

Regarding the arrangement of the love drama in the future, I will not reveal much at the moment.

When I wrote the chapter "Silver Moon and the Incarnation of Sweet Dreams", I knew from the beginning that Cresselia was Maple. I thought it was romantic and sad for this episode, so sad that when I was writing it, I was so sad. I can't hold back every time, and I write for a while... At that time, I made up my mind, no matter what, I must give Xu Qiansu, Mary, Cattleya and other heroes and heroines a happy ending.

They must be happy!

In addition, there is also Kyurem’s tragic fate for Cattleya. Many book friends still don’t understand what it is. After all, I don’t mention it very positively, and I explain it in Cattleya’s tone.

Now let me be blunt.

In fact, from the very beginning, fate has come.

Cattleya, in fact, never had a happy day.

Trapped by super powers since childhood, the most common thing to do is to sit alone in the room and stare at the high blue wall.

Her rare source of happiness is bamboo orchid.

After controlling the superpower, Zhulan's life and death weighed heavily on her heart again.

After finding a way to keep Zhulan alive, she truly fell in love with Xu Qiansu again.

She wanted Zhulan to live, but she didn't want Xu Qiansu to die, so Zen Jing thought hard and sacrificed herself.