Collapse: Chasing Fire Studio

That man seems to be...

Then…………

The two of them seem to be still talking about the topic of liking perverts...

And the most frightening thing happened, even though he had restrained his breath as much as possible, the man still noticed something, and raised his head to meet his gaze...

? ? ? ? ? ?

There was no shame or anger on the man's delicate and fair face, and there was even a gentle and kind smile on it...

Hua swallowed his saliva, his body was so cold... High, master! ! ! !Such a pervert must be a master! ! !

And then... the man slowly raised a hand, as if he wanted to greet her. ? ?

At the critical moment, Hua Qiang's mental power finally regained control of his body under fear, and he ran wildly, wildly, wildly, wildly all the way...

"Oh? Captain, what's the matter?"

"Eh... I, I don't know too well..."...

Chapter 42 Alicia Carvin

"Oh~~~ No way~~This~~Forget it..."

Beside the desk in the bedroom, Alicia was wearing a set of pink silk pajamas, with a thin blanket draped over her round shoulders.

With her slender fingers resting lightly on the keyboard of the notebook, she looked at the few lines of black letters on the top of the computer screen with a sad face, feeling a sense of frustration that she had more energy than she wanted.

From time to time, I typed a few lines, then deleted them, typed a few more lines, and then deleted them again...just like this over and over again, the final progress is still zero.

Calvin is gone. . . . . . .

huh~~~

Exhaling, I picked up the mug on the desk, and took a sip of the slightly scalded corn juice that I just squeezed~~ It was silky, fragrant and sweet, and my whole body felt warm after half a cup.

It's a pity that there are no chestnut cakes and mung bean cakes in stock at home...

I recalled the various cakes I ate in Yunshen when I was a child, and my heart couldn't help but saliva began to secrete in my mouth unconsciously...

"Captain,,?^?,,! Don't sit next to me! I can't even type properly!"

Alicia also smelled the smell of corn juice. She looked up and saw my leisurely appearance, her brows were wrinkled, and her red lips were pouty, feeling very upset.

. . . . . .I'm a little confused|??"), but after thinking about it, I still sat still.

"?(? "??)?, Captain, why are you still sitting here!go away go away! "Alicia pushed my shoulder angrily, feeling like looking for trouble...

"Eh(?++"), if I'm sitting here, if Ellie can't type, it can be said to be my reason.But if I still can't code out after I leave, then it can only be your own fault. ? "

Don’t lie to yourself about some things |??”), for example, if you don’t do well in a test, you will be scolded for your bad test papers, and if you can’t find a girlfriend, you will be scolded for being lacking in others.

I took another sip of the corn juice slowly, and while I was talking, I helplessly comforted her little back.

"Ai Li, it's fine if you can't write it, don't worry."

"(╥╥") Huh, but the manuscript will be handed in the day after tomorrow..."

"..." I froze for a moment, and abruptly stuck the comforting words in my throat, comforting your conscience is a bit difficult.But I wanted to say a few sarcastic remarks, but I was afraid of making Alicia unhappy.

"Ai Li, please code earlier next time, don't keep procrastinating until the end."

"?(? "??)?, Captain, you don't understand!One person, one night, one computer, one miracle.If you don't force yourself, you will never know how strong you are!Cute girls can do anything! "

"|??"), are you forcing it out now? "I'm speechless. How come your statement is exactly the same as a child's homework? Are you still stubborn at this time? Tomorrow after tomorrow, how many tomorrows will there be?"

"(ノД"), no, Alicia is almost killed. . "

"|??"), I think you have been holding back for quite a long time, so don't rush to code, let's think about it first. "

"(ノД"), why not! "

"|??"), then I will help you.Then I ask you to answer on the line. "

"Oh? ⊙⊙"

"The first question, which part of the beginning, development, climax, and ending are you coding now?"

"(?O?) Development."

"Have you thought about the climax yet?"

"Well... almost..."

"Is the beginning part confirmed?"

"Are you sure, if you want to change it, you can change it|?? ")"

"Second question, do you want to express any truth in this chapter you are coding now?"

"(??), think about it, mainly to reflect the institutionalized impact of the environment on people."

"Institutionalization.? You mean the co-existence dependence of people on the environment in "The Shawshank Redemption"?"

"Well, from hatred to habit, from habit to dependence, so that in the end, I can only pin my life on a high wall."

"And how does that end? Are you going to write about surrendering to the wall, or breaking the wall?"

"(?.?v?."), break the high wall and start a new life, cute girls can't write too sad things. "

"The climax and the ending are going to be written together?"

"Well, almost."

"Okay. Ellie, let me sort it out for you." I closed my eyes lightly, touched my chin, and went through the whole train of thought in my mind first.

"The narrative of this type of novel should be based on the character's thought arc as the main line."

"What you just said is also very clear. From hatred to habit, from habit to dependence, these should be supporting roles, that is, the arc of thought of normal people. As the special character of the protagonist, the emotional line should be from hatred to adaptation, from adaptation to numbness, from numbness to remorse, and finally break down the high wall and start a new life."

"However, the lines I provide here are more literary and artistic, and I guess you don't want to write about the kingly theme, Ellie."

"Then in addition to breaking down the high wall in the final climax, the three emotional turning points from hatred to adaptation, from adaptation to numbness, and from numbness to repentance can also be used as a small climax."

"Among the three small climaxes, the turning point from numbness to remorse is the most important transition, and it is also an important manifestation of the protagonist's particularity. You have to describe it well, and it is best to foreshadow from the beginning."

"Emotional themes pay attention to circumflexion. The theme tone of the first half must be gray. You must grasp this well. You must wait until the high wall is broken later to reflect the tension of the article. Of course, in order to increase the interest, you can also write some interesting daily life in the first half, but it should be moderate, too much."

"The transition from numbness to remorse after that, does the captain have any suggestions?" Alicia thought.

"Generally speaking, for a subject like this, the author will portray the role of a guide at the very beginning to help the protagonist integrate into the new environment and form a series of bonds in it. Then, as the plot progresses step by step, the death of this character will be used as the cornerstone to complete the final sublimation of the protagonist's inner world."

"(??д?"), wouldn't this be a bit too sharp, it doesn't feel like Alicia's style? "

"(???) Ahem, Ellie, I don't write many novels myself, and what I say can only be used as a reference for you. Academic research methods are all about extracting experience from previous successful cases, and there are few innovations of their own. To put it bluntly, they are routines and poor imitations. We like to organize the original messy things into a unified process, reduce the burden of thinking and clarify the direction. This is the advantage of systematic literature, but it is also flawed."

"Lu You, a poet of the Song Dynasty, once said: Articles are made by nature, and you can get them by chance. Of course, Ai Li can support her writing style, but as a boyfriend, I would like to remind you a little..."

"The day after tomorrow is the deadline."

"Woooo(╥╥"), I got it, I got it, I just wrote it according to the routine first, I must think about it next time..."

"Come on, the routine is old, but it is still a good article to be able to tell a good story. Tomorrow I happen to have something to go out, and Ellie can code it at home with peace of mind. I will make breakfast, and you can order a takeaway at noon, and see the arrangement for dinner. If there is a dinner, I will let you know in advance."

"(?o?o?) What's the matter, it's a rare Sunday, why don't you just leave Alicia alone at home~"

"(?++"), Gracie, I'm going to Changkong School for the matter of entering a higher school. It happens that we have a holiday on Sunday but the high school is still in class, and their admissions director is also at the school. "I smiled and touched Ellie's head, didn't you think I was annoying just now?

"Code well, go eat delicious food on Sunday, and reward you."

"Okay(.??.)ノ?, then the captain will do things with peace of mind, and Alicia will work hard!"

Chapter 43 The Brilliance of Human Nature

Changkong No. 671 Middle School is located in Changkong City, Hunze Province, surrounded by mountains and rivers. It is affiliated to the Changkong City Education Bureau and is a first-level characteristic model high school in the province.Covering an area of ​​14.3 mu, with a construction area of ​​51 square meters, it is a modern garden school with all kinds of modern venues and multi-functional halls.There are 2800 classes, more than 210 students, and more than [-] teachers.

Even in the entire province of Hunze, Changkong No. 90 Middle School can be regarded as one of the top five high schools, with excellent teaching quality, comprehensive development of morality, intelligence, physical education, art and labor, and a bachelor's degree rate as high as [-]%. …………

"Hello, we do not allow foreign vehicles to enter the campus."

The middle-aged man's breath is heavy, and he wears a set of clean and tidy security uniforms on his burly body. There is a kind of soldier's determination in his gestures and gestures.Although the words were polite, the tone was full of oppression.

I lowered the car window, and I didn't talk nonsense. I took out a small badge from the pocket of my coat. The badge was the military emblem of the Huang Kingdom. It had a dark blue jade background. On it, two flowers of the other shore intertwined and bloomed. One was pure white and the other was red and black. The bottom part of the badge represented the military rank:

Between two golden pine leaves, a red gold star shines.

"One Star Major General of the Northern Military Region"

. ? ? ? ?

Uncle Security was obviously stunned for a moment, but after reacting, he immediately stood in a standard military posture.

"Ninth Division of the Eastern Military Region, fifth battalion, eighth company, and ninth platoon in Ningzhen! I have met the major general!"

"Well, where is the office of your school leaders?"

"Back to Major General! Go straight along the road, the first building after crossing the bridge!"

"Okay, hard work."

"No hard work! Major General, go slowly!"

Slightly nodding my head, I followed the instructions of the security guard and continued to drive towards my destination.Although the military regions are different, the name of the major general is still common.

It seems that it is the end of get out of class time, and there are many students gathered in twos and threes on the school road.The lower grades basically wear uniforms, while the upper grades are relatively casual, and many of them wear their own clothes, but they don't see the strange ones with dyed or permed hair, and they all feel relatively young and young.

Probably because the car brand "Xingyuan" is relatively rare, many students stopped and looked at the extraordinarily aggressive appearance of this off-road vehicle, and at the same time were curious about who the people on board were.

what character?

I smiled helplessly, and put the military emblem awarded by grandma into my pocket.

There are many empty positions in the major military regions. For example, my rank as a major general is purely a name. Not to mention power, I don’t even have a soldier. It’s purely to scare outsiders.

But this is not something everyone can take.

There are clear rewards and punishments for the fleet, and behind this military emblem... many people died. …………

Because of the speed limit on campus, I drove more slowly. By the way, I took a look at the teaching environment of Changkong No. [-] Middle School.

To be honest, it is very beautiful. There is a big lake in the middle of the school. The lake is clear and sparkling. A spacious white stone bridge is built on the lake. There is a small artificial island beside the stone bridge. There is a small red tree on the island, which seems to be a rare species.

I drove on the stone bridge. In front of me was the teacher’s office building, and further ahead were dormitories. Behind the dormitories were continuous mountains, covered by clouds and fog, and only the lower part of the mountain was exposed. The mountainside The above part is hidden in the faint white mist, which has the taste of a fairyland.